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Hi Carlos! It has been a real pleasure reading this story. The way you have narrated an event and then narrated what lead to it, makes the story more interesting. The description of all the sight seeing, the dives & discovery of the sunk ship with the treasure; exhilarating! Jay being the nutcase arouses passions. I'd love to beat him up. Poor guy! You have given hints on what is to come, good! What about the Tokyo trip? I'm sure exciting things will happen there too! Don't deprive us of that if you can help it & fit it in. Lastly! I'm sad on this having ended as I've thoroughly enjoyed it. I really don't know. This seemed to me a bit different!
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Wow Carlos! What a spin by bringing in the sunken treasure. You make us jealous by the description of the dives and the serene environment. All that is missing are videos of the dives. Loved it!
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That we are certain of but, with all the touring in Cuba and the descriptions; it is really enjoyable. As I had mentioned in my feedback, all your stories are very enjoyable!🤪
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Thanks Carlos! This is one of your stories that I would not like to see end. It is thoroughly enjoying, not that the others are not. But even then.
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Happy birthday Carlos! A wonderful chapter masterly incorporating sightseeing with the intrigue. Thanks.
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Welcome back Carlos with a story which has me salivating for more & fast. An extremely entertaining and good start. Thanks.
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Well! Started with a bang. Eager to know what follows.
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A lovely long chapter. Thanks.
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Thanks Mark, for finally revealing the contents of the will\letter. Absolutely loved the chapter. I think this will bring about a change in George and he will now work for himself and his children. Will give him the strength to take on Caroline. Also, an extended stay at home and further spell of intrigue.
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An interesting & enjoyable chapter. Can't wait for the next.
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Mark, patiently but eagerly await the next chapter. But, what does the will convey? 😤 🤯 😱 😭 All the best for your semester.
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CJ's character is getting stronger & definitive. Very masterly you have given us as to where the series is heading & there is a long till getting there. Many thanks Carlos! Keep on writing and keeping us engrossed.
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Many thanks Mark! The intrigue is just killing. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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What a nice read! Thanks Carlos!
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An exhilarating read! Can't get enough of it! Masterfully planned & written! You Sir, are a fascinating story teller. Thank for a prompt update and to get an equally prompt follow up.
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Welcome back Carlos with another of your wonderful stories. Much awaited
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A fascinating chapter! The spider's web has been cast. It will be very interesting to come to know how Caroline will react and the ultimate outcome keeping in mind her normal intelligence. Mark, Can't wait for the next intriguing chapter. I hope that this series will be as long as your other one. 🤞
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Sated! Got my fix! Hope the wait for the next chapter isn't too long. Many thanks!
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Thanks! Can't wait for the next in the series.
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Wow! An interesting chapter. Can't wait for the next!
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Great chapter! Thanks!
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Absolutely loved the chapter! I wish I could include more them one emoji to appreciate! Please,please keep them coming.
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Happy 2023 Carlos! Welcome back!
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Thanks Carlos! May the saga continues.
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You make us live it ! Thanks.
