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Thanks for providing your thoughts on my latest chapter! And to add to what you just said, it is quite sad that wolves have become the enemy to the public, while vampires have gained power, both in private companies and as political candidates, while wolves have to live on scraps. Also, who is Velvet and what kind of relationship does that person have with Zev? Just think about what color velvet is usually associated with and hopefully you can make the connection.
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Zev drove the car for ten minutes through the city, a city where people the size of trolls lived under bridges, begging for food and sewers where thumb-sized people lived with mice as their steeds. This was what happened after people fed wild creatures despite the signs telling them not to and people abandoning their thumb-sized children after they became adults, no longer cute pets who could be kept in their cages. What a depressing world to live in. Eventually, Zev turned to a parking l
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It had been a week since those events that caused Lucky to be sent to a hospital and now he was sitting at a table located on top floor of a towering building with his princess-to-be sitting right across from him. She was a beautiful woman he could not deny that, with delicate facial features and golden hair that was so long that it covered the floor like an endless line squiggled on a piece of paper. However, judging by the expression her face, she would rather be anywhere instead of eating l
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Thanks again for your comments! Also, with the evil stepmother comparison, one has to wonder what Lucky's brothers are like... Just some food for thought.
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Thanks for the compliment and the comment! Yes, there's more to the Charming family than just rescuing the princess since Lucky's father obviously does not like Cindi and Cheri being married to two of his sons, maybe because of the death of his eldest son. And just as a side note, think about the Big Bad Wolf and his ability of disguise in fairy tales when you consider how he was able to save Lucky's life. Thanks again!
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Lucky opened his eyes and saw a white-paneled ceiling and wondered where he was. He knew he was lying on a bed, an uncomfortable one and a sheet pulled up to his chest with his bare foot sticking out from the end. He looked around judging by the flashing and beeping equipment at his right side, he was in a hospital. And turning his head to the left, he saw Cindi sleeping on a chair next to him. Lucky attempted to sit up, but he was somewhat restrained by the tubes and wiring that was att
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Lucky is very unlucky indeed. Hopefully Zev will stop huffing and puffing after realizing Lucky is more than just another spoiled prince. Thanks for providing your thoughts!
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Thank you very much for the compliment! It's great to know that I'm taking this story in the right direction and there definitely will be more!
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There's definitely a connection between him and wolves, the main antagonist in several fairy and fable tales who are known for their disguises and eating characters whole. So it's not surprising that their kind are stealing cars and committing other crimes, but Zev being a police officer, a person who enforces the law, is strange to say the least. You can say he is like a K9, sniffing for evidence and he most likely sniffed for Lucky. One has to wonder what Zev had to smell to track Lucky to Cheri's establishment. Hahaha. Anyways, thanks for your latest comment and looking forward to more!
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Zev growled as he grabbed Lucky by the front of his shirt, dragging him out of his chair and out of the office room. He then pushed Lucky against a wall and pinned him against it with Zev’s arm pressed against his chest. Lucky winced from the pressure that was being applied on him, his breathing squeezed as the man looked at him with angry eyes. With exposed teeth, Lucky feared that he was going to go back to the police station in a body bag. Lucky also felt…strange. With the proximity
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Thank you! Zev, possibly the Big Bad Wolf who is also a police officer is quite a contradiction, don't you think? And hopefully Lucky is strong enough that he won't be blown away by Zev after finding Lucky again at Cheri's. Looking forward to your future comments!
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Once upon a time there lived a prince. He was viewed with great affection. So handsome, so charming, Right down to his very reflection. He rescued a princess, Who had bitten a poisoned fruit. Reviving her with true love’s kiss, And giving that evil witch the boot. Then his son rescued another princess. For a hundred years, was in a cursed sleep. He kissed her, revived her. It made the evil witch weep. His grandson,
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Thank you! I've been getting really into fairy tales and giving them a modern spin, which I hope you like as the story continues.
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And thank you!
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“—With overfishing causing the mermaid population to decline by twenty-one percent in recent years, many activists are demanding for the expulsion of fishing vessels that utilize harpoons to inhumanly capture these mythical creatures—” “—And in other news, the fairy population has exploded over the past decade and considered a major pest problem due to their prankster nature, many people are calling for their extermination from many households and—” “—Are you fairest of them all—”
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Lucky, the newest heir to the Prince Charming title, wants nothing more than to fall in love and live happily ever after with his own prince . Instead, he's being forced by his father to marry a woman with long hair from a tower who would much rather cut it all off, so she too can be become the hero of her own fairy tale. But with the help of the Big Bad Wolf/officer, Lucky goes on an adventure to break the curse of his newfound friends, while finding love from the most unlikely person in today's world where the fairest women and the most charming men become celebrities and the stuff of legends.
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And thank you for your input! I hope you'll read Hero Wanted as well since Halo has been put on hold. Hero Wanted has the same mythology of the Filipino people incorporated in its story as well and a romance that is just as interesting as that of Duncan and Mike's in my opinion.
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Duncan is indeed a very intelligent person who knows how to connect the facts that he has acquired through his research and draw eye-opening conclusions. And those are relevant questions to ask as well. The story has been put on hiatus, however, but hopefully you'll also read Hero Wanted which has similar elements to Halo, like its mythology and mystery.
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Thank you very much for the offer, however this story is on hiatus since I'm currently working on Hero Wanted, another one of my stories that has similar elements to Halo involving Filipino and other mythologies with plenty of twists. Hopefully you have a chance to that as well and enjoy it just as much as you did with Halo.
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I'm really sorry, but the story has been put on hold and I won't be continuing it any time soon, but Hero Wanted has the same Filipino mythological elements within its story, a budding romance and a growing universe that includes other mythologies like Greek, Norse and South American with plenty of twists to them. I hope you decide to read that story too and garner the same satisfaction from it like you did with Halo.
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Thank you for liking the storyline! However, the story has been put on hiatus since I'm currently working on another story called Hero Wanted, which has the same Filipino mythology incorporated into that story as well, along with Japanese and South American if that's what you're interested in. I'm sorry that I won't be continuing this story any time soon, but hopefully you'll get the same satisfaction from Hero Wanted.
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Unfortunately, this story has been put on hold since I'm currently working on another story called Hero Wanted and I don't plan on continuing Halo any time soon. However, if the mythology of Halo was what drew you in to the story, Hero Wanted has plenty of the same mythology as well, including Filipino, Japanese and even South American. It has fourteen chapters now and I recommend reading it when you have the chance.
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I agree with you on both of your statements. It's definitely going to be tough, with their fathers' disapproval and the possible publicity of their relationship going out being a couple of problems they might soon have to deal with. However, I also believe there's something strong between them that goes beyond just an intimate level and it is worth all the trouble it will eventually cause. Thank you again for your input and I'm looking forward to your future comments!
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Thank you very much! Superheroes have always fascinated me as well and incorporating elements of them into my stories is very fun. And Ryan, becoming not only a Champion, but also a hero for the people is very exciting to write, especially since he is an underdog becoming more than he could possibly imagine.
