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  1. keyisfake

    Chapter 8

    I loved Ethan's nervousness around Galen. Frist days when their right at so cute no matter what age you are. And their first kiss was adorable. Great chapter.
  2. keyisfake

    Chapter 5

    Roger to me is very self-absorbed in work and what his needs are for sex is from Josh. Josh seem to be tolerating him and not questioning Roger's snatch and grab behavior. Roger would have to do something bad right in front of Josh to convinces him to break up. All I see is Roger is a workaholic, a rude flirt, and likes quickies. Just because Josh met someone who gets him doesn't mean he should leave Roger. Which I know this is leading to. Nice job. Won't stop reading.
  3. keyisfake

    Our Song

    While reading this I had butterflies in my stomach and wanted to cry when he pulled out that guitar. Such a wonderful love story. I felt like I was there watching them dance and fall in love. Nice.
  4. keyisfake

    Chapter 4

    I read the reviews above and agree but cheating is a slippery slop with some people. With Galen it was an act of betrayal in his eyes. But what I don't know is did Galen see the red flags and choose to ignore them just like Josh is doing when his friends try to warn him about Roger? Yes Roger sounds like a jerk but something is keeping Josh bound to him. What? When he's with Galen he can't control himself. We all will meet people who we have this draw to. Some we can stop in their tracks and others maybe not. Which makes this all a slippery slop. I been married for 21 years and yes I have met someone who when I'm around them I can't or don't want to say no to. Not any more. I think that is what Josh is going through with Galen or Roger. Even if the relationship becomes violent with either I think Josh still won't walk away. These are only my thoughts and I'm probably wrong. It won't be the first time. I love good chapters that makes me think. And this is one of them. Nice work.
  5. keyisfake

    Chapter 3

    Galen said in one breath that he didn't want to be the other man and then he has his tongue in Josh's mouth and fall on top of him. Josh likes horse but won't ride them. Strange for both men. Galen should be feeling the red flags but he seem to be ignoring them. His cousin needs to give him heads up on this busy boyfriend of Josh. I didn't kiss him and my Spider sense is tingling. I'm confused but will keep reading. I can't wait to meet this boyfriend.
  6. keyisfake

    Chapter 2

    He already has a boyfriend. But the tongue and the touching? What a blow. But I'm feeling something is up with this new guy. I felt it when he found out Galen was gay and he became distant and cold to him. Liam would never bring a homophobe around Galen. I know there's something else about Josh. I need to know. Keep going.
  7. keyisfake

    Chapter 1

    How sad. His first time living alone. But going back to dating after a few weeks of separation? Will he be ready? My break up happened after 7 years of dating and living together and it was hard to date anyone else for a least a year. Well Galen's was only 6 months maybe it will be easier. I hope. I am going to chapter 2 to find out. Nice read!
  8. keyisfake

    Emergence

    I cried and smiled at the same time. Poor Toby--but lucky him for finding such nice people to help him and to fall in love again. Wonderful story. I see why you were honored.
  9. keyisfake

    Divine Love

    I love Geek classics and the words flowed so well. Nice Job.
  10. keyisfake

    That Night

    Such sad word leading to a sad ending. I read it twice. Nicely done.
  11. What a wonderful coming out story. I'm glad it all worked out. I raise my kids to understand that there is nothing they can't tell me. I even told them when they were young when they were showing interest in other people that I wouldn't care if they were straight or gay. So long as the other person makes them happy. Nice letter.
  12. I was writing so much and I finally had the chance to start reading this. Nice work so far. I'm hook and will continue.
  13. A wonderful family in the making can't wait to read the last chapter. Great writing Robert--I mean Uncle Rex.
  14. Aw so sweet another great chapter
  15. You made me cry. I am putty in your hands this was wonderful and of course Joe loves Rex you don't always have to say it. Great one again.
  16. keyisfake

    Revelations

    This story should be on TV making me cry and cheer for them every week. Rex and Joe are amazing with each other. I wish I had a relationship like theirs. Sorry about that. Anyway great work and I truly hope one day you will publish this. You have mad talent. Don't shy away from Amazon self publishing. You already have me for a fan and I would pay.
  17. Joe you are so OFF BALANCE! Wonderful chapter, loved the man sex games and amazing oral. I love these two and want them together. You write the sex scenes so well I felt I was in the room with them. Great work again. Do you have published work out I would love to support you?
  18. keyisfake

    Chapter 1

    Wow your characters and form of words was like flowing water traveling down a bumpy rocky slop. A refreshing wild ride. I love the developing relationship between the two male characters and how coming out after bottling it up for so many years can be a strange but electrifying experience. Well continue to read this one. You have mad talent.
  19. Hello I'm new to the site and have posted my first chapter The Harlequin.
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