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While waiting for another chapter of Rising in the Shadows I read this whole story in one sitting. Wow is all I can say. Something tells me - this may come later on - you don't want to piss off Cyn.
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Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
rbenn55 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
Yeah Ames went as far south as Virginia. -
I hope that people (wolves to be trusted) work with Brandon and he heals.
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Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
rbenn55 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
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Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
rbenn55 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
Hello, I have loved this story and the last story - Love in the Shadows including the grocery store story. I recently signed onto this account for the first time since 2018 to comment on You and WolfM's new stories. I used to work in the Deli counter of a grocery store and a discount store chain (Ames Department Store) that no longer exists. I say all that to say I have experience in the the retail world. Something struck me when I read this section: When Vincent is fighting in this form would the tail be a dead giveaway of how he was feeling and giving his opponent insight when Vincent is planning his next attack? I noticed this tail bothered him. -
I have not posted in forever on this site. Good to have you back!!
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Exactly after over 12 years of this story - I do want Tony to post frequently. I admit it I looked in those old Chosen forums a few times so I could do an all points bulletin trying to find him. I did not realize he was on here. Pl,us I am sure he leads very very busy life. BUT I AM HAPPY THIS IS POSTING AGAIN. 😀
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One request though? I want Chad's Mom to Stop one of Killian and Chad's sparring matches. HA
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I loved the story on nifty and I love the story on how you updated it on here. I don't comment much because I know the story from nifty so well. I don't want to spoil anything. This is really one of the top 10 stories I ever read. I don't give praise like this unless it is warranted.
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Cannot wait!!
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I have read the this story it was fantastic!! I lost my log-in info but I am back.
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Oh I have WAITED YEARS AND YEARS FOR THIS. Since 2006 wow how time flies.
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Wow from November till now where has the time gone. Mondays will seem... like Mondays now. Let the well that is your prose rejuvenate and may the characters in your head pester you until you have no choice to write their story. It has been years since I felt sad a story was ending (even it is temporary).Until we meet again... *insert scene of riding into the sunset* but
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So many feels in this chapter!!! Love it!!
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I cannot put it into words bravo!!!!!!
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Bravo as usual, I wonder if Ethan will let John know of the poisoning concerning Dorian. He has contacts(Olympia Pack, Columbia River Pack) to help investigate the poisoning.
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Ethan's first challenge... I am hoping the other wolf goes with his tail between his legs - if he still has legs.. Good as ever. Bravo!
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Well well well...I have some questions on some stuff but I have a feeling those may be answered later on. One thing that has me curious is this: The wife says after confirming she is safe: “If you speak to the others, tell them I miss them as well. Je t’aime mon mari.” (I love you my husband)" who are those people that she is talking about. Bravo Bravo.
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Very good chapter as always!! . I am wondering about a couple of things. First JT Hooks already asked I question I had whether Ethan turned Aiden into an elemental. Also I wonder if John Doe will recognize any of the now formal ferals. I further wonder if this rogue pack killed off John Doe's pack. This story makes me look forward to Mondays!!
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what more can I say??? If you mess with the ones you care about WATCH OUT!!!
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Need I saw more?????
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Wow you can feel the pain in this chapter. I think Ethan should mention to someone about the dreams he is having. It may not help much but it is a start. Good chapter.
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Question: I thought the Alpha's parents were killed in a rogue attack, however they are not... I Thought I read that a few chapters back. Also where is Trevor during this time. As always great chapter.
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Oh Boy Oh Boy... I will just leave it here. You have a way with this chapter Love it.
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Thank you for your hard work with this story!! We all appreciate it. I had a very busy few days with work and looked forward to reading this chapter. Now onto the story. The plot thickens and I am curious to see what the other plan is concerning dealing with the pack. This leads me to ask a few observations. I wonder if or when the ousted council member will show up anytime soon. I don't think we saw the last of him. I wonder if we will have a dragon shifter show up since there is a lot of diversity with the pack. Again I pity the fool or fools that mess with this pack.
