Dahawk
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@droughtquake very good question, but I'm not ready to give the answer up yet. lol, gotta keep reading so no spoilers! Thanks for reading!
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@ObicanDecko Thanks you for reading and the kind review. I agree while writing a story its fun to bend rules and the what if's or what should've to make a fun enjoyable outcome.
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@Onim Thanks for the very kind remarks, always nice to receive them.
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@droughtquake there are rules, but as all other rules in life, they are made to be broken. Thanks for reading I appreciate it.
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Thanks @chris191070 I always appreciate your kind words!
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Thanks for reading @mikedup , there is much more to come over time.
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@Crazyd1965 Thanks for reading, I'm hoping to keep a chapter a week rolling on all of my work. I can't make promises though, as I'm sure some bumps in the road may occur during writing.
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@chris191070 thanks, Daniel has a great family and friends. I hope you enjoy the story.
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Fire Valley New Beginnings: Jake made his way into the station heading to the locker room and sat down on the bench, then started pulling out his uniform, nodding to the other firefighters. "Hi Sam, wonder what we are in for today?" "God, I hope it's a quiet day today, Abby kept us up all night, I never thought a baby could cry so damn much," Sam said as he ran his fingers through his hair, he yawned from lack of sleep due to his newborn. Jake laughed to himself as he thought
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Jake is a firefighter that gets promoted to Lieutenant and transferred to a new Station. He meets Peyton and falls head over heels for him almost immediately
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Hallow’s Eve By DaHawk & Bndmetl This year Halloween had lost its flair to Drew, Sam, and Gary. Today marked the one year anniversary of their friend Mikey’s disappearance. The fourteen-year-olds had decided today they would spend Halloween together roaming the woods and goofing around to remember Mikey. The boys met outside Drew’s house with the appropriated gear for the day each had backpacks with flashlights, sandwiches, sodas, water, and snacks. D
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A Halloween offering from us to you... Trick or Treat!
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Beaten and Afraid Breaking Point: Daniel woke up feeling sore from the beating he took the previous day from his drunken Dad. Since Daniel’s Mom died his Dad seemed to turn to alcohol more and more, in turn, Daniel took beating’s that other sixteen-year-olds never envisioned. Stumbling from the bed, he stood in front of the mirror in his room softly running his hands over the purplish skin on his chest, wincing as he done so. His long shaggy hair draped over his blue eyes hiding the em
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Time has passed since Daniel's mother has died from cancer, he has come to rely on his best friend's Luke and Shelly as his anchor. While he weathered an abusive relationship with an alcoholic father.
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Chapter 81 Meeting the In-Laws
Dahawk commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 81 Meeting the In-Laws
Awesome chapter I would still like to beat the shit out of Don, and Sue needs sense beaten into her for thinking the way they are treating Robbie is appropriate. -
@Onim Thanks for the wonderful words, we are both happy you are enjoying the story. The boys are definitely becoming dependant on their new adoptive family. Nan is the mighty pitbull when it comes to her boys.
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No but they will have a parting of ways soon. Rudolph and Penelope will be some very uptight and unhappy campers.
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@glennish we have plotted through book 1, you folks will definitely be suprised. Thanks for the great comments, and for reading we apprecite it! @wesley8890 very soon Kaleb and Nan will meet in person, thanks for reading and the awesome comments. We love our faithful readers!
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They are great young men, thanks for reading along with us @ObicanDecko . It's nice having new faces following us along the voyage!
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Kyle and Blu are a load of fun @chris191070 , you guys are just getting a glance at their lives. We hope you enjoy the story as it progresses.
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Everything Changes Coming Home Aaron stood in Derek's office cradling Dustin in his arms, swearing to himself "Lord I will never let anybody hurt this child again as long as I live." A stray tear trickled down his cheek landing on Dustin. "Dustin, let's go sit down I promise I'm never leaving you again, but we need to talk. Okay, son?" Aaron looked into Dustin's eyes as he lifted Dustin's chin, and he gave the slightest of nods. Aaron directed them to a set of chairs in the corner
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Worth the Struggle Chapter 3 – Holy Shit Kyle stood there with his jaw almost dragging on the ground, dumbfounded for a moment. "Uh.... I.... I'm Kyle, and holy shit do you announce to every stranger you're gay?" He stuck out his hand to the stranger. "Um... ur... I'm," Kyle stood there still trying to figure this cute gay guy out, not quite sure how to handle this as all of the other strangers were standing there laughing hysterically. The older gentleman put the box down an
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Thanks, but my writing has become my therapy without paying for it. Well, I guess in a way I do pay if the chapter doesn't go as I had hoped.
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@chris191070 Thanks, Nate begging to take care of Jesse like a puppy wanting its toy ball had me laughing so bad, I'm pretty sure Brad is tempted to turn him loose on Jesse. I mean what sweeter revenge is there than to turn your 15-year-old brother loose on your friend as a payback? Tempting.... I guess we will wait and see what Brad and Nate do....
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@Wesley8890It does appear that Brad has been set up for ulterior motives, I do however see some revenge on Brad's part toward Jesse.
