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Bndmetl

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  1. Swoon, you're always my first comment. I have a little pressie for you in the next chapter of Williams' Love.
  2. I like the new style the story definitely reads better. It's hard to imagine so much loss in such a short amount of time, the one good thing going for Aaron is he still has his three boys to keep him going. It doesn't sound like he's going to give up on life, where some people might. Good job. Great chapter and @Wesley8890 is right about the mascara.
  3. “Paddy, are you okay? Why didn’t you say felt sick?” Dad said looking at me through the mirror, in the airport restroom. I washed my face and rinsed my mouth out, to see if I could get rid of the foul taste in my mouth. Dad opened my carry on luggage and found my toiletries kit and handed it to me. “Here brush your teeth, you’ll feel better.” “Sorry Dad, I’m not sick, I’m just so nervous.” I felt another bout of nausea heading my way. “What if they don’t like me?” “I don’t think you n
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    Chapter 39

    I'll crash it with you although my costume will probably be the big chick from the Drew Carey Show. LOL Just think the woman who shall not be named is about to get hers, so that will be fun. So we should be able to follow her name with a suck it *itch!
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    Chapter 39

    I couldn't agree with you more about Celine and Justin, double ICK!. I was around in the seventies, I still can't stand Olivia Newtown-John, although I do feel bad she's ill because I'm sure she's a lovely person. I just don't like her singing.
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    Chapter 39

    Thanks @booklove I'm glad you like it. There is still more to come so sit tight.
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    Chapter 39

    I hope you're right about the FBI, but I've never heard that they are a forth coming mob. I think Liam just likes to make it fun for everyone. He's also pretty fierce in the protection department too.
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    Chapter 39

    Thanks Estiveo, I love this family. They are nice to each other and they aren't afraid to show it. I hope you keep enjoying the read.
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    Chapter 39

    Yes Split Enz were, I meant to mention it. I'll go back and edit it. You almost had me loving you with your taste in 80's music and then I hit ONJ, ICK!! Not Good. Gross. Uh-Uh. No Way. How could you? Just YUCK!!! I had the biggest crush on Iva Davies from Ice House, soooo cute. For some reason I always hated INXS, it wasn't until recently, the last ten years or so that I came to appreciate them. Also huge Cold Chisel and then Jimmy Barnes fan. Oh and Johnny Diesel.
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    Chapter 39

    You go to the Park on Sundays and watch the idiot skaters fall over don't you? I hope if and when you have kids you get a Benny all for yourself, he'll be the luckiest kid in the world. And Yes, I can't wait to shove her brother in her face.
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    Chapter 39

    More family to love. I returned to the dining room with a tray of Coffees for those who wanted one. We’d all just finished the sandwiches and had cleared the table. We’d told Uncle Luke all the shit my Mother had pulled to try and split up Liam and me. “I just spoke with Dad and let him know you’re here. He’s on his way over with Papi and Lee. Lee’s going to be staying with us here, you and Uncle Cam are going to stay at Dad’s.” I addressed Uncle Luke and Uncle Cam. “Kristy and
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    William's Love

    Thank you, that's really sweet of you, but I do see @TIMMIGON's point too. I also have the patience of a three year old waiting for ice cream, when it comes to waiting for chapters. I've been a bit slow lately, I won't list my excuses. (There's not enough space.) Besides only half of them would be real, LOL. Starting from my dog ate my homework and ending with I fell down and can't get up. I do have a lot of loyal readers and will try to do better, you all make me feel good about my writing and keep me smiling with your comments, it's lovely. Thank you again.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    You're making me blush. I'm trying I promise. I will try and get a lot done today, depends how it all pans out. Right now you're in luck, my husband is at work and my dog has taken up my entire bed with one of my cats. Sadly no room for me, but that's works in your favour.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Thanks Booklove, hopefully Momma will come around. Adam didn't seem too concerned, but then again he's a grown man. But then again your parents are your parents 8 or 80 I guess, they're opinion matters even if it is only in the back of your mind.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    I really like Payne too. I fear without her, we probably wouldn't get to see Adam have any fun.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Thanks Tesao, I'm the safe drug dealer, all I can give you is eye strain, or a tooth ache from the syrupy sweetness, no debilitating habits that will cost you dearly. I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Hey safety in numbers, huge nerd here too. Be glad you don't watch my stories with me, I pick them apart, but still can't stop myself from watching them. And yes Liam doesn't get beaten up for a while.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    At least I didn't get called mean this week. I like Payne, she's fun but can be caring even when she's giving the stink eye to Adam, they have a lovely relationship.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    I seem to bring out your violent side LOL. I'm kinda glad you don't know where to find me. So here's a hug hope it soothes.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    I know I'm excited about that too. Thanks for reading Charlie, I hope you keep enjoying the story.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Wouldn't it be wonderful if they do? Ian deserves to be loved fiercely, his life has been on hold long enough.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    I'm glad you're hooked, my little fingers are typing as fast as they can. My brain and fingers seem to be out of sync.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Too true, and it makes me happy that you're enjoying this story.
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    Chapter 8 - Adam

    Sometimes, fingers crossed, people just need time to process information. But then again sometimes people just need to pee.
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    William's Love

    I will certainly give it the old college try, my body could absolutely stand to miss a meal.
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