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  1. Ginge_4
    Like many i have followed this story from the start, another great chapter,and i'm going to miss Tuesday nights reading the adventures of Trevor. Trevor can't die it would mean the story has been mis-titled. Unless the story is actually about Trevor boat Umm Sharp objects inflatable dingies sharks not a good mix Mr B should worry about himself more
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    Mom in a Box

    Ginge_4 commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Mom in a Box

    I know how Rory feels. My mother has had bowel cancer then a stroke. I have look after my mother for over two years although she is older than Rory mother, and I'm older Rory it doesn't lessen the feeling when i do lose her it will be a big loss. Where as i lost my dad two years ago it was a relieve as he was suffering. Although my mum is getting better daily it has taken two years for her to have a conversation that she remembers. I still have to deal with toileting her because she no longer remembers how to do it herself, which I'm sure Rory would have to deal with, which was the most embarrassing thing I've had to deal with at the beginning, but people do not realised this goes on I cried in this chapter as i felt thats how would feel if i lose my mother
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    What a great chapter like many of the other chapters in this story.Somehow i think no matter what Bridget will survive and George will take the fall for her. If trev's mum said when the kookburra is gone Shane could have a job at the farm, does that mean Bridget will get Ares back and call off on the contract to kill Trevor?
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    Tangled Webs

    Ginge_4 commented on C James's story chapter in Tangled Webs

    Yet Clare's sharp questions must I shun Must separate Constancefrom the nun Oh! What a tangled web we weave when first we practise to deceive!A Palmer too! No wonder why I felt rebuked beneath his eye. Sir Walter Scott Marmion Epic poem about the Battle of Flodden Now poor Joel going to get the blame, and Trevor fire alarm at least worded to badit was weeks too late. The only thing now is that Bridget and George will findout exactly where Trevor is You may or may not do cliff hangersbut you certainly conspire to them Another great chapter
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    I love this story, Shane want to to be a writer, he's observant, he certainly notice's trevors discomfort around him, How trevors reacting i can remember (only just mind) what i was like witht my first partner, being distracted all the time especially when they are in nothing but speedos. Plus whatever this game of tag is, is it just another way so that Shane could get a good feel of Trevor. LOL and to let trevor know it is ok
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    Varying chapter lengths is good, but it does become a fine art either giving to much information and boring the shit out everyone to giving enough description for people imagination to run wild, i personally like your stories,Ok some of the technical things you mention i don't understand. But i do find there is good balance for me not to be bored reading the story and letting my imagaination presume what is going to happen next.
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    Clouded Judgement

    Ginge_4 commented on C James's story chapter in Clouded Judgement

    Another great chapter. Is shane a goody or a baddie. who was he typing away to. Personally i think it was Boats daily log as shane only printed the document not sent on some one else.Is sanchez slipping or is he and the consortium conspiring to get rid if Bridget and George as now this could bring trouble to them all for the failings.Can't wait until next week
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    you still don't want a sick old goat(ha) to roast, you need healthy one to make any meal, unless of course you are vegatarian.
  9. Ginge_4
    Oh dear pneumonia, don't be suprised if it takes a few weeks or months to get over it fully. it helps if you don't lie flat in bed, sit up to stop the fluid gathering in your lungs. But your doctor should have told you that. Drink plenty of warm fluids like lemon and honey it will help with the cough as cough mixtures don't help in this case. well actually drink plenty of fluids as this loosens the mucus. If you can get up an move about as this breaks up infection blocking the tubes it takes 48 hours for the antibiotic to get into your blood stream and start fighting the infection, if you feel worse or you are no better after taking the antibiotic after 5 days go back to your doctor I really hope you start feeling better soon
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    you evil so and so,. I thought this would be more about Trevor now i have to wait until Tuesday, if you decide to tell us. tut tut. I can't wait to find out how you are going to connect Sanchez to Bridget and George and to what has happened to Trevor this story get better by each chapter
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    This story is getting better by each chapter, I thought you would have had Trev and Joel do some sight seeing as there is a lot to see around Paphos and the shopping is much better than in greek Islands. Well it seem as one aventure ends another one begins
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    Oh come on leave the poor Canadians alone. they freeze their bollocks off for 6 months of the year so when they get to a warm climate they have to where the budgie snugglers to make sure they get every part of the body warmed up as quickly as possible And as to file a warrant for for the trial of C James in The Hague. Hey the Dutch are more liberal than the Canadians. Also the Canadian could always use UN resolution 1441 and invade US. You also forgot to offer them to move the monarchy to USA. As a fellow commonwealth citizen i think we could indulge them that privilege.
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    This story gets better by each chapter, I like all the characters , even Trevs dad because he at least show concern for Trevor. Why would Trevor go to Austrailia, ok his mother family comes from there, but if Trevors never met them in 17 years why bother now. Unless of course his mother is living in Austrailia!
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