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“Thank God, it’s Friday. I don’t feel like we’ve had a minute to even think. Is it like this all the time? I need a beer and a good burger,” I said as Payne drove us back to the house to sign out and end our shift. This week had been crazy busy, with nothing but endless follow-up visits, calls, and paperwork. The deadlines either looming close or already passed by. Payne chuckled, “No, not usually. We are just a little behind in some of the follow-up. I think there also might be a little w
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Schooling “My, my, don’t we look HOT. All dressed up in our big boy clothes,” Ollie said blowing me kisses, from his seat at the kitchen table, while he fed Noah in his arms. “All right, knock it off you two.” Liam came up behind me and kissed my neck. “Ooh Baby,” I was long forgotten. He moved around me to get to Noah. Ollie handed Noah over to Liam and took his seat to feed him. I shook my head. “Good on Ya, I’ll never get him out of here now,” I said chuckling. “Tha
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Thanks Onim, I achieved that with some guidance from @Rndmrunner to show the vulnerability of both characters. Hopefully they'll help each other get past some of their hang ups together.
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Chapter 1: "The School Day Begins"
Bndmetl commented on Grydan's story chapter in Chapter 1: "The School Day Begins"
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Thank you for the direction and insight, in this chapter. I can't ever thank you enough.
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You need to write a book about your life and experiences, I for sure would read it.
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Thank you Jeffrey, I feel for any parent having to have these conversations. I know it gets easier as we get older because our filters begin to falter but trying to get a kid to open up with their feelings...
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Thank you Glennish, you know what's funny. When I talk about Patrick with my Mom, we both used to call him Poor Patrick, we still do. Then I went away on a road trip with her and we were introduced to, you guessed it a Patrick. We both tilted our heads and said sympathetically to the guys face, "Oh Poor Patrick." Needless to say he couldn't get away from us fast enough.
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They are lucky, both of them. I think they can help each other find their way out of the darkness that surrounds them.
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I think I blushed at the discomfort while writing it.
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I know you can't see me, but I'm seriously jumping up and down clapping my hands like a humming birds wings, screaming YAY!!!!
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“Dad?” Paddy asked nervously. I looked up from the vegetable I was chopping, “What’s up? Did you want to give me a hand?” “Um, yeah, what can I do?” Paddy shifted his weight from left to right nervously. “You can set the table, then take these plates with the meat. By that time the salad will be ready,” I smiled. “Okay,” Pat said jittery, the poor kid. He’s still afraid to ask for things he wants. I wish he would settle, he’s become confident otherwise. There has to be a way
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Thanks Butcher56, it's nice that I can count on your support. I hope you are looking forward to more.
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I have tucked your 200 votes away for you, just so you know you're in the lead. Shocker I know right? And yes when it comes to Will, Liam doesn't mess around. Otherwise he's easy, laid back and charming. I'm excited to meet Luke too.
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I recall being threatened with pitch forks and torches, to leave the pooches alone, so there was no other option but a miracle, LOL.
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Sometimes I forget he's only seventeen, and as a teenager he won't always respond the right way. Particularly when he feels let down or disappointed by someone he loved and respected.
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I still want to go with the car bomb idea. Where is she they ask? The answer thanks to Jeff Dunham, "Over there, over there and up there."
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Thanks Timmigon, I'm trying my best for you. I promise to try and get them out as soon as humanly possible.
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This is true, I think it will be forced reconciliation through Liam and Theo. To make Will and Derek see they are both fighting for the same thing and to just let the situation pass with apologies.
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Yours is coming, but slowly. It's going to take a bit of research with all the rodeo and horse training in it. I'm going to Mom's in a week or so she lives in horse and cow country, it's also the where the head quarters are for ABRA in Australia. I'm hoping they can help. Oh and by the way, you suck at snap. You got beaten by a four year old.
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Liam being back, and Will's relationship with Derek would surely have to be on the way to repair once Derek reaches out after reading his research. I think Will should start getting back to his old self, with some more therapy and the conviction of his mother won't hurt.
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Sorry sometimes things in my head, don't make it to paper. I'll make sure when Uncle Luke comes it gets brought to light. Sometimes I take after my Mom, she'll have half a conversation in her head and only share the results, and I have no idea what she's talking about. Seems I do the same.
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I've kind of got my hands full now, let me finish Ian and Adam, get through the summer with the boys, plus I'm also writing something for Wesley with Benny. Then I'll let you all decide what I tackle next. The newly still alive Uncle Luke, The Coaches, Theo and Derek, maybe even John and Bill, they all have a back story of how they got where they are. There's also Stephens story or Jason's. Maybe we'll take a vote. LOL
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Funny, I was working at the Outback Steakhouse in Charlotte, I had to wait on a table of high school kids or maybe first year college. Anyway one got excited when I spoke, Oh my God you're from Australia. You speak really well, how long did it take to learn English!!!!!! I looked at her other friends, no-one could look me in the eye, one of the boys spoke up when I standing there kind of shocked, and he said, It's all reality, she really wants to know. I walked away shaking my head. I'm hoping she thought I was from Austria instead because otherwise, I don't know, that poor girl.
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Maybe if they throw a bucket of water on her she'll melt, I wonder.
