Tazzle001

Thank you for a beautiful story.

This story has gone from a place of bleak beginnings to one of heartwarming endearment.

Ok, that was really good, and no sheep skin rugs were harmed in the making of this story. Next up, "Let's Make A Baby" then "Dan's Revenge Sex" (since he'll have to wait). Go with a Streamliner International, classic and modern. I would also like to do a shout out to Ms Julie's Strawberry/Rhubarb and Sweet Potato pies . Looking forward to the places you will take us next. Always -Brian

Such a beautiful chapter . So happy to see the healing he is undergoing .

A beautiful chapter .

Such a good chapter! I love this family. I'm just an ordinary guy, but this family has a beautiful way of making everyone, ordinary or extraordinary, feel special. I didn't realize how long I had been holding my breath during Raymond's gut retching speach . I loved the car scene. As someone who's been there once, I didn't realize how much I wanted (fantasized) about it till it happened. I loved how nonchalant everyone was about " gay porn" , from so many people, in the diner. Where I grew up in Texas it would have been seen in private and discussed in 2nd and 3rd person discussion, lol. I don't think everyone reading has a dislike of cliffhangers. If they're like me, it's just hard to leave and wait till the next post. That is a great compliment to your story telling and characters we have adopted into our hearts. Always-Brian

Why do I have a overwhelming desire just to sit with him and hug him. My heart wants to reach out to this being of words and emotions. A place where heart and creative spirit connect two worlds. You are not alone. I am not alone. All of us are not alone when we connect together in our shared being.

Loved this chapter! I loved the interactions between fathers and sons. I really loved how those relationships lead into, and brought full circle ( and possible influences) into a discussion of family and fatherhood. With these great role models/relationships , any man would feel more intuited to emulating their father to a new generation. Does the rest of the Adams family know Raymond's decision yet? These guys could be butt ass broke and I would still be honored to be reincarnated as their son as I know that I would never lack for being loved. Speaking of loved. You can tell how much love you have for these characters. I was once told that there is family you are borne into, and family you make over your life. Through this medium your "family " has become ours. Thank you. -Brian

Hmm, a lot going on this chapter. . Glad to see that the Fire Cheif, Mayor, and especially that nasty bigot preacher are going to reap what they have sown. I'm saddened that the families the donations were intended for won't benefit them in time for Christmas. Evidence and other legal red tape. Maybe some of these people would qualify for job training, I hear there's a big company moving into town. I'm disappointed in Paul and Rosarita's behavior. I thought they were just teasing, but when someone's job is threatened with early termination, it's more serious than I thought. I hope the two of them can realize how lucky they both are and celebrate that they've found special people to love them. Encourage each other to " make a joyful noise " unto the Lord, family, friends, and any passing pedestrians if need be. Tink and team deserve pats on the back and raises. I could kiss him for "fruitful haul" of evidence. Thank you again for giving me a strong, supportive family that makes me feel like I'm apart something beautiful from the start to the finish of each chapter .

"....the dark place in my mind I've imprisoned myself in." This almost made me cry. I don't know that we've "all" been there, but if you have, you know how daunting a trap it is. This chapter I emotionally bonded to Chris. I hope that he will find forgiveness both inside and out. Forgiveness will be the foundation on his journey.

The story is so good and the action has been incredible. There is a movie playing out behind my eyes that is worthy of any theater in the real world. The plot is strong and ethereal leaving me mentally panting for more. Great job of story telling. I want to see this in the cinema one day.

Great chapter. What a difficult and lonely childhood. At first I considered the grandfather to be cold and evil.( And he is ). But in his own twisted way I believe he does care about his grandson. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you

What a beautiful, romantic end to this chapter. You must be a salesman, sir. I have never wanted to buy a goat hide rug so badly in my life. ?. A baby on the way! What do you get for a baby that will want for nothing? Bumpkiss is going down, and once he goes to prison, he'll be going down nightly. Karma, fate, and Santa intervention. Police chief, Fire chief, Mayor, and don't forget Evil Preacher. Thank you for for making me feel warm and happy on this rainy, cold day. -Brian

Oh crap. Here we go.

Good pack building moment. Like the way they are learning to engage as a pack. I keep drawing parallels between how dominants treat submissives and how in many places men treat women. Places where men are privileged and women are nothing. Places where riding a public bus , a public train, jogging in your own neighborhood, or attending school doesn't guarantee safety from rape, abduction, or death. While there is a beauty to the intrinsic design to this " cast" system. There is also a dark web truth on how easy it is exploited. Enjoyed the glimpses of development in Harry and Carla. What's going on in Rayne's mind?