Are you in cahoots with @84Mags? Your observations are Mags-level stratospheric. I write this stuff and don't even think of the interpretations until you guys point it out and I realize you're smarter thsn I am when it comes to my own characters. Lol.
Food porn tease? 🤭 it was a long chapter. Something had to give.
Christ on a cracker. We are one. my first job was at Carvel. There is nothing like the crunchies!!! There is NO shame in licking the plate, even in public. Ice cream cakes (especially Carvel) are the BEST.
I think the fact that they were more human did make things easier for Asa.
Hope things are good in your neck of the woods!
I don't think it's odd. As far as we know they are the only twin pair of hybrids. They've always had a deep connection so it makes more sense, if anything, that their healing needs to be done together.
I said NO!
Where the hell did you come from anyway? They're letting anyone into the Korner, I swear...
@weinerdog!!!! Some damn guard dog you are. Just because he's a Boxer with a crooked underbite doesn't mean you should be afraid of him.
Next one? There will be no next saga. Several next chapters, but definitely no saga. Vann and Caleb's relationship... I'm gonna get there. Just not saying when.
After over 130 suggestions and then a bunch more edits after it was finally amazing. @astone and @Danilo Syrtis both missed a major continuity issue. Gnomie for the win this time. lol
Caleb and Vann's relationship has to be put on the back burner for a little bit, but it will be addressed. Eventually.