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Emi GS

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  1. Thank you so much Aunt Def. I am glad message delivered and you liked it. Thanks for the compliments and thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  2. Why aren't I blushing!? That's very sweet compliment. I am glad I made it right and made it touch your heart. Thanks for reading and reviewing Ben. I really really appreciate it. ~Emi.
  3. Thanks Val. I am glad you liked it. But my cousin still doesn't know that I had written it for her. That's a little sad, but it's fine. I'll present(gift) it to her in the right time. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  4. Thanks tim. Thanks for the wishes. I am glad this little piece touched your heart. ~Emi.
  5. I got happy tears seeing them both. That was a very happy moment for all of our family. A beautiful sight of them smiling. Thank you for lovely words. I appreciate you for reading and reviewing Parker. ~Emi.
  6. Yeah it's really a sweet moment seeing them smiling on their wedding. They look cute. I am glad this tiny poem made you feel the happiness and smiles. Glad you liked it. And thanks for reading and reviewing Lyssa. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
  7. Thanks for the nice words Lisa. I am glad you liked that so little poem. I hope you will like the changes too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  8. Thanks Val. It's good know everyone enjoyed the little poem. But I've added the remaining poem I wanted like before. Hope you'll enjoy. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  9. I am glad you liked the short poem. And I have added the things I wanted to add. Hope you'll like it too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  10. I know the small poems have its blast, but anyway I had added the actions lines I wanted to so hope you'll enjoy the remaining poem too. Thanks for reading and reviewing anyway. ~Emi.
  11. Thank you so much Lisa. It was a great tour, visiting all those places and all. This pond is one I would never forget from the tour. I wish we could plan a tour/trip to roam around the nature and all. Thanks for reading and reviewing Lisa. ~Emi.
  12. Thanks you so much for each and every compliment Val. I really appreciate them. My Haiku, as perfect as you say, is the result of efforts of Ben. He is a good teacher. I am glad you liked and enjoyed reading it. And thank you for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  13. It's not the college, it's a tour conducted by our collage to take students and visit some historical places. On the way we drive past a lake/pond, which is described here. BTW our collage is not that special one. We, the students, made it special. Thanks for reading and reviewing tim. ~Emi.
  14. We have enjoyed a lot. It was a great tour, visiting historical places as well as places that are destined for students particularly. I could never forget that lake/pond. It was a fascinating view. I am glad my poem made you to wish for tagging along. That's a great compliment. Thanks for reading and reviewing Parker. ~Emi.
  15. Thanks Aunt Def. That means a lot. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  16. Actually I was quite sad on this day and Elegy seems to fit for the situation. Lost love always troubles me. Roundabout was my strength. Thank god I agreed to go to the carnival. I enjoyed a lot. Especially, the roundabout. I have always waited for your comments and compliments on my poems. After all you are my teacher, remember! I am glad you enjoyed both the poems. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  17. Thanks to you for that. Your help with the prompts has made me do good on them. Thanks for the nice words Val. I appreciate you for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  18. Thanks for the kind words tim. I appreciate them very much. Thanks for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  19. Awwww, don't make me blush. I meant nothing bad, but I am glad you felt sad. A poet need nothing more than this, making a reader to feel. This was the best compliment ever. I appreciate your efforts, both for reading and reviewing. ~Emi.
  20. I can share the enthusiasm too. But I haven't tried to write another. I was wondering where this poem came from, but for me that is enough. But I might try in future. Thanks for the nice words on it. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
  21. As I said above, I was very much fascinated by the form. And rather enjoyed writing it. I loved Val's too. Thanks for compliments tim. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
  22. Emi GS

    April 1 : Begin

    I love Cinquain very much. I was so happy that it happened to be my first poem. I enjoyed writing it very much. I am glad you enjoyed it. And for the compliments and the wishes...
  23. Emi GS

    April 1 : Begin

    That's definitely a great compliment Parker. I really appreciate your efforts for reading and reviewing...
  24. Where I Proposed Him I sighed. You sprinted towards me as I was waiting for almost half an hour. 'Is it time!?' you ask. 'Its nearly is!' I reply. We walked, hand in hand, as you dragged me to the shore. We stood still, where the waves touched our ankles for we have folded jeans just below the knees. 'Look. There it is.' Your face turned bright with the flowing emotions and that killer smile. As you warned me, I looked as the tiny rays expanded on the surface of the greenish blue water. My
  25. As I checked back my journal, I found out something I had written about some girl I had seen, twice, and fall for her beauty. And I had written some poetry out of it. So I hope you guys will enjoy my Straight side of attractions... 10PM, 25 June '07 It's a Monday, 25th June of 07 A late night, about 10 O'clock. My heart stopped beating for a sec And my soul found a new reason She stands three steps ahead Fascination filled with awe My eyes darted to her honey bro
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