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Thanks @chris191070 there was no way to avoid having the chapter run over we were just getting to long with no way to wrap up quickly.
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well, i agree with you, James was just trying to get Kaleb out of the hospital. As far as James employment I really assume he could give a rats ass to work for somebody like Rudolph again.
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uh... well @Wesley8890 mince words, and I assume you're looking forward to seeing what bs the lovely Rudolph and Penelope pull next.
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Struggling Forward Spring Break: The boys were laying in bed, Kyle laid awake watching Blu sleep as the sun came up. His excitement was building in only a few short hours their makeshift family would be heading to a mountain cabin they had rented for spring break. Kyle went and took a shower trying to occupy himself, as he returned from the bathroom he couldn’t control his excitement any longer, Kyle slid into bed and traced circles on Blu’s stomach until he started to wake up.
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Great job Dodger, I'm so glad to see Robbie looking out for Jamie and being a good friend when others would run away. Nathan truly showed how much he cares about Robbie. I'm not quite sure what to make of Don and how he's approaching Robbie's birthday trip, I'm waiting for the shoe to drop I can't help it. Hopefully, the birthday trip is a memorable one in a good way.
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Thanks, Chris, sorry it took me so long to respond. She has a special Wesley sucker. Kyle I believe would've been happy with shorts, but wanted to make the day special for Blu. The boys definitely were leaving Lily have a major part in the planning to make her have experiences she was denied. I'm sure Davis will be a bit down over Brandon being deployed, but the boys consider him family so that should help. Thanks, Obi, we will wait and see what happens with Rudy and Penny... Thanks to all of you for leaving the wonderful comments, we appreciate them very much.
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Brett is one hell of a boyfriend and Billy is quite lucky to have him. I actually must say Joey knows more about his father than he is saying... Great chapter and I can't wait until Billy's Mom finds out she either needs to get on the boat or get the F outta the way. Nice job as always Jeff, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Struggling Forward Planning the Big Day: Kyle and Blu were laying in bed since it was chilly Saturday morning and Blu had the day off work. Kyle snuggled into Blu’s side, “Babe, I was thinking, do you mind if I ask Kaleb to be my best man?” “Of course not, I think you should ask your brother, especially since I’ll be busy that day,” Blu snickered. Kyle smiled as he kissed Blu, “You’re the best, I love you so much.” “I’m going to ring Brandon later today, see if he does
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Wow... what can you say to a mother threatening to cut off his medication if he doesn't bow before his mother's demands? I'm honestly at a loss for words over Paula, I hated her before, now I guess I've moved on to despise and loathe... Parents are to provide support and nurturing to their kids, not attempt to blackmail them into what you want. Ugh... Paula eat shit bitch! I'm proud of Billy for standing up to the preacher and his mother, he's strong when push comes to shove. Great Chapter and great writing as always Jeff, keep up the awesome work!!!
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Looking to the Future: February started off like it was spring, the weather was mild and sunny. Kyle crawled out of bed and stumbled into the shower, Khan followed behind and sprawled across the floor. Once Kyle was done showering he dressed and went to the kitchen finding Kaleb cooking breakfast of Belgian waffles with homemade whipped topping with fresh cut strawberries. Kaleb continued cutting strawberries as he was talking to Davis who was sitting at the table drinking coffee, “Bab
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Thanks for reading @Benji we appreciate it. Nan may have kicked Rudy's ass...
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A rave reception may finish Rudolph off, lmao
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Struggling Forward Hatman’s Return: The boys were sitting in the living room enjoying their late Christmas gift exchange with the Colonel when a loud hammering sound emanated from the door. Davis jumped up from his spot on the floor and ran to answer the door. As Davis opened the door, Rudolph slammed the door into of Davis sending him sprawling across the floor, “Get out of the way you…” Rudolph grunted as he glanced at Davis while he stepped over him, “KYLE MATTHEW REMINGTON G
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Had a feeling that's what the issue was with Billy, I'm glad that Brett and Billy seem to be working out the issues. Hoping that Billy's Mom has finally given up on the 'Making Billy different' because he is who he is in life. David actually seemed pretty cool over the piercing. Great job Jk, your writing is always moving.
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Great chapter Joh, love the story even though you wouldn't let me kill Anna...
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Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dahawk commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
@chris191070 Thanks for reading and leaving the nice review, we really appreciate it. -
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dahawk commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Some of the gifts were planned 2 chapters ago, thanks for the great comments. -
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dahawk commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Things are definitely going to pick up in the Rudolph department... -
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
Dahawk commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Merry Christmas and Happy New Year
LMAO @Wesley8890 Thanks so much for the review and comments I needed a laugh after this past weekend. -
Struggling Forward Merry Christmas and Happy New Year: CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! Blu opened his eyes. CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! “What the…” Blu sighed. CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! “Blondie,” Blu tried to rouse Kyle by kissing his neck. CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! “OK, what the fuck is that?” Kyle sat up practically launching Blu off the bed, “Oops, sorry Babe.” CLANK! CLANK! CLANK! “S’Okay,” Blu said rubbing his head, “Dizzy.”
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Santa and His Dirty Little Elf Deck the Balls: Santa sat in his rocking chair beside his cozy fireplace across from Mrs. Claus where she sat doing some cross-stitching. Santa sipped his hot chocolate, “Ma you know I had to hire a new head elf for this Christmas his name is GingerNuts Fizzycrackers.” Santa sat his mug down, “He makes flying glittery vibrators for all the good little elves and creates custom gifts.” “Yes Dear, it’s a shame you had to replace, Piper Iciclewhine, sh
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Santa and Mrs. Claus have to deal with everyday troubles of their staff, along with a naughty new head elf they hired for this holiday. Can this Christmas holiday survive?
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I think a logging truck running over her car would be more interesting.... hmm...
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I got my first vote Joh!
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Great chapter I'm still offering my services free of charge for Anna... I think we should take a vote... How many people think Anna deserves a horrific demise?
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