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I thought Devon had an envelope given to him to read when he was on the airplane?
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Interesting story. Can't wait to see where this story goes!!
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The bully will never give up until he is crushed.
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How did that guy find them in Australia, when they were issued passports under another name. He must have contacts in high places. Deporting him might not prevent him from returning again. It seems whatever issues he has with them are mighty important.
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Including the cops!!
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Interesting new story. Can't wait to see where it goes!
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Sorry to see the story end. I guess if a conclusion must be made, it could not have ended better.
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I swear Anton has flipped his lid!!
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It seems Anton is having a mental breakdown with his anger issues!
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I wish Anton had talked to Mathew to find out what happened!!
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Well, here I thought Brodie was jealous of Carleton and Amanda's relationship. I did not expect it to turn out the way it did.
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Yes I think you are right!!
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Good to see this chapter back on track.
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I thought he already ordered their meal. Why the fresh towels and restaurant menu? Interesting!
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Wow, Bryce did smell a rat after all. What a bunch of sleaze bags to try to pull off what they did. Now Bryce has to try and salvage his son from the mess. Great story
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Too neat and tidy!! How come Bryce did not know before hand that he was a Daddy. I think a DNA test would have been the first order of business. Bryce seems to accept his fate to easily.
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What a turn of events, not surprising when Anton reacts to everything by ignoring them or running from them.
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It is the descriptions that make your stories great. Another great one ahead.
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I think that shipping contract hanging in the air could turn into a problem.
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Wow, a lot of information in this chapter!! Great story. I am learning a lot about life in outback Australia.
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That is a good way to deal with that crazed Julia. What on earth is the matter with her? And what is with the orders for Bas not to take any disciplinary action against her and her son?
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Well it looks like Anton and his crew keep finding themselves in sticky situations. Great story.
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Glad to see Anton getting full support from his crews when he could use backup in this situation. Also good to see that he takes no argument when he lays out his rules.
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Confusing? Yes
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For a guy that tried so hard to ignore Sebastion at the start. Houn has taken on a very large responsibility within the Company. I wonder how all that is going to play out in the end? Great story and great detail also.
