phoenix_0826
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I marvel at the power of your skill with words. Much love and strength to you my friend.
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After that scene I don't think you'll ever have to worry about people not commenting on how incredibly hot your sex scenes are!!! That was so erotic, vivid, and intense -- I have a new appreciation for neckties and will be looking at them in a whole new way next time i'm in the office! I'm really liking the addition of Larry and Runt, they seem like they have great comedic sidebar potential.
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Great fun to read! Well done Tim.
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Poor little Fugly - luckily he is loved by one and all, even if they do cringe when he walks in the room! Great chapter Jim, looking forward to the neckties.
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What a fun story! Reminds me of coming home in the days after I got my dog, but before I found the locking garbage can. :-)
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I love the contrast between these pieces. There is a dark symmetry to them that tells a complete story - and the order one chooses to read them drastically changes how the story ends. I love the raw openness of your poetry, it reminds me of some of the best punk shows at CBGB; everything completely out there with no artifice or diffusion.
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i'm still loving the overall story, but this chapter didn't seem to grab me the way so many others have. I'll be along for the ride all the way though!
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Hi Jim -- another great chapter, with an excellent cliff-hanger that I can't wait to see resolved! Also an incredibly steamy scene between Ray and Daniel - as I've mentioned before my favorite pair since the flashback to "the kiss". One reason people may not specifically call out the sex scenes in your story is because you really do make them very organic to the tale and a real part of the characters. In many stories the sex can feel "tacked on" as if the writer realizes that they need to shoe horn in a hot scene to keep the fans happy. You have been able to keep an intensity and feeling of desire between your characters regardless of a casual conversation or an intimate love scene.looking forward to the next chapter!
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This is such a great image of the power of connection and the sorrow of missed opportunities. It immediately called the song "The People That You Never Get To Love" to mind. Excellent - J
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Another great chapter (of course I'm partial to Raymond and Danny!), things are definitely moving quickly for the guys. I'm looking forward to more soon.
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I'm generally not a fan of poetry, but reading through yours has been such an emotionally overwhelming experience.There is such a raw, visceral quality to your words that keeps me compelled to continue reading even though i want to turn away because it is almost too private, too intimate. I've just discovered your writing and have read through the majority of the autobiographical pieces - you have come through so much, and the strength and courage it takes to share this leaves me completely awestruck. I simply don't have words to express my thanks for sharing your stories, your thoughts, and your truth. Please accept healing energy and good karma as you continue on your journey.
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Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
phoenix_0826 commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
Hello - sorry for being so late to the party! I just discovered and binged Song and Dance, what a complete pleasure this story has been. Chet and Arron are fantastic side characters in COTT and it's been great to see their story fleshed out here. Both seem like fun characters to write, thank you for sharing them. Jumping back over to COTT to read through the rest of the tale. Looking forward to the ride. -
Another fantastic chapter! Now, where oh where can I find a goat skin rug????
