Emi GS

Myth of an Old Lady Old lady of myth Teach, 'bout life, to her pupil Standing under tree A scene resided at sky Fullmoon being it's platform Heart of the Night Through the strands of dried autumn tree A golden circle blazed fully Around the enlightening moon And brightened the entire skyline With it, the world where my heart lays Fullmoon As bright as it shine Completing a whole circle A Fullmoon appears

I have read all the comments and their situations. I have struggled myself to know something about SkinnyD, after the blog entry, but I failed everytime. He just shut us all off. But I can understand his situation and feelings. And as well as, we deserve something. At least about his passing. For being his friends. And for caring about him. Like that our friends deserve to know when we disappear too. Up until now, I don't have anyone to share about GA and my family didn't know anything about me. Even if they know, I don't expect them to be with me and consider my request to post something here, about my disappearance, behalf of me. I hope I'll find someone in my life to do that for me. I know I am still young, but we never know what will happen.

Not completely a Haiku. But it carries 5-7-5 form. I hope you guys will enjoy. Poetry and Me My only escape From pain, and from misery From each deal I face Writing a poem Is what console my vexed soul And or reading one My only brute-force To act, and to fight wisely On battles I hold Poetry is all That I have got for me; and I ever will get

You really think stuff like this shouldn't be topics of poetry!!!? Each and every thought can ne mould into a beautiful poem. There no restrictions, nor even boundaries. Love what we do. And do what we love. Even these troubling thoughts were put into this beautiful poem. Like Lyssa said, everything matters. Even the small waves. Love, ~Emi.

Scars for Life Scars; they just don't leave marks. They make impressions on memories And holds mysterious emotions Along with them; the pain. Scars; they just don't give pain. They give reasons to remember And carry enormous puzzles Along with them; the strength. Scars; they just don't brace you. They build up your self esteem And or raze deprecation Along with them; the prize. Scars; they just don't teach you. They mold you for better And set some exa

You have been brave with what you have told us here. But unlike everyone, I'll still wait for something about SkinnyD. Even if it has to be when he left us. We all care about him and we deserve to know something. I am sorry you had found about him, the way you did. Even I don't know much about you, I am glad you have made it out and was here with us. This has been one of the greatest tribute for him. Take care buddy.

Awwww... Uncle Drew!!! That at least sounds like you old enough to be called as Man...

Oh, tim. I know relationships have their ups and downs, but never ever doubt or fear about Mike's love for you. I can feel the worry you have put through your poem. And you wrenched my heart with your second poem. I can feel the pain. Don't blame yourself for anything that had happened. Even the third poem makes me sad. I never thought that April would be like this for someone. Thank god you came along and can see the bond you two have. The forth poem given the smile to me along with the happy tears. And I don't want to change a word about what I said about the fifth and sixth poem in Live Poets Society. You gotta check it out for these. Coming to the seventh poem, your neighbourhood sounds great with different colours and different cultures. I have no idea about which area you are talking about. So I'll wait along with Mac. As Mac said, your all poems carry so much emotions and bond every reader to the core. Lovelier collection of first week of NaPoWriMo. I loved them all. ~Emi.

OK. Here I wanted to give a separate review/comment for each of your poem. Reverse Haiku: I am flattered. The first and my favourite poem of this collection. I loved the form and your poem shone with beautiful image. As I said before, poetry will make shine anything; even the ruins. I loved the greenery surrounded. A perfect image. 'Careful' prompt: Both the second and forth poems of your's reminds me the craziness I have felt when I was writing one for the prompt. I can say you got fond of the prompt, so does I. Your creation of new characters and characterising them with the real meanings have the perfect hit. I loved them both. Circular Reasoning: OK. I am not rolling my eyes here. I can say, both Parker and Drew have enjoyed this poem a lot. You were about the circular thingy even though you have used maths to explain that to us. Lovely poem as well. Words prompt: Wow. That's definitely nice take on words. I loved the fish thingy you have compared words with. Exactly leading to their destination. The paper. Such a wonderful poem. Loved it too. Haiku: A clear image that you had portrayed. But if I had to put on my teacher's hat, yeah I have stole Benus hat for the purpose, you should be careful with what you see or what you feel seeing it. You can't see those pounding hearts of those two. But I liked the description of two legs astride the four. Clear image. You have nicely on this. I am not considering the small thing, because I love the last line much more. Over all, it's a nice journey of six days and six poems. Congratulations on them and good luck and all the best for the remaining. Well done Val.

You are going to see some new things about me here. And all I ask is say what do you think of this new Emi... Emi, A Man of Mistakes It a mistake To trust someone And blindly believe in them It's a mistake To have false hope And falling for the wrong guy It's a mistake To loose the scopes And benefitting the others It's a mistake To interfere And argue on siblings' matters It's a mistake To be hostile And dump w

Congratulations Lit and Happy GA anniversary...

Many More Happy Returns of the Day Drewbear

Forbidden Self You should not be here Gawking at mass Admiring beauty. You should not get bound Fall for good looks And lay down your heart. You should not betray Hurting a soul And just never care. My indigent heart! Take my warning Don't make me hurt you. Oh! My selfless soul! I forbid you, To clasp love, for life.

Happy Marriage Day Sis Bottom lips spread wide, they smile Both the signs taken Bonded their life forever

Words are nor just words Words Single distinct elements, Meaningful, and used to speech Or to write any sentence Which use space to distinguish Words Are just meaningless sometimes You will never understand And will feel they were so mean Yet you cannot change its gist Words Are tiny little phrases That carry loads of meanings And touch enormous hearts To play along with their lives

Seashore Long blank road ahead Tiny rays hit the skyline Vast blue sea appears College Tour A lake, I see, is full of floating red lotus Bunch of egrets dive and hunt those tiny beings Cranes tussle with the walking ducks and win, as Dust whisk along with the whirl of air, clogging view Enormous waterfront the village resided Fleeting, we drive past the pond as splash with cool breeze Girls' widened eyes was not just a fun sight to watch Hardening their re

Actually those two were the first one I had written in the poem. I don't won't to mourn on the break up, so I developed the remaining poem how everything started and everything that led to lost my love. I am sorry you had get through it. And writing this poem had been a tough task for me. But thank god I went to a carnival in our town and enjoyed. And the second poem is from boarding the roundabout of at least 100 feet or above. Thank you for the kind words of compliments Lisa. ~Emi.

Actually the prompt is itself naming your characters with an adjective. It has been tough to name a character like that and has to arrange a plot to understand the role of that character. It's not easy to naming this kinda names for a family of five, their maid and pet. And a friend of lead role as well as his boy/girlfriend and a principal. I am glad you enjoyed those characterization. And thanks for kind words. ~Emi.

Prompt 1 : Write a clean little poem (or several) in this simple form: 2 short lines of descriptive phrase (3 or 4 syllables per line) 2 short lines of descriptive statement 2 short lines of “I” statement, perhaps surprising, unexpected, a “turn.” Roundabout Lights shine colours, Jaint wheel turns bright. Gentle wind waft. Happiness sets. I was amazed Than I enjoyed. Prompt 2 : Today I’d like to challenge you to write an

Yeah, I was in same awe when I had read the prompt too. I tried it anyway. I don't know from where that thought came from!? May be from the ramblings and fightings of my niece and nephews! I was laughing and acting weird the entire write, cause it felt so crazy writing those all names and trying to link them into a story. I had to add a pet, because there is lots of stuff is going on around for last two days about pets. And 'Retriver' catches my attention. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. Amazing, is a great compliment. Thank you for the review/comment Lisa. ~Emi.

I feel the same whenever, the madmen you say, do such horrible things to innocent people and children in the name of religion, race and so many ill filled reasons. A very thought provocative and sensitive concept. Your anger is nothing to be ashamed of. Nice poem Gary. ~Emi.

Mr. Emi!!! Emi is just for me. You can call my dad Mr. Emi's Dad. I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I liked the beginning of every stanza too. It gives a warm feeling. Thanks for the nice words Lisa.

Thank you tim. I am glad you liked...

It's not just his birthday, it is also his retirement too. I wanted to write something for him and the 'Begin' prompt has been my saviour for the purpose. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for the review Ben...

I love the fresh beginnings as well. Actually I had wrote this for my father on his retirement and 60th birthday. And as you said it suits for all the beginnings. Beginning of new life for my father, beginning of my NaPoWriMo, and beginning of the spring season. Thank you for the nice words Mac... ~Emi.