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Hi all! Tantalus is a currently-ongoing story of mine with 14 Chapters up so far and more than a hundred reviews by awesome readers who seem to be finding it interesting! It is a science fiction story with M/M romantic elements and some nice and furry alien creatures with telepathy thrown in for good measure. I would like to open this topic in case anybody has any questions regarding the story, and to post a few little-known facts that followers of Tantalus might find enjoyable. Story link: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/albertnothlit/tantalus Ask away! -Albert Nothlit
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Thank you! That is her in a nutshell. Also, your review reads almost like a juicy blurb for the chapter!
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Lol I know! Sometimes I wish I didn't have to go to my daytime job in order to dedicate every possible moment to writing, but alas, one must still pay the bills…
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Thank you very much! It's awesome when I get nice feedback like this, because it makes all the effort worth it.
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The poor furry guys aren't very good fighters, unfortunately.
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Thanks for reviewing! It's going to be action-packed from here on out!
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Chapter 14. Confrontation Rocks snapped and delicate glowing ornaments crumbled under the savage onslaught of the surface Destroyer. I recognized the model. It was a P-13, a planetary assault weapon suit reserved for action in the most hostile environments. Its destructive capability was unparalleled, and there was no pilot inside the transparent canopy that housed the robot's high-definition visual sensors. Its exterior was a burnished shade of dull gray, a titanium-derived alloy that was n
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Thanks for reviewing! It's awesome to hear you enjoyed it The sequel is indeed coming up - I just have to finish Tantalus first, lol.
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Yeah, a lot is riding on Jim's shoulders right now!
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some action-packed chapters are definitely coming!
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I would love to be able to explore an alien planet. I guess it kind of shows, huh?
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We'll get to see just how he uses his new abilities in the near future!
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Thanks, I think the chapter came out that way on its own.
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The next chapter will hopefully give a better idea of their fighting capability!
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Ouais!
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Lol I know, such is the life of story protagonists.
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Thanks! I decided against padding the chapter unnecessarily with extra stuff, although it did come out a bit short. There's more in store, though, that much I can promise!
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Chapter 13. Friends The first thing I noticed was that I could breathe. I opened my eyes, remembering everything instantly. I had been trapped in a nightmare water-filled tube. I hadn't been able to move, or speak. And my body… I sat up as if jolted by a live wire, heart hammering in my chest. I caught fleeting glimpses of a Furball-covered floor, of tall walls around me and of Jim lying nearby, naked like I was, but I blocked everything out. Gingerly, trembling, I brought my hands up to
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I think if I woke up to that I'd freak out even more.
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A furry, fluffy carpet thanks!
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Yeah, we know the Furballs are good, but poor Kyle isn't so sure!
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Thanks! I cannot even begin to imagine what such an experience would be like, but weird dreams are things that sometimes stick with you, even once you're awake.
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Welcome!
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Kyle does have a vein of ungratefulness about him, doesn't he?
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Thank you! I must confess I admire Alexandre Dumas and his episodic storytelling - this is modeled somewhat along those lines!
