Dahawk
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I can assure you things work out in their own way. I'm sorry Wesley that we picked the same name as somebody you knew, or we wouldn't have used the name Cody. We had no intentions of upsetting you or anybody else.
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Health Crisis: On the ride home from school on Thursday, Kyle laced his fingers with Blu. “I’m glad Lily agreed to do this for Bella,” Kyle glanced into the rearview mirror at Bella, who was texting like an addict. “Yeah, I’m glad she could make the time. I know Mom and Dad have their own plans now that they have sold the business. It was nice they put their retirement on hold to help all of us kids out but…” Blu trailed off. “What’s wrong Babe?” Kyle squeezed Blu’s hand. “I
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Everything is Ok, there was a minor misunderstanding. I took a comment the wrong way, don't worry book four will follow on GA.
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OK let me clarify a few things. First I'm not sexist, you post on peoples stories. I'm sorry I joke around with the readers, or at least I did until now. Second I will finish this book for GA, the next book for Worth the Struggle I will be rethinking the publication. There are eleven more chapters for Family Struggles, so you can keep the snide remarks to yourself. To the rest of the readers, I apologize, you will receive the remainder of this book.
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Ok, I'm not a coffee or tea drinker either. I thought the conversation was funny as hell, for once I didn't make an orphan or anything. Not saying i haven't in the past...
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I just figured the bickering had to be a bunch of old women chattering over tea and biscuits, like a good gossip session.
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Hold it, ladies, I'm innocent... this time.
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Meeting the Parents: Saturday Kyle and Blu loaded the boys into the car, making the slow painful drive to Nan’s house for the kids to apologize to her. The boys were scared of what Nan might do, but even more afraid that she would not accept their apology. After the incident happened the twins required a lot of reassurance from their Dads that they were still loved and wanted. Their car pulled into Nan’s driveway all too fast for the kids liking. After the car came to a stop, Kyle and B
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Thank you, I can't speak for Joh, but a year ago if you were to tell me I would have a published book with Joh, I probably would have peed my pants from laughing. Today Joh and I find ourselves in a new situation, which is both fun and nerve-wracking to continue to produce material and characters that you the readers want and expect of us, we expect a lot from ourselves also.
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I will work on the next chapter some more tomorrow and Monday, as long as I don't have to do any more fixes for Worth the Struggle on Kindle. I think we finally cleared all hurdles for the paperback.
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I tend to agree with you @BlindAmbition
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Well, we are glad you enjoyed the chapter. Tony and Arabella's relationship will be more noticeable in the future chapters. Just to let you know we will get at least one chapter out each week, two of them we will have to see. We have been reworking the story to have it published, as of today we can say book 1 has been officially published through Amazon both as an ebook and paperback(paperback should be available tomorrow). You guys get the very first version of the story, the published versions have had changes made, but carry the same storyline and characters. We will continue to provide you with the story first, you gave us the chance to develop this story and let it flourish. We are forever grateful to each of you readers!
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Just remember Nan is getting older, her thick skin may not be as thick as it once was, plus she got outdone by little kids.
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I can loan you my youngest son if you wanna give the parenting thing a whirl at twenty-five he knows how to act like a twelve-year-old.
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Lol, Hell hath no fury like a pissed off Nan, only time will tell.
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Thanks for reading @donjr101 we appreciate hearing from you!
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LMAO, the guys will most likely have to buy a case of duct tape if they are to deploy this method of restraint... possibly two cases if Nan is included in it.
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Thanks, Chris, I'm sure Kyle and Blu do realize what bad things are to come from Nan. They probably wanna install a blast door to their bedroom for the antics Nan may deploy.
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Anybody that knows Nan, should realize she will get retribution. I am personally amazed that the twins broke through Nans tough shell, but she is getting older, as we all do times change a person.
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Thanks @droughtquake they twins definitely is a struggle for the boys, on one hand they are being kids that are trying be just that kids. On the other hand they aren't completely sure when the shoe is gonna drop over something they done, and how bad the backlash will be.
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LMAO... I have to say I love seeing your reactions to each chapter it lets me know our work is hitting the emotions we are shooting for! Thanks for being such a loyal reader @Wesley8890
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Chaotic Week: Blu quietly opened the front door poking his head in to see if anyone was around, seeing no-one he shuffled Arabella and Lincoln through before carefully closing it behind him. As they entered the living room they came face-to-face with Kyle. Kyle looked at the three, who had a guilty look, “Where have the three of you been?” “Nowhere,” the three said in unison looking sheepish. “Uh huh,” Kyle stared at the three, “Well, Levi and I made lunch it’s in the oven, to k
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Drought I realize we are getting old, however, it wasn't Levi, it was Lincoln the usually quiet, sugar addict.
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Bella’s Birthday: February weather was being as unpredictable as ever, Kyle woke up to his phone ringing, he fumbled around in the darkness to answer it. He was surprised to hear from the Superintendent that school was being canceled due to inclement weather. Kyle shut off the alarm clock before crawling out of bed grabbing a quick shower, afterward he grabbed the envelope that Liv had given them from their dresser. Once the pot of coffee was brewed, Kyle poured a cup before sitting
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Trials of Parenting: A few weeks later, Jared was sitting on Kasey’s bed counting his ‘Bad Money’ that he had collected from the entire family while Mason put Kasey’s clean laundry away. When he finished the tally Jared was flabbergasted, “Wow buddy you’re rich you have $127 and 75 cents.” Kasey jumped up and down on his bed clapping his hands, “I ich, Mas go hoppin?” he said excitedly. “No little man, this money is going into the bank for college. You can spend the naughty people
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