I'm literally swooning here. You've captured all the feels of a first love so perfectly! Poor Dustin...I feel bad for him, too. Great story so far, can't wait to find out how it all ends!!
Loved every minute of this story! I wish I'd had friends like these when I was in high school! Such a beautiful happy tale that resonates with love, friendship and family. I'm sad it's over, but I will reread it over and over again I'm sure! Thank you Palantir! <3
I'm loving this story SO FRIGGIN' MUCH, I'm going to just hate when I finish it! Seriously, one of the best reads I've had the pleasure of coming across here at GA! :-)
Goddammit!!! I can't believe he DID that!!! Poor Jimmy...poor Brandon!!! Ughhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, Billy you need to get a mf'ing grip on yer hormones!!!!
OMG...I need to wipe my eyes after that.
I am in awe of the strength and conviction that Stevie possesses inside himself. What he did here was so awesome. I know he's depicted as being Billy's arch-rivals, but I'd love to see Billy and Stevie become good friends. Stevie possesses a maturity and wisdom that I think Billy could learn from!
Anyways, you GO, Stevie!! You ROCK, dude!!!
Jesus, Billy's mom needs to get a muthafawkin grip. She's freaking neurotic, freaking out like that because her 15 year old had a few beers? Seriously? Bitch is cray cray.
Thank God Brandon knows. To be honest? He deserves better than Billy. I just hope Billy has learned how wrong he was, how selfish and duplicitous his actions were.
Cool that Billy and Simon can be friends now! That makes me happy. Billy needs to come clean with Brandon. I hope he finds the balls to do that instead of it blowing up in his face!
You're an awesome writer, Comicality! <3
Ughhhh!! I want to smack the shit out of Billy!!! Poor Brandon. Poor Bobby! If Billy had enough blood in his brain instead of his dick, he might think, "Hey, why don't I set up a date between Bobby and Jimmy!!?" GAHHHHHHHH. So frustrating!!!
FUCK YEAH!!! This is so awesome, I can't read it fast enough!!
Comicality...I am blown away by your writing!!!
You GO, Justin! Oh man, I hope he rips that Soren's head off!!!