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So glad that Justin went to speak with Doc and not just hide away, got a feeling that Justin will need Docs help again sometime so it’s best that they’ve made up. He he he poor old Giro having to do a bit of broom pushing. Great chapter Comsie
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I’m so glad Justin made it back to his friends at the lot
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I think Justin needs to go check on his friend as the last time he saw him he was transforming over. Yep he’s done the right thing this time
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Go boys straight for that door and don’t look back, I think Justin needs to sort out his problems with out the help of that slimy bunch of creeps........crikey if I new that someone was going to put my partner to death just because of an ancient script I would be gone so fast all you would see is the dust trail LOL. Good chapter Comsi.....again ❤️
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I don’t think they would be my first choice of friends to share the darks hours with. Creepy bunch!!!! 🤩
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Comsi another great treat. Somehow feel that Isaac could be the next Take away meal
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Chapter 127 When the Cat's Away
nighthawke commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 127 When the Cat's Away
LOL I luv it, this made me really laugh as I could imagine the embarrassment of Robbie as he was in mid stroke only to be caught in the act. well done Dodger that was classic -
I think it would do them both good to go back to the lot to see old friends again. Let’s hope that they are all still at the lot as sometime has now passed since Justin and Taryn left there. Justin must be carefull too as there will be hunters out looking for him still and away from the tower he will proberly be more visible to the hunters.
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Still my favourite story too, I’m afraid poor Wesley has let his guard down too much and now he’s got a big big problem. Still he needed the sleep so his body could repair....a classic Catch 22 situation.
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It’s always the cute ones that get you into trouble.
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Like the way the team work, start of a new story that seems a good’n Com
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Wouldn’t it be funny if Bobby turned up at the party holding hands with Jimmy, oh I am naughty lol. Another good read Comsie.
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Nice chapter Comsie, hope he doesn’t sleep too long knowing the danger that’s behind them.
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Justin needs to get himself and Taryn back to the car lot as this Jeweler is a crackpot pulling a stunt like that. Just wouldn’t trust the guy at all.cant Waite till the following chapter to find out what Justin does next. Well done Comsie.....still my favourite story.
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Chapter 115 Old Habits Die Hard
nighthawke commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 115 Old Habits Die Hard
Robbie needs to do something about this, Rape is a hideous crime no matter who it’s done too. Yes he has led Alex on over the months but now he needs to report it to the police as Don and Sue are a total waste of time. Maybe he could speak to Nicola as he seems to get on ok with his sister. That Alex needs locking up as he seems to be so unstable. Pity he didn’t get on better at the mall with Nathan, but seems Alex has been feeding him a bunch of lies too. Was a thought provoking chapter Dodger well done mate. -
I thought this chapter was good as it starts a new mystery within the story. I still think that this Stevie thing with Brandon is more than he’s making known. He s only seen Billy for a few times during the holidays and spends a lot more time with Stevie......very interesting. I think Billy will be making a mistake coming out to his school friends and Brandon being shy will be bullied like anything, crikey I’m the voice of experience there lol. Keep up the great writing Comsie.
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Oh yes let the beast reap utter pain on them all. Love this book
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Great chapter Comsie I just hope Wesley can get to a safe place before the pack find him, still even if he can I think he’s going to be looking over his shoulder for a long time to come.
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Never did trust that Strings or any of that lot. It was just too good to be true and if it’s too good to be true it normally is. They both need to get out of the place, Tarim had his doubts about the place and now look what’s happened to him.....Go Go Go back to the Lot. Well done Comsie great chapter
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Good start to story, it’s got me wanting more already. Loved basket ball as a kid never that good but we never cared then lol. Look forward to chapter 2which is already posted.
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Dodger loved the story and as they say the best man one in the end. I know that here in the UK in 1978 it was very hard to tell anyone you were gay as a young person as the law then was still totally Stone Age still loved the fact that the son David was happy about being gay and proud too, thanks again Dodger for a tear jerker.
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GFD: Circle Nocturnus 2
nighthawke commented on Comicality's story chapter in GFD: Circle Nocturnus 2
Like to see Justin sort those croaky old sods out and wipe the smirks of some faces. -
Com, great to see Gyro again in this cross over story. And mention of the car lot and Jun and friends. Great twist to the story up on the roof wow. Love the GFD crew.
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One thing I don’t like is adults / parents beating up on kids even if they are teens, it don’t matter it’s just wrong. Good chapter Dodger.
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Nice one dodger
