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Kasey is a two and a two and a half-year-old, so his language will be developing over time.
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Picture them swimming in their little capes!
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Carsen definitely has a bug up his butt. Hey, who wouldn't like a little window shopping while your client's shop?
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People need to remember Kasey is two and a half years old, no kid that young speaks great english.
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Ya Blu definitely got away with the slip for a change. The MmmBop part of the chapter was definitely a lot of fun when I came up with that idea Joh couldn't believe I done that. Brody will be an unfolding character over time you will not get a lot of his character all at once so you will need patience.
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The next chapter will not be until midweek, Joh works the next few days, but we have been making the chapters quite large so hopefully, that helps the reading habit.
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He was present, remember after Blu and Lincoln's little whatever before the water balloon attack he warned Brody to come upstairs before Blu grounded him for 'breathing his air.'
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The question is will Nan corrupt them or will the teach her a few new things?
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Thanks, Glenn the family needed a chapter like this one, it was an immense amount of fun to write. We had to stop and wipe tears from laughing so much during its creation.
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Great movie! I loved Mr. Mom.
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Brent or somebody will definitely get the dirt on Carsen, I'm positive of that.
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When It Rains It Pours: A few weeks had passed by and the family fell back into a normal routine even with the security detail always being nearby. The construction of the addition and pool were in full swing, the kids are excited to have the work going on and already planning pool parties. If the guys lost track of the kids, they could usually be found peering out the one doorway that has a tarp hanging over it to keep the dust and dirt from entering the main part of the house. Kyle and Blu
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TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
Dahawk commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 3: Meet Tibot, Adam’s Brother
Another great chapter Bhopper, l really don't trust the estranged brother. There are way too many factors to question his sincerity. How did he know about Rob? Is he feeding the spiteful grandparents info to feed his addiction for cash? And the ultimate betrayal, the lie about being raped... I can't wait to see where this story goes, keep up the great writing! -
Great story, I fell in love with it the moment I started reading it. Keep up the wonderful writing, I'm looking forward to reading much, much more!
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Absolutely awesome chapter Jeff loved that the guys finally found their way back to each other. Oh, I so hope Sarah and Daddy, get screwed over badly, maybe her big brother could help along with Dustin. Got to admit that Dustin is just as loveable as Brett and Billy.
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TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Dahawk commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
I'm sorry that I just got around to reading this, I must say, absolutely awesome story! -
Ya, the kids are definitely as protective of their Dads as they are of them.
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Agreed, my stories have always tended to hit on true life feelings. Some good and some not so good. It's part of life, you can't always have all the happy times, without bad shit happening.
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Empress if you're going to Hell, you'll have lots of good company. We better get one of those number things so we don't have too long of a wait upon our arrival.
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Very interesting guess... Cody has proven he fits well with the family, he's finding that his family is there for him when he's sick when his fosters just kicked him to the curb in the past.
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The truth will come out, but at what price? I'm sure it won't be easy to get to the root of the evil.
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The cake caper was an added scene thanks to our Beta-Readers suggestion, and the theme songs just fit perfectly. It showed a fun side to Levi, who is usually the protector of the kids.
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Lincoln will fight for his candy, right until the point of grounding. He was willing to go toe-to-toe with Levi, even though he was wrong at accusing him of the sticky fingers.
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Since Kyle is the character that I write for, I'll say he'll do anything that it takes to protect his family. He was wrong to not talk it through with Blu about guns in the house, but when he heard Cody scream he lost it and his mind went to that dark spot that Rudolph and Penelope placed inside of him and it fed his fear.
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If it were that easy, lol. These guys have a team of haters that love to just be a thorn in the side.
