It's understandable, and I'm not offended. This was the first time I had ever collaborated with someone in this manner, and I foresaw that problem and tried to keep such scenes at a minimal to tell the story, and I'm sorry it hurt your experience of the story.
But rest assured, it's never happened again. I'm constantly learning, and sometimes that means I hit some rough spots. Thank you for finishing the story anyway.
I'm not always prompt on responding to reviews, but I try my best. . I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and extremely happy that you are reading some of my other work. Thanks for reading!
Scene: Charlie and her father return to their home. The Father, Harry, calls for a family meeting to ask about last night.
Starting Letter: F
Current Letter: V
"Victor, would you please bring me the calendar from the kitchen?" Charlie's mother asked of Charlie and Jeff's younger brother. He nodded and left the room. "Before he gets back, I have to know if your actions had anything to do with sex, Charlie."
The story continues with "The Bearded Bromance". When this story was initially released I was told my a large number of people I had to continue it. I hope you'll check out part 2 as well.
Scene: Charlie and her father return to their home. The Father, Harry, calls for a family meeting to ask about last night.
Starting Letter: F
Current Letter: P
"Pfft..." Charlie spat. "Then I'll just kick harder."
He's scared that his past will catch up to him if they hear the song, and given that Emma showed up, it's a valid concern. But time has a tendency to heal wounds.