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Opening his eyes, Ryan looked up to see a white, square-paneled ceiling and knew he was not in his room back in the dormitories. He looked around and saw that he was in a hospital bed with a curtain drawn at the right side of him. He wondered why he was in the recovery center of the academy when the events of what happened in the Christopher’s penthouse flashed through his mind. Everything from the fire alarm to seeing Christopher who looked like he was in a delusional state as he attacked Ry
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One week later… “Hey, champ. How are you doing?” Ryan was in the command center of the academy, given full access to call his father who was displayed as a fully constructed, three-dimensional image that made him appear like he was in the room. This happened every day before he went back to the dormitories, talking to his father about his days training at the academy and other topics. This was where they continued to build their relationship after boot camp where Ryan had access to
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Thanks again for the corrections!
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Thanks! I totally meant his marriage and not his history in the Army.
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Thanks! I just edited the typos with your corrections.
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Thanks for pointing out those typos. I currently do not have an editor for this story, so it's only me who is proofreading each chapter before publication.
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Thank you for noting some of the issues in the first chapter. I'll also clarify why only thousands died in the cities rather than millions in a future chapter. Thanks again!
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Hopefully my story will meet your expectations. And thank you for the review!
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Ryan definitely has a crush, but only time will tell if a relationship will materialize between the two of them. And you're welcome!
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Josephine launched herself to the facility below, pointing her weapon at a simulation before firing a concentrated ball of energy that exploded and shattered its target. Ryan watched in amazement as Josephine landed on her feet gracefully before aiming her weapon at two simulations and firing another ball of energy, obliterating both into oblivion. Another simulation attempted to strike her with an oversized hammer, but she managed to block the attack with the base of her weapon. Pushing
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And thank you for reading my story! Also check out the wiki for the story when you have the chance. Here's the link: hero-wanted.wikia.com
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Indeed! The world needs someone like Ryan who can also change the heart of a brooding man from a notorious corporate family. Who is he? You'll find out soon.
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“—Nathaniel Johnson, in an exclusive interview with our network, admits to having another son, occurring only days after the third anniversary of the Chicago attack that claimed the life of his son, Rory Johnson. Opponents are declaring that the Nobel Prize winner and founder of HERO has committed treason by withholding the existence of another child who, by law, must be recruited into the Champions. However, Johnson has confirmed that his son, Ryan Johnson, is currently in boot camp as a cade
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It was his second day at the hospital and Ryan wanted nothing more than to leave the place. Watching all five channels on the television, and being bedridden for more than a day while the doctor ran numerous and repetitive tests on him was more than enough to convince him that being paralyzed from the neck down was not the life that he wanted. He was indeed very thankful for the nodes that he was implanted with that healed his body and gave him superhuman abilities that he was still itching to
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It is indeed a mystery and who ever did it will hopefully be revealed in future chapters <cue dramatic music>
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“—and in other news, Filipino-Japanese relations are continuing to deteriorate after the Japanese fear of the Philippines’ growing military and political strength has caused their government to conduct two secret projects according to a very reliable source from within the government. This is in clear violation of HERO’s charter that states that all experiments pertaining to the Champions must be approved by the organization before being conducted. “Known as Project Kagami and Project Kat
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Thank you very much! Ryan's courage mostly stems from his love for his mother and hopefully that courage will only growing further into the story.
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Ryan was in the kitchen, trying to stuff an empty pizza box into an already full trash bag after eating his dinner for tonight. He spent the remainder of his money on a medium pepperoni pizza from a restaurant in the same street as his apartment and now he only had two quarters and a penny left that he could not even buy a small bag of chips with. However, his appetite returned like a crashing wave after that great meal he had with Mr. Johnson. Unfortunately, the pizza did not taste nearly as
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Thank you for the review! I understand that there is some confusion between the mother's wishes for Ryan and the father's wants for Ryan too. Hopefully it will cleared up in the next few chapters. And that's awesome that you're attached to my story, showing that I'm doing something right.
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It was fifteen minutes before noon and Ryan was sitting at the small living room of his small apartment located in a small neighborhood of the city. The window’s curtains were open with the street in view, so he could see when the car would arrive to drive him to that restaurant. He was not hungry even though he did not have breakfast yet. He did not have any appetite since his mother passed away. He was so depleted from crying that he had little energy to eat. Though, it was not like he ha
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And thank you for the review! There's definitely more to the Champions and Ryan that will be explained later in the story.
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Thank you for clarifying the error and for the review!
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Command Center, Washington DC “General! A B-class stellar flare has just been detected and is heading towards Earth!” “Where and when?” the General ordered. “Philadelphia, General! ETA three hours!” “Commence evacuation of the city’s population immediately and inform the Champions stationed in Washington DC to prepare for deployment.” “Yes, General!” “No lives will be lost during this Colossus invasion!” “Sir, yes, Sir!” everyone in the command center said in
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Ryan always loved the heroes with powers who fought crime and saved the world in his comic books. Then after a series of events, he discovers that he has become part of a new breed of soldiers with superhuman powers that come from the ability to manipulate the very structure of light. They fight against beings from another world called the Colossus and protect humanity against their destructive nature. Between rising to the legacy of his deceased brother to falling for a brooding man from a rival political family, Ryan begins to discover who he is and what the world truly needs...a Champion.
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The fundraiser was everything I expected-from the formally dressed attendees to the ornate five-star hotel’s ornate environment. When we pulled into the hotel, a valet graciously drove Mike’s car to the parking lot after receiving a fifty-dollar bill. When we approached the front entrance of the hotel, doormen opened the tall glass doors for us, allowing Miranda to enter first with Mike and I following behind. We entered one of the ballrooms filled with wealthy people who were eating and soc
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