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I don't like Dex at all. He's playing with the relationship between two brothers, he should sort his own feelings out before he acts on anything with either of them. NOT COOL!! I want to jump in the story and thump him one. But great story can't wait for more.
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“Hey Ma,” I answered my phone. “Are you okay? You don’t sound okay? What’s happened? You’re not laying half dead in the hospital or been shot, or anything have you?” Mom seemed distressed. “I’m fine Mom, settle okay, it’s nothing as bad as that,” I stated, looking around at the nurses, moving ten to the dozen around the nurse's station. She must have spy camera’s everywhere, or she had me GPS chipped when I was asleep one night. “How did you know I was here Mom?” “Payne called, s
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It was nice to see that Beau can get riled up, he's usually all fun and happiness unless he's alone with Seb. I do like Uncle Luke so far, he seems like fun. A big kid like Liam, I think Will might have been right when he said Liam turned out a lot like him.
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I'm not sure how much we'll learn about the extraction, I'm sure Seb might be able to enlighten them a little after he spends more time with Odie. I do hope Uncle Luke can help Will and his Dad with the case against the Devil Bitch.
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Hopefully it will be rewarding for all of them. Thanks for reading and support Butcher56
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Even though a little over the top with drama, but situations like that can escalate and end in tragedy so easily. and it is exciting that Uncle Luke is finally here.
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Sorry about that, my grammar thingy must have changed it. Pear-shaped is an expression I use all of the time. Sometimes I forget which version of English I'm speaking or writing in. I have an American husband, I'm Australian, and my Mom's English. All different slang, sometimes I have to remember who I'm talking to. I hope you enjoyed it, even if it was a little over the top. I did like that Will didn't take it on as his problem, I feel he's getting better a little at a time not that Liam's back to help ground him.
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I guess we'll find out, I'd like to think Uncle Luke wouldn't out his son to strangers, family or not. The Grandfather has never met Scott, or even knows he exists, so maybe not. But you never know.
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Fingers crossed, it will be nice to see how Ian is when he's truly happy. That is something to look forward to.
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Will do, a heads up there's some in the next chapter also but that's it for now, so hopefully you'll keep reading this story.
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Thank you it's nice to be wanted, I hope your right about that.
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Thank you, I'm glad your enjoying them. I'm sure they'll find each other again, never fear it's in the script.
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Sorry about the advance in their relationship, but these chapters were written mostly, before I started on the side story.
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I won't keep you as long as this week I promise. You'll find out soon enough.
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He’s Alive I pulled Liam aside, “I just got a text from Seb, he wants you and me to come to Odie’s, well I assume it’s Odie’s address. He’s been beaten up, and he doesn’t know what to do, so it can’t be a simple situation. Seb asked for me to bring you, I’m worried.” “What do you want to do?” Liam asked me. “It’s Seb’s best friend, we can’t not help. I know Seb’s been worried about him lately, something to do with Odie’s boyfriend not being a nice guy. Well I know what we sh
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Thank you, that's really nice to hear. Sorry for the delay I hope to get them over to you sooner.
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It wasn't on purpose it's what really happened I swear! I loved Legos when I was a kid, as well as connecter sets, train sets, slot car sets and books. My Dad used to get them for me. He said I was obsessed with cars since I could talk. I miss that man. Best father in the world.
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Duty called for strawberry guy and he couldn't get there. Let's hope they meet soon so he can explain everything, including his job. I'm glad to see you are still enjoying the story.
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Oh and we missed you too.
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Sorry for keeping you waiting, but it's nice to know we were all missed. Ian's not aware that strawberry guy is a cop - yet. Hopefully they'll meet again soon and he'll be able to explain his absence. I almost have the second chapter ready to send you also for Benny, Wes and Chase. Yay!
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“Love you too, Grandma here’s Dad,” Paddy smiled smugly gently tossing me the cordless phone we used for the landline. “Hi Mom,” I said timidly. “Are you too good to ring your Mother back? Are you trying to avoid me? You know I’m the only Mother you’re going to get.” Mom said laying the guilt on thick. “Mom, I wasn’t avoiding you.” I said gently, “We’ve had a busy week is all, every time I thought to return your call, it was too late to do so.” That was partly the truth, I meant t
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Thank you for writing this story. This has been my favourite chapter so far. I was surprised Bryce said his piece behind closed doors, he doesn't seem to be the type. Not that that's a bad thing at all. My wish is for him and Nathan to get out of their own way, and discover what Liam and Alek have. Maybe you could write their story, I'd love to get to know them better.
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I'm happy Cam is starting to seek the comfort and support offered. Another good chapter, thanks for sharing Dahawk.
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That's lovely of you @droughtquake to offer yourself. Don't forget though it's sometimes easier to talk to someone who doesn't know you. A fresh set of ears and a different perspective can sometimes help too. It's a thoughtful and useful offer, that could just save someone. You really are a lovely human being.
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Sorry about the Odie thing, I will clear that up at the beginning of the next chapter. It was in my head, it's kind of like their all one big story. Thank you for reading, I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Regards Joh.
