AquariusGuy
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be prepared to beat @Wesley8890 for first read and comment.
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Well I am just about at a nice cliff so keep them eyes peeled
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Just wait for the twist coming... I am writing the new chapter which I may or may not post it tonight
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TJ’s been through hell now it’s Jackson’s turn. Things will be turned further on their head soon. You can count on that 😂
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Well I haven’t killed anyone off yet that you all love… so don’t poke the bear 😂 No flashback maybe a flash from a hot doctor? A flash mob? A camera flash? A flash bang?
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Something else is afoot with him…..
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It’s my job 🙃
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TJ’s POV We were having a good time when we all heard a horn and screeching tires. “Dad” I heard Tristan call out as I dropped my cup and ran to the front yard with Jackson trailing behind. Out in the street we saw a car with Tristan laying on the hood. “Call 911!” I shouted running over to the car with tears in my eyes “Tristan” “You know him” the driver of the car said looking at Jackson and I “Yes, he’s our son” Jackson said while I was trying to check Tristan
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The twins were lashing out but more to come on that. he was hit by a car… more on that tomorrow say around 11 am est 😉
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Thanks... I am almost done 13... trying to decide which cliff to drive off.
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Yes he will and he was in this story I know how much ya'll hate me... I get daily reminders.
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They are spoiled rich boys.... just wait Mama Romero is not going to let it happen again. Tristan would never do that to me... he loves that I'm bringing his story to life.
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TJ’s POV “You look like a friend of ours” I said shocked at his resemblance “My cousin’s son Cam” Al laughed “When we are together people seem think he’s my son” “How come he didn’t come work with you?” Jackson curiously asked “My cousin kept his family away from ours as his kids got older” Al sadly replied “He hated my father and by extension the rest of us” “Why did he hate your father?” I asked “Well my father was the youngest but also the most successful of the
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Chapter 11 is in the works... we are going finally see the lunch date with Tristan and the twins
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That it lose body parts or functions 🤣
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I wasn't using a weegie board so I'm pretty sure it was the real Ron... Maybe? Perhaps? Did I imagine it
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yeah I've had a spark of inspiration... it started with a conversation with Ron (the real on not the dead one...) Hunter I decided needed a story line and he will have an interesting path.
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He sure did... except not my dad.
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TJ’s POV I teleported outside and watched as the children had Emma trapped “You won’t get away with this” Emma screamed as the kids keep the circle and were in an intense chant “Why did you do this” I shouted at Emma and she cackled “Why do you think? He destroyed my life” I had forgotten how Tristan destroyed her house and she must have been bottling up this anger for a while. As I stood there Hunter appeared and it seemed to surprise the others but they kept going “Hi
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Yeah kind of left her hanging since the last story.
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Yeah I had an aha moment and knew what I wanted to do. We aren't done with Emma and the next chapter will fill in some gaps. Including a small surprise...and no we aren't raising the dead. One of the other kids steps forward and takes care of Emma and that's not the surprise.
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I did that to jog everyone's memory.
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Truth be told I had forgotten about her and when I was looking for something or someone in the chapters I stumbled across her. The last part of the story was my favorite.
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TJ’s point of view Using teleportation I showed up curbside to a place I hadn’t been in ages and as I looked up the front door opened “For goodness sakes TJ don’t just stand there” Helen said. Now I know where Jack gets that phrase from “Hi Helen” I said as I walked up the path pulling my suit cases “Hello TJ” Beth said from the chair “Stan and Jerry went to the store” “I hope I’m not an inconvenience” I said “Non-sense, you are our grandson” Helen said
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Chapter 149 Don's Return
AquariusGuy commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 149 Don's Return
Don meddle? Oh this is about to get more interesting.- 33 comments
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