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Forewarning, Circumnavigation is an extremely long read. I got curious after reading, and compared the length to that of the Harry Potter series. I was surprised that there is only a 4,000 word different between Circumnavigation and the entire Harry Potter series. That's incredible for a single story. It's definitely a big commitment. That being said, it was worth every minute spent reading it. I'm currently working my way through it a second time. Everything about this story makes me happy. The writing is excellent. The places are amazing and the detail is just incredible. I really fell in love with some of the characters. Everyone in the book felt so real, and most were very well written. And finally the story is a nonstop, wild ride. As the reader I felt like I knew so much more than Trevor and his friends, but there were many times that C James proved that I didn't know as much as I thought I did. After starting, I couldn't put it down. This is one of my favorite books I've read, on and off this site. I can't imagine the time and dedication it took to write this book. I applaud your work 150% and really appreciate the work you put into it. Really. Great work. Absolutely amazing.

You have done it again. I can add this to the list of your stories that I enjoyed very, very much. I have been following Falling Apart from almost the beginning. Some weeks it was tough waiting for a chapter to be posted, with those darn cliffhangers you seem to love, but it each week you never seemed to disappoint. Great characters, great story line, and overall a great read. I absolutely hope you continue to write for us. Thanks

Yes! Yes! Yes! I so happy to see the truth finally coming out, and Kye realizing that not everyone is against him. I really enjoyed watching everyone (over the last two chapters) realize that they completely misjudge each other. It's good to see the small changes in Kye's behavior and his thinking (as well as everyone else's). Now that a lot of Kye's fears are put to rest, and his secrets seemed to be out in the open I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! In fact, I'm not so sure I can wait until next week for the next chapter As always, this chapter was absolutely wonderful! Keep up the great work

You are an incredible writer and a story teller. I think that build up was perfect. I can't decide who is good and who is bad anymore. I love that you leave that mystery. It seems to me that both parties have legitimate reasons to dislike Kye. Barrett's spy would hate him because of how dangerous he could be if he talked. Lord Ashton's people would hate him because of what they thought he "tried" to do to Lord Rowland. From the perspective of Kye he has no idea why they are all treating him the way they are. From your stories that I've read so far, I don't have any doubt that you know what you are doing. So keep doing what you are doing, at the pace you are doing it. I just can't wait to see how the story turns out from here!

This. Is one of my favorite stories. Hands down. It's very seldom that I read a story with so much emotion in it. True emotion at that. While I'm reading I can really feel like I am part of what is going on with Zack. This chapter was no exception. I've been waiting months to see what's going to happen with Zack or what is going on in his mind. Part of what makes the story so realistic, is how quickly his mind jumps back and forth. One minute he is saying how it will never work out with Brody, and the next he is praying that he never looses him. I don't feel like I do this much anymore, but I remember doing it a lot when I was his age. Zack's life (as he knows it) is starting to fall apart around him. His friends know what is going on, his mom knows something is seriously wrong, and his father knows that he's loosing his control. I can't wait to see how this all plays out. I'm really looking forward to reading more about what happens with his friends confront him again, or when his mom makes him talk (or even finds out herself). Thank you for the work you've put into this story, I can imagine that it's not an easy story to write. I know chapters are months in between, but you do such a good job at what you do. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here! Best wishes!

What I love about your stories is that I never know that's going to happen next. I'm always one to guess what's going to happen when I read a book or watch a movie... I just can't do that with your story. I appreciate it, and it made the story much better to read. There was so much emotion involved in the story and you've portrayed the characters feelings and emotions so perfectly and so relatable. I'm really sad to see the story is over, but I'm glad that I don't have to wait for more chapters. I'm very pleased with the ending and enjoyed all of the twists and turns of this story. I really look forward to other stories that you will write in the future! Thank you for A to Z, it was a pleasure to read.

I've only been following your story for the last three weeks or so, but I'm very impressed. "Wow!!!" is more like it. The writing is excellent, the storyline is very good, and it's one of the best I've read in a very long time. I really love the emotion behind the characters. I think the reactions behind the relationships are very well written and have found myself feeling the same way at times in my life. You write in such a relatable way, even when I've never experienced even a quarter of the things Andy has experienced. So thank you for all of your effect, and keep up the great work! I absolutely look forward to seeing what else you have for us.