I do have women who read my books and I'm just as grateful to have then here as the men. I want them to feel just as welcome to my writing as the men and not to feel discriminated against if they happen to be similar to any I've written. The way I wrote the females in this chapter was as a bunch of friends, having fun as they ogled and admired the new man in town. Since in one way or another, a lot of my characters could be considered slutty by any number of factors, I can accept that characterization. Some of the female readers on the site, and to my books might enjoy the "socially generous" women I included in this book.
For all the praise that's been directed at Trevor, and themes in my other books of inclusiveness and acceptance of diversity, I've got to draw a line at saying to treat the women at the lake as a filthy carpet and out with the trash. Typically, the women I do write are limited characters, yet they're strong and independent. As a former male prostitute, I've had my share of being called slutty, treated like a filthy carpet, and tossed out with the trash.
Okay, that's the end of my rant.