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  1. Bndmetl

    Chapter 17

    You brought Death and Destruction to JAM, Rob better behave himself and be nice to Benji. Wesley, poor kid. He is pretty strong for a kid, stronger than he needs to be at his age.
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    J.A.M.

    Aww! You are so cool Wes. You have a Benji, and we all love him. Not to mention JAM I love him most of all your characters.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    My point exactly @droughtquake. I'd have quoted you but either this site or my computer is rebelling.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Mr. & Mrs. Wright certainly are strong people. They refuse to give up on Anna and yet still support what's in everyone's best interest. I also think Riley is one lucky little girl, two wonderful, yet hunky Dad's, a gorgeous big brother who'll protect and always find time for her no matter where life takes them. I think poor Adam is a little overwhelmed at the moment, but he seems to be handling things well. He'll be able to relax once Ian and Paddy arrives, I think.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    I hope for Mr. and Mrs. Wright's sake they can find their daughter and get her the treatment she needs. But sadly in a lot of cases this doesn't happen, I think at the moment her only thought is to get away from everyone.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Adam really is hard on the outside and soft on the inside, he's a big gooey marshmallow when it comes to the ones he loves. You're right about Anna, pity she took off before she could be helped. And Benny is back, check out 'Chasing the Dream' He'll be all the way through the story, starting with the first chapter. Let me know what you think.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Thanks Chonga, for reading. Fingers crossed things start to pick up and get a little easier for Adam, Ian, and Paddy, now that they have their bundle of joy.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hey, tell them she's up for grabs and to go nuts. There is a no return policy though. If they take her she's then their problem. No take backs.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Anna really is a shining example of 'thank god she's not in my family, I'd kill her.' Hopefully the hospital psychiatrist will be able to help Adam and Ian with custody. Maybe Paddy will go rogue
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hi Onim, last I heard she was somewhere close to @Dahawk's place. She better watch out.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Fixed, thanks. Sometime a mistake is just a mistake.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hell yes! I'd let Liam hug me if he'd just fallen in a cow pie, after being covered in stink bait.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    I agree, all Paddy has wanted his entire life is a real family. All they need now is the picket fence and a pooch.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    OMG! You're right, I wonder if Adam and Ian will get up in the middle of the night to find Liam in the babies room feeding her. The men definitely need legal advice asap, that's for sure.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Thanks @Rndmrunner I truly hope you did like the final rewrite. Now I have that song stuck in my head by the way
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hey Butcher, I think you're right about Anna. I do think that the reason she took off has nothing to do with the baby and everything to do with her fight or flight response. Thank you for loyally reading.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hey Wes, of course you can hold Riley. How soon can you, Chase and Benny get to Kentucky? It was the first question Riley asked Adam, "Where's Unca Jack?"
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Hi Stanley, Riley is going to be spoiled rotten, I don't think that will stop with her Dads or her brothers I think I read in this mornings paper, Anna did a Thelma and Louise.
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    Fingers Crossed

    These two young men are amazing, Trick seems to be growing as a person and Cody is reaping the benefits. I like how Cody put in the effort, he didn't sit back and sulk. He's truly one of the good ones.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Yeah! Probably wouldn't be a good idea to hyphenate the names. I think Paddy is going to be the best big brother a girl could ask for. She's a lucky little girl with the amount of love and support she's going to receive.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Thanks for loyally reading Terry. I appreciate it. I'm not even sure Anna would be interested in the baby unless it served a purpose for her. The baby is going to be very much better off with Adam. Ian, and Patrick.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    She's doing a bang up job of it so far. Thank you for reading and your comments, I appreciate it.
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    Chapter 20 - Adam

    Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Fingers crossed everything turns out okay for the new family and their bundle of joy.
  24. “Maternity?” I panted out of breath to the lady at reception, who was on the phone. The receptionist pointed to her left, I ran in that direction and came to an elevator bank. I pushed the button – ten times, frustrated that it didn’t make it arrive any faster. An elderly couple walked up next to me to use the elevator. “Come on, come on,” I cursed and fidgeted watching the numbers on the panel change. The couple moved a step away. The damn thing finally dinged; what a fuckin’ week. I barge
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks Rick, high praise from you. I'll keep trying harder.
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