Dahawk
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@ObicanDecko I can't say thank you enough for the wonderful words, each of you that leave reviews that either is positive are constructive makes me strive to write more for you guys. This story will fall into the rotation and get a new chapter the same as my others. Fire Valley is pushing my mind a bit to get in character but it's well on its way.
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@Bill Christiansen Thanks so much for reading and I appreciate the kind words, hope you continue to follow along.
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Thanks, Joh, I appreciate your help on this one!
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@chris191070 Thanks for reading the newest addition, the story will be focusing on all of the above. I appreciate the kind words.
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@Benji thanks so much for reading, no deaths in this story just gritty facts of life, and struggles of finding your way.
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The Phoenix Foundation Fury: "Matt, line one is for you!" Bellowed through the intercom, startling him. Matt was so focused on the paper he was reading, he’d forgotten there was anybody else in the office. "Hello, this is Matt," He said picking up the telephone as he rubbed his eyes which were tired from reading contracts all day. "Matt, this is Sheriff Cooper, I realize you are just preparing to open your youth home, but I need a place to put a kid that has been living on
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Caleb lived on the streets for the past two years after being kicked out by his parents. Finding his estranged older brother Matt and his husband gives new hope to have a loving, supporting family.
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@Onim We both had to stop writing this chapter from time to time from laughter. Kyle's new found freedom in driving terrifies the living shit out Blu, but Kyle never seems to notice it. Unfortunately, we have all discovered Kyle has no future at being a world-class chef. Thanks for reading, we are glad you enjoyed the chapter and appreciate the wonderful comments.
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KD immerses you into Ryder's life and family. Hands down he provides all of us with an awesome story, leaving you wanting... no needing more. Beautifully done KD.
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KD I have followed and loved this story since you released the first chapter, for a reader to connect with the characters and be drawn into their lives that's the type of stories I like to read. Take a bow KD job well done, I look forward to book 2 in the future.
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@ObicanDecko you were perfectly right about Christopher, only time can heal wounds he created.
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Kyle's a lot of fun to write, I have no clue how either of the boys turned out the way they did. James will be back around. Christopher has some demons he is dealing with.
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Glad you like it we are working out details for the future wedding for all of you curious readers but no more gossip
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@Wesley8890 spaghetti always seems like a good place to start with food, the throwing noodles is always an interesting technique for noobies. I believe Kyle whole heartily loves driving and it gives him a feeling of freedom he's never had until now.
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Struggling Forward Home of Our Own: Kaleb came downstairs while folding a box at the same time. Blu and Kyle were sitting on the couch semi-watching television, and making out. They watched as Kaleb almost stumbled down the last few steps, “Mornin’ drinking again dipshit?” Blu laughed when Kaleb gave him the bird. “That’s my brother, all class!” Kyle shook his head. “It’s about time you finished unpacking, it’s been a week shithead,” Blu stated. “Don’t worry it’s his l
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You know Nan likes living on the edge lol
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There are rumors Nan might be pregnant, but thats just rumor. Might be the Colonels...
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Wouldnt you like to know, lol
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lmao no Nan is quite safe as hard as it might be to believe @droughtquake she will never be harmed.
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I'm sure the boys were all stressed @glennish god knows I never enjoy moving it always seems as if there are never-ending boxes to be unpacked or you can't find something. Thanks for the comments Glen, and thank you for joining team DaMetl. For those that don't know yet we have launched a personal website that we will be able to add pictures and stuff over time to some of our completed work, and have a running blog to update new ideas. All of our work will remain being posted on GA first and we can add some photos and stuff over time to that on our site.
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So how'd everybody like Kyle's first driving experience? He sure enjoyed it!
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I promise no harming of Nan will occur in this story!
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@ObicanDecko I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning of book 2, we have 21 more chapters to come in this book. Everybody I'm sure is looking forward to the wedding being arranged by the hands of Lily and Nan, no spoilers at that though, you gotta love suspense
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@Onim Nan was making an effort to put the moves on the Colonel. Unfortunately, I think she was a little rusty from being out of circulation. Thanks for the great review and comments
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@chris191070 I'm pretty sure next time the family has pizza Nan will grab hers and lock herself in a room.
