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Jim, I am so grateful you are writing this novella. I go nuts with anticipation for each chapter. Paul being macho, Sam and Dave being themselves ( I really would love more on their characters; maybe around their line of work). Thanks so much. PS I live your tales of the navy!! Mike

I am touched and speechless..Thank you for sharing such intimate feelings.

Jim, When are you going to look into getting this published and released. You know it is a fine romantic novel with good twists and turns thrown into the mix. I have several friends who would love this as a gift. Mike

Jim, So great to be back and to get the next installment of your writing. The big romantic in me loved every word. MMMMMMM.......now I am wanting to find Jeremy the love of his life.

Oh Jim you got that communication issue resolved quickly and with great skill, thank you since it could have become one of those drag ass events that make me yawn. Thank goodness that is not your style. Miss Julie is a clairvoyant, I love how you let her go wild. MMMMMMMM, I am hoping this John character is in the past ( like the painting) that may connect Jeff and Paul together in another's wild way. Just thinking out loud. As always, I love your talent. Been out of town so I am playing catch up on your last couple of chapters. Mike

Graham, I am growing more and more excited at my hopeful outcome. I pray you give me the ending I want. thanks, Mike

Loving the progression can't wait for the movement in the relationship with Sammy.

Graham, i am reading all your stories and am beginning "Sammy". Looking forward to another of your endeavors. Mike

Please don't leave Billy hanging. I wish you had sent him to live with Jeff and Kenny until he joined a footy team or found love with a footy player. I actually like Arial font better. The Courier is like reading the printed newspaper. Thank you, Graham for a great yarn. Mike

Jim, Apparently they each see a problem in how tgey individually reacted to something they both enjoyed. They must talk it out, never let the sun go down on any misunderstanding. Please make sure this becomes only a bump in the road and not a head on collision. Mike

I love the happy ending, wish I knew what happened to Simon.

Thx Graham, I am truly loving your writing, it is touching and set at a pace that keeps me so on the edge that I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Ok, I have to go back and re-read somewhere, I only knew that Gary and Paddy had discussed his screwing around with Linda. I don't remember the department getting involved and warning him. Glad the scank Linda is gonna find out just what she doesn't mean to Gary.HA!

I think the scene was very realistic, you don't need any additional help. Death really does stink, especially violent death. I would have never associated Ken as being Freddie, you did that well. thank you for removing that human obstacle for a Paddy and Giles relationship. Looking forward to the next steps since both gangs are pretty much decimated.

OK, now the roller coaster has slug me out the back of the car and I am just hanging on, flapping in the wind! I could not not have imagined these twists and turns, especially Paddy suggesting having them taken out, but I think it is the only way. I say take out the Chief also, he is a cancer on the force that if allowed will only grow stronger. i want the tables turned on Linda, she is not fit to even raise the kids, Giles has got to fight her with everything. I feel for Gary (even though he lets his little pecker brain rule too much) so I am trying to develop a plan in my mind to save his career and relationship with Giles on the force but provide Giles the ammo needed to ditch the bitch! Hard to do! Just hanging on!!!!!! thank you Graham, I love you for your caring heart about Simon and kids in general

OK, now the roller coaster has slug me out the back of the car and I am just hanging on, flapping in the wind! I could not not have imagined these twists and turns, especially Paddy suggesting having them taken out, but I think it is the only way. I say take out the Chief also, he is a cancer on the force that if allowed will only grow stronger. i want the tables turned on Linda, she is not fit to even raise the kids, Giles has got to fight her with everything. I feel for Gary (even though he lets his little pecker brain rule too much) so I am trying to develop a plan in my mind to save his career and relationship with Giles on the force but provide Giles the ammo needed to ditch the bitch! Hard to do! Just hanging on!!!!!!

UGH! Simon, stay safe. I feel he will be used safely to bring out Nathan and the old man. I was not even thinking of a mole in the force (makes perfect sense though). This could blow the Simon set up. The only politician I see in this is the Premier or Police Chief and I am having an issue with how this melee could help either. There must be an underling I am missing. Like I said it's like a roller coaster ride!

MMMMMMMM Jim, that was soooooooo good! i was breathing hard and panting right slong with them. I also thank you for letting them still show there love and concern for each other and not make it a lustfest. thanks for the hot scenes and the showing of love. Mike

Still trying to figure the third party angle. Who have we been introduced to that would gain or has some hidden motive? I still think Paddy and Giles may be the loving duo to come....it is my hope! I want Paddy to be able to help Billy and Simon, I hate the thought of anything happening to one or both of them. Sorry I am the eternal optimist.

Still trying to figure the third party angle. Who have we been introduced to that would gain or has some hidden motive? I still think Paddy and Giles may be the loving duo to come....it is my hope! I want Paddy to be able to help Billy and Simon, I hate the thought of anything happening to one or both of them. Sorry I am the eternal optimist.

I feel this book is going to have more twists and turns than a road rally course..who is the police and political person behind this gang set up? Food for thought! Must tell you the romantic in me wants Giles to come to his senses and realize it is Paddy who truly loves and cares for him. I do hope that eventually happens. i am enjoying you multiple plot lines. Thanks for keeping me on edge.

Hello Jim, HOT!! It must support the theory that we all have some sub/dom in us. Always look forward to your next adventure in wordsmithing. I also thank you for the RHPS reference, I always love Brad standing on display in nothing but his tighty-whities! (makes the mental juices flow and others......LOL). Maybe Raymond and Daniel will have some dessert sometime in the future and it won't be of the VANILLA variety. Always in anticipation of your next chapter, Mike (myrtlebeachguy on Nifty)