Hey Sasha.
This was fun, and sweet. I love that you flipped the cliche with the twins, and had Luke as a strong, confident gay teenager with a great support network. Part of me wishes I could read the prequel, where he's getting through the bullying, but part of me likes that it starts right here, with all that in the past. I really like that we never got to know Greg, that he's this absent figure we're just about to get to know and suddenly he's gone. That was really well done, really twisted the knife.
Thanks for the great read!
Dr Squidlove.