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  1. slapshot
    Another great chapter Parker! I just hope Mr. Stevenson has good intentions of helping Andrew through this mess and is not setting him up with some bad news. As the story has progressed I think he is a good person and will help Andy. Time will tell!!
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    Finally!! It looks like his journey has finally found a new beginning. This is the chapter in Andy's life that I have been hoping for. Now I know his future looks a lot brighter. Thank you for this amazing heartfelt story. Hopefully we will get the next chapter before Christmas.
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    It takes an annoying girl like Mary Ellen to get the ball rolling, lots to anticipate from her flirting with other boys as well. Good to see Andy getting out of his shell by trying different things, especially with Zander. What is the realization Zander has as to where Andy is living? Lots of exciting surprises await in this story. Another great chapter.
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    Well out of it all he got his belly full of food, and learned to play pool. With all his having to sneak around, making up stories and hiding out. It might be easier to take Zander somewhere alone so he can explain the truth to him. Somewhere down the line he is going to have to quit running and hiding. Maybe he can make that his New Years resolution.
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    Kind of a lousy holiday for Andy, at least he had the church to hang out in. As for the party, I hope it goes better than Labour Day It does seem that things are looking brighter for him.
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    It is good to see Andy on the road to recovery! The lawyer Mr. Stevenson, has me baffled. You would think he would have more questions for Andy since his report card was sent to him and that Andy was using his family name as well. I still feel there is a lot waiting for Andy real soon. It is nice he has found a warm church to hang out in and had a chance to say a prayer of thanks, being that it is Christmas. Fantastic chapter, good to see Andy coming out of his shell!
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    Out of a nasty situation that could have turned deadly, Andy wakes up in his friends spare bedroom. Hopefully this is the start of a new life Andy is so desperate to find. It is only a matter of time before all the stories he has had to tell about his past and present situation, catch up with him. Another great chapter!
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    What the heck just happened? Go figure Andy would wind up in his dream boys barn half dead from the freezing weather. Who saw that coming? I sure did not!! How on earth did he decide to leave the comfort of his hole to risk freezing in a snow storm to go to the barn? Too many unanswered questions. Just have to wait to see what the Author offers!! Great story after all!
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    Yes!! That was unexpected to see that guy again, what were the chances? Now what happens if he stays around? How does he explain ( his father ) to his friends. Also I guess he was very lucky not to have killed this jerk, to put it mildly. Interesting times ahead for Andy. Did green cap steel all his money or just what he had made that day? How would he explain to his friends that jerk said he was a whore?
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    Well it was bound to happen, asking about personal things like, where do you live, what is your phone number and all the other things that your friends ask you! How is Andy going to handle all of this? What happened to his report card? Or has it not come out yet? So many unanswered questions. Lots to look forward too. Another good chapter
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    Andy has come a long way, with new friends and not running from the least little thing. Zander now is his stumbling block, believing he is straight, although they are still drawn to each other. I think he will learn more from Kaz. Another good chapter.
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    Zanders birthday, what is Andy going to do for him? Mailing of his report card to his unknown lawer! Winter work coming to a halt. Lots to look forward to in upcoming chapters. Good work Parker!
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    About time their paths have finally crossed, so they are at least communicating in small ways. Sneaky Zander doing the sketch! Interesting times ahead with every thing happening to Andy: Another great chapter to a great story!
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    Another nail biter chapter. I was almost hoping Andy would get sick from being so cold, then he would be forced to deal with his situation. Now there is Zander who is nervous about telling his friends he is gay. Perhaps the two boys will get together soon to compare notes! It seems Andy is slowly coming out of his shell. Another very good chapter..
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    A lot has changed for Andrew (Erik) in a short span of time. I thought it was pretty gutsy for him to tackle school with all the obstacles it would pose for him,but it looks like he is settling in quite nicely. The one problem I saw him having was with the $50. check. Sooner or later someone is going to start figuring things out about this boy, especially lunch boy. Keep up the good work with this story!!
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    August Escape

    slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in August Escape

    Sooner or later the people he has left behind at the farm will start figuring things out and see he is not a drug user or thief. Somewhere down the line they will figure it out that he had nothing to do with his fathers murder. I just hope he finds the life he is so craving soon. Great story!
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    A to Z

    slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story in Fiction

    Chapter 21: I hope Eric finds somebody soon to confide in and trust. He cannot keep running from his situation either. Also it is a shame he has to keep being abused wherever he goes. I really hope he can get some peace and security soon. Great story!!
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    Learning to Mend

    slapshot commented on Parker Owens's story chapter in Learning to Mend

    Great story, I think that whatever happens to Eric from now on will be a big improvement from what he has been through: I hope. Interesting times ahead for Eric!!
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