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  1. CLJobe

    Chapter 2

    You are right, things are never the same when people who have moved away and returned. Traveling away creates new experiences and returning one brings those experiences with them. You are changed by those experiences, particularly if you are young.
  2. CLJobe

    Chapter 2

    Yes, Marco and Karl can reconnect
  3. CLJobe

    Chapter 2

    I believe that parting was the end of any kind if relationship between Tony and Marco. The break was quick and clean
  4. CLJobe

    Chapter 2

    Yes. number one of three has fallen.
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    Chapter 3

    Sunday after church, Mom rushed us home. I helped to do some tidying up. Dad decided to stay away after he selected the wine. Lunch was sandwiches and salad. Mom said to eat light since we would be having a big dinner. Now light for my mom wasn’t really light, soup, followed by sandwiches and salad. It doesn’t sound heavy until you see the size of the sandwiches. After lunch, I decided to go for a run. I noted the address where the Nissons lived, and I ran in that direction. Running past th
  6. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    Are you falling in love with Marco?
  7. CLJobe

    Chapter 2

    Saturday after practice, "Marco, can we talk?" "Sure, what do you want to talk about?" "Why are you avoiding me? Monday, I went to your house, and your mom said you already left. Vinny had to drive me to school all week. I didn't see you at lunch all week, and Vinny had to come and get me. Why?" "You should ask Vinny. I asked you to pick a date. Instead, you come up with excuses. Then Vinny said to leave you alone, so that is what I'm doing." Tony got up and
  8. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    Tony is intimidated by Vinny that is obvious. I like you comment, it brought a smile to my face
  9. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    There is a question concerning Vinny's attitude. Is he jealous?
  10. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    I think you may have something there. I don't think Vinny likes Marco
  11. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    Yes Tony is the first. For some reason Vinny don't like Marco. Maybe we will have a clue down the road.
  12. CLJobe

    Chapter 1

    How many roads must a man travel to find a home? Marco, with two rejections, knew how many roads he had to travel to find someone to love. They say a third time might be a charm. It just might prove true for Marco. —00-- “Let’s take a shower, and then we can get something to drink. It was a rough practice session.” “I don’t think he pushed this much last year. This tournament must be a big deal for the coach.” “I heard he has an opportunity to head up the ath
  13. CLJobe

    Marco

    The journey of a man to find a special person
  14. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    This was a short story making up for Adam no there is no more
  15. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    Soon, I'll either post tonight or tomorrow morning
  16. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    thanks
  17. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    posting late tonight
  18. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    Thank you. Foe some life might start out with rejection, but I believe there is someone for everyone, if you look. yes, a little heart ache at the beginning
  19. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    I think he has one of the boys who are old enough to drive, driving the bus. It has become a full time job.
  20. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    Jon's love of the sea is part of who Jon is, and that love will add to Roger's life in a positive way.
  21. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    To Jon's delight
  22. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    bad boy. I think Roger has finally happy and not looking for more hotels. He is beginning to realize he has everything he needs. The sea is Jon's love, beside Roger
  23. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    Yes, Roger and Jon are settling down.
  24. CLJobe

    Chapter 13

    On the 5th day, I thought I saw a boat, but it was coming from a different direction. Then I heard the horn, and Jon was waving. By the time they docked, I was there waiting for them. “When we got there, the boat they were selling was in bad shape. We were just about to leave when this older man said he would sell us his boat. So Sven and I checked it out. That is the boat we bought.” “Why did he want to sell it?” “He said he was getting too old to fish, and there wasn’t any money
  25. CLJobe

    Chapter 12

    yes and I think Jon is developing his navy of fishing boats
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