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    It was as natural as we mourn on some loss. When my grand mother died, I was somewhat like this. Not sad. Not happy. Not lost or shocked. Not even numb. It's not means that I don't love her anymore or not gonna miss her. It may be just my way at that time, like some of above said. And it is not abnormal you feel like that. And about families, they have been bound by the society. And their doings will give more accordance to the others rather than ours. And it's not their fault either. So we gotta live with their expectations and all. And it's not like that you don't have to be you. Its all confusing, I know, but we are what we are and that never means we are different.
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    Congratulations Cassie. And thank you so much to all the contributors and the entire team behind the successful anthology...
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    Congratulations buddy. I am very very happy for you.
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    You are hundred percent right Lisa. It's always the inner strength that shows a man. Not his appearance. Not his physical scars. Thanks for the nice words about my poem. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
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    Thanks Aunt Def. I am glad you enjoyed reading them. I really really appreciate your efforts to read and review my work.
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    I am glad you think like that about my poem. Thank you for the review and compliments that made me blush. ~Emi.
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    Thanks for the great tip Val. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
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    I totally agree with you on that Lisa. We do think of ourselves low. But I am glad I had you guys to look into myself. And I am glad you liked reading this poem. I really appreciate your efforts to read and review for my work. Thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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    I do believe in this God's play and all. And I totally agree with you about learning from the mistakes. I am glad I got you guys to make me realise how important I am to me. So don't worry. And thank you so much for reading and reviewing for my poem. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
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    Thanks Lyssa, for supporting me and all. I can understand about being nonconforming creatures. That really makes us special and bond us here on GA. I am glad I found this site and you guys. Love you all. And about time, I hope for that too. Thanks for reading and reviewing my work Lyssa. I really appreciate it. ~Emi.
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    I know no human in this world perfect. Everyone do mistakes. But confessing them is like understanding yourself to the core. As well as self loathing is common in everyone. I am glad I took this prompt. And I totally agree that we are our worst critics. I am glad to share these feelings and all. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it. ~Emi.
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    Thanks Lisa. I am glad you liked it. ~Emi.
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    I totally agree. Actually I am glad you understood the real meaning of my poem. But the situation, which inspired me, is quite different on that day. That's another matter though. Thank you for the great review. I really appreciate your efforts. If you like to take a look again, I have made some changes to it. ~Emi.
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    I can say this is not my take. I am so poor at warnings. So it has been fun to write one. I am glad you liked it. And I really appreciate for reading and reviewing my work. And if you want to take a look again, I had added some changes to it. Thank you so much Val. ~Emi.
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    Thanks tim. Thank you for the review. ~Emi.
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    It should sound like a warning, but I don't mind if it sounds like an advice. I am glad you liked. But I did made some changes if you want to take a look. Thanks for reading and reviewing Lyssa. I really appreciate it. *Hugs* ~Emi.
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    What can I say more than these guys. This is such a wonderful, vividly explained, emotion filled, and a hot sad story. Sometimes it's better to leave it that way. But can we!!!? I myself doubt that, as I am going through something similar and not so similar emotional tragedy. We gotta live with the pain for their sufferings. Anyway, a well told story. And thanks for sharing... ~Emi.
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    Many More Happy Returns of the Day Comsie
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    What I Wanted to Say to You Triviality Being deadwood Hasn't been choice In my plate Superfluity Wasn't lopsided By my cup Third wheel Isn't in me Not at all Hey you! Yeah I am talking to you I was never A substitute Not for you Not for othrts No even for myself
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    I Am... I am the blaze of luminescent lights I am the hymn of waterfall I am the joy of carnival I am the wheel of scaring heights I am the creek of children's laugh I am the hiss of parents' distress I am the dash of broken mess I am the grunt of sales staff I am all those things of evening plan
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    Drowning in Pink

    Emi GS commented on Toast's blog entry in Toast

    These are Imaginary burials I quite liked theses lines as they brought back some clichéd moments of my life. A Heart wrenching poem for me. I have never used this kind of form before, but I quite liked how you presented it. Beautiful. In a sad kind of way. I might try one of these if you give me the details of this form. That was really a beautiful poem driven with sadness and beauty of those pink flowers... ~Emi.
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    An Evening Walk A look down the narrow street From the higher grounds, I stand The whole city was alive With emerging electric lights My little journey on foot On a grey concrete road Three brothers fight and play 'How cute my puppies look!' Thought their mother, may be, Before howling to snuggle to her A long distant way, where Different colours of stars shine From various number of wheels Fabulous the picture looks As I walk aside the path A light br
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    Perhaps Perhaps, Oh dear! I shouldn't have been so rude You would have been by my side Sharing the essence of every touch Perhaps, Oh dear! I shouldn't have looked clumsy You would have been charmed by me Sharing the glow of that bloody blush Perhaps, Oh dear! I shouldn't have acted bold You would have been brave for me Sharing the smile of not being a fool Perhaps... Poor me!!! I shouldn't have loved much You would have been with someone Sharing t
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    A Clock on the Wall Three pointing hands stopped at ten, nine, 'tween three n four A clock on the wall. This poem below has nothing to do with the prompt. I wrote this for the guy who dreamed about me and made my day by telling everything. Hope you guys will also enjoy reading it. And Ben this is my first sonnet, and I expect a detailed review/comment from you. A Dream of Monday The act of mad men we did as we laugh And play like children on gray summer d
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    A jump start poem as required by the prompt. The title I had used as jump start are in bold letters. Love of Two Perky Swans No word Is enough, when His lengthy fingers play That electrical instrument For me On sound I boldly dance Was creation of him Which mesmerised the cores of My heart Spring rain Soaked us throughout Yet, we just carry out Like two perky swans, in the lake Of love Pale blaze In the mountains Click some pictures of us Of
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