Emi GS

I didn't know you have gone through a hand surgery. Being it two years, I think you are doing fine and all. Your style of writing always impressed me. You won't just leave once the characters got happy life as an end. You create a reality to end the problems around as well and you look for 'JUST'. And also, even though it was linked with villain, your story would fascinate me always. I know I am rambling, but what I was saying is I like your style. Nice chapter Caz... ~Emi.

Not a word. Just fantastic. And lovely. ~Emi.

A funny date-alike picnic has been so keen yet so delicate and romantic. A great journey to understand each other. The last part has been very hot and steamy. I can feel the tension, love, jealous and even pleasures() through your writing. Fantastic job Caz. I'd say you did it. ~Emi.

Thank god they have talked finally. And I am also interested in how they are going to understand each other and make their bond strong. Indeed an emotional chapter. Thanks for this chapter Caz... ~Emi.

I have a small doubt here. I thought I would ask before commenting on the chapter. Isn't Ben pregnant!!? As for the last story, he was pregnant, right!? Then how come he will be the willing donor of the blood? It might hurt the baby. I think you have to take a look on this, to write this perfectly. As for the chapter, thank god he finally came around. Or otherwise I am ready to kiss his a**. Being an old vampire he should have known all these. He have to put his misery shit ahead and have to take care of those who are the real mates of his. Glad Vash had taken care about it. Hope he'll try hard this time rather than screwing like everytime. An emotional chapter Caz. Liked the innocence of Vash behind his aggressive behaviour. Loved your taking on this. Well done. ~Emi.

Wonderful Caz. Finally our little one is not a little one anymore. He defended himself and his made, turned authoritative towards the stubborn mates. I have to agree with some of the above commenters Vash is indeed need to make his two mates to drop their attitudes for the love sake. Very interesting chapter. ~Emi.

Woah! Such drama. I really liked how Vash handled himself. And I can understand the concerns of Casey and Vash as being left a part of them with Jackson to fulfil the bond. I loved the funny things Vash do in his lion form. Everything is good until you made the tension grew with the security alarm. Now who is going to do what!? With that question in mind I am moving to next chapter... ~Emi.

Wow. That has been very surprising, if not shocking, twist. I had been negative for the mating thing with Vash as I loved the pair of Casey and Jackson. But involving three members as mates was something challenging and would be a new perspective to think differently. I have read some articles that have involved a three member bond, in love, in the real world. But I am wondering how you are going to make this possible for them. Indeed a very interesting and lovely chapter. So eagerly moving onto the next one... ~Emi.

Wow! Didn't expected that. Jackson is not just dumb but also pathetic in his thinking. How can someone hurt their mate like this. Who has given the right to him to decide someone's life's decision!? He has screwed big time now. I hope he realises his fault before its too late. And, coming to Vash, I don't think it's a good idea to take him out as the danger is lurking around him so near. Not so nice chapter for me Caz; it's not about your writing skills but the Jackson's behaviour in the story. ~Emi.

Looks like Jackson was too distracted to think straight. I hope he'll soon understand the questioning trust issues by Casey. It's not like Casey is not trusting Jackson. This chapter has been less informative in this story so far. Yet wisely written about how dumb Jackson can be... ~Emi.

Hurray!!!!! A Lion! I thought he was going to be a werewolf or something like that. I has always liked Lions since Narnia. And now you had built my curiosity in high level for Vash. Vash is actually an Indian name, which gives the meaning as "Beautiful, Authority, Will, Wish, Power, and Divine." and Lion will represent all of these, in my opinion. As for Jackson's new found; Vash definitely somehow related him or to Casey. I hope it's not mating stuff like somebody here. Indeed a very wonderful and heart soothing chapter... ~Emi.

A storm is coming. I think Vash and now his well wishers need to tuck their gare to meet it. The cruel alpha has been like what I had thought he would be. Furious persona and dangerous attitude. Well written Caz. ~Emi.

I am literally crying and also furious towards the alpha, just like everybody else. No one has to be treated like that. I am glad these helping Vash in every manner they could. Awwww, poor Jackson. He has go through your wickedness, even after all the tantrums from Casey. Very emotional chapter... ~Emi.

Yeah, have to agree with Gary. It always good to have two POVs when it comes to mates, because the will understand the characters very clearly. This POV from Jackson had been too good to know. You have done great on this Caz... ~Emi.

That was fantastic and cute and lovely. I can feel the need of love from Vash and Casey being the ultimate destination for that. Loved the every aspect of this chapter. And I have to agree with Gary about your style of writing. You have won my heart, again and again, with this chapter. Very lovelier. Well done Caz... ~Emi.

I presumed Casey has feelings for Jackson and trying to be against it because of the father figure played by Jackson. Too bad they are on the same boat yet looking at different directions. Glad to know everything about Casey and Jamie's lives. This has been very informative chapter I have read over all those parts of the story I had read today. You have done great on this chapter... ~Emi.

Woah. A totally new clan and new story. First vampires. Next witches. And then psychics. And now the shifters. Wow Caz. You are too good to be appreciated. And it was supposed to be Casey and Jackson's story, right!!!? Though I'll wait and see where are you going with this. So I'll be keeping along with you. Very interesting start though. Moving on to next... ~Emi.

Awwww. Glad to know that they had planned to stay in chapmistresview. This story has been so great as the others. Loved the series so far. I am so happy for everybody and so eager to read Casey and Jackson's story. Fantastic job done well Caz. ~Emi.

Yeah, finally!!! Oh these twins are so dumb when it comes to know about their mates. Now what!? How Casey gonna react about these. I thought it was the story of Jay and Craig, but now I know that it was going to be about Casey and Jackson as well. Very lovely chapter. I loved it. And, as you can say, I want to know more about these two... ~Emi. Edit: And I almost forgot to say there are some lines got repeated twice. I think you forgot to delete some lines after the editing had done. Take care of them.

Woah. Very tension filled chapter. The whole drama and the mind fight as well as the grudge against innocent that resulted Jackson being hurt and in serious condition. Finally Basil dead, I can breathe a relief sigh. I hope Jackson was alright and I know Jamie and Cassie will take care of him. This was such a great chapter Caz... ~Emi.

Now what he is planning!!!? Whatever it is he sounded danger though. Jackson has been the target for everyone because of his vulnerable with all the thinking and all the tensions. When the pov changed, the voice in my mind got heavy and ragged. That was the achievement of authors. And Congratulations on it. Very tension filled chapter and in the end I wanted to read the story instead of reviewing. But done against my will. Yet very intriguing end. Well done Caz... ~Emi.

Still making plans!!!? As I have always liked your short stories, now I might have getting annoyed by this short length. Lol. So, put my frustration aside, yet I can understand. The rules, right!? Actually very interesting chapter it is, the length is out of question now. Indeed a very good chapter. Now going to checking on how their plans gonna work. Nice work Caz... ~Emi.

I wondered about Andrew and Jamie as LadyDe. They are so cute as couple, and it would have been an eye full to look at them dancing passionately. Such a nice chapter with all the battle plan. And all we waiting for catching the culprit. Soon!? Moving on to the next chapter... ~Emi.

Story caught on slow pace in this chapter. The plan to catch Basil, the tirade of Louis and Cade's uncomfortable encounters. I would say, I can understand the limit on number of words and prompt themes. Moving on to the next chapter... ~Emi.

I think I have to blush here rather than in the last chapter's review. This was so hot. And passionate. Lovelier. Thanks for this beautiful chapter... ~Emi.