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Steamy... Glad they are bonding in all ways they have been wanting from long. Now knowing everything what Basil gonna create to harm them all. Now to chapter... ~Emi.
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Why I felt rushy. I don't know, as I was thinking the relationship between Jay and Craig going slow, the story was getting rushy. I know you are bound to the rule of 1000 words and so does the chapters have been shorter. But this chapter or either from two or three felt for me as you are rushing. Other than that very passionate and lovely and funny too. Lovely write. And now getting to know about the storm, moving on to next chapter... ~Emi.
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Awwww... A baby girl. The funny incident not quite sounded funny as Cade have been angry about it. Other than that a fun filled and less informative and with Ben's great news was a nice chapter... ~Emi.
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Omg!!! They are doing everything in the hospital room. That sounds weird yet sexy. Yeah, obviously everyone but Jay has known his feelings for Craig. That vee bit of love making has been great. Another nice chapter Caz. You are slowly building up their relationship. And I like it that way. ~Emi.
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Awwww... I know that Craig know about Jaydon's feelings from the first. Sometimes it's just some words that have to got shared and sometimes the emotions. Glad to see that they are on the same road and find it finally. The emotional drama had been very good. Loved this chapter as well... ~Emi.
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I can sense the bond between Louis and Cade. Vampire and psychic, was going to be another new relationship in Unison Island. And I am interested in what Jay is going to do about Craig now. And I'll say another chapter with less information yet more relationship statuses... ~Emi.
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Lol. Jackson must have been very embarrassed by this. But I think it is needed to clearly explain the danger. And I can see you are planning to involve Andrew and Jamie, whom I have missed so much. Another Wonderful Chapter... ~Emi.
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Yeah, I have the same problem that got Gary to review not much. But very interesting story is going on, that I can see. Another nice chapter... ~Emi.
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Oh!!! Caz, you have ruined the fun. or is it Cade!? Whatever, the drama and the tension along with it and battle plan sounds very fine for me. Nice chapter Caz... ~Emi.
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As you knew me, I like short stories of your's. But this, one twist on every chapter ending making me both tempered and tempted. I think I don't have to say I am connected to the story, as you already know that. And to continue the journey, moving on to next very fast. Yeah, it's the KISS... ~Emi.
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Life isn't fair everytime. So I can understand the perspective do the pain girl had. Now what I see is Craig's ptotectiveness towards Jaydon's. Very intriguing... ~Emi.
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Nice normal life set until the bomb shells. My doubts have been right about Jaydon's worries, so now I know that there is past. And have to get revealed. And interested about the new task in hand too. So moving on to know more... ~Emi.
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Very promising yet intriguing start. Still I can't find the name of the speaker of this chapter, other than Mr. Locke. Sounds like new characters in the series . And Tom, is it Thomas!!!? Adam's son!? I know lot of questions! Anyway very interesting start... ~Emi.
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That's fantastic. A baby girl. Wow. Loved it. You have did well on this story. And Congratulations on completing it successfully. ~Emi.
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Chapter Twelve, Part Two - Samuel's downfall.
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter Twelve, Part Two - Samuel's downfall.
I never expected to the end to come this soon. The drama, the tension and the dramatic end of Samuel's cruelty. The whole clan is suffering enough, he still want to play with the lives of other people of other clan for his ill wishes. We would be a justified decision for Samuel to be dead. So nice decision there. I can see its still not the end, yet the end of Andrew's and Jamie's story. ~Emi. -
Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in Chapter 12, Part 1 - The Wrong Twin
Wah! Some tension filled chapter. I somewhat comfortable with this new attitude of Andrew's mother, but it is not excusable that they have thrown Andrew out of their house. But really liked her concern relating to her daughter and some other clan members. Especially Andrew's best friend. But I have doubt, there need to be a small correction. When Flora introduced Casey(but it was Jamie for them, right!? ) to Grace. It need to be clarified, because reader will get confused when Andrew's mother find out it was Casey but not Jamie. Other than that I liked the entire situations happened. But to know more what Samuel going to do about this, I am moving to next... ~Emi. -
New life. New adjustments. Happy for both Andrew and Jamie. But what was gonna happen to Casey!? I know it's a doing of Samuel. But will have to see what he is planning to do. So moving on to... ~Emi.
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Wow. Pregnant!!! I knew something was up but it had never come to the light. But I think I absent-mindedly know that this will come. You have mentioned it before, right!? So much Drama. And I liked the confidence and bravery by Andrew against the crew come force him. Nice chapter. Fab, actually. ~Emi.
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So much romance... So much romance... Are the new relationships be like that, like they are not going to get it in the rest of their life. Though I loved the entire concept of romance. To know more and about the arrival of Andrew's parents... ~Emi.
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My mind to your mind????
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in My mind to your mind????
The mind link sounds great. And practices are very funny. And the love between Andrew and Jamie's getting very strong and mature. Loved this chapter as well. Moving on to the next... ~Emi. -
How do you seduce a witch??
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in How do you seduce a witch??
Phew... Super hot and and very lovely chapter. The description of bond has been great and the link they are bonded by felt great too. Bonded by life; there yet to face so many things. Moving on to next... ~Emi. -
What's Samuel's Plan now????
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in What's Samuel's Plan now????
As I had thought, I can see Samuel turned into a snake in the grass and planning everything in every way. But I can say Andrew and Jamie's bond, as well as the support from the others going to save them from the wickedness of Samuel. Curiously moving on to know more... ~Emi. -
How do you seduce a vampire??
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in How do you seduce a vampire??
Tim got me here. I too liked the new version of Andrew. A shy guy can do a lot of thing when it comes to his mate and you never know what they are capable of. I am happy for them both. And I know so much is yet there to come into their life. Moving on to know more... ~Emi. -
What are these feelings?????
Emi GS commented on Caz Pedroso's story chapter in What are these feelings?????
Finally. Jamie too might have overlooking the real bond as Andrew was avoiding it at the same time. A salute to Casey for not only being a good brother and was knowledge supportive to the clan they are living with. Nice take on Caz. And the kiss surprised me too... ~Emi. -
Nice take. New name for love making; a Blood Bond. Really liked the concept. I am pretty sure this Samuel guy is such character and very dangerous. Like leader; like people. So I can understand the disowning part, even though their laws bound with same gender love. Nice chapter Caz. ~Emi.
