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It shouldn't be too difficult to believe, after all, they did wait a long time and the cure wasn't hidden in a '55 Chevy.
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Yes, despite the POV change, this is still very much Caleb and Asa’s story.
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Glad I could help out!
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This story has to be faster paced. I didn't feel the need to drag things out as I was writing so, hence, less cliffies. Unless you want more? I have no problem rewriting to leave you hanging. We'll see in the next couple of chapters what Asa gets to go through with the healing process. Cheesecake or sex? 🤔 Cheesecake please! LOL I'm not sure if this is the best chapter ever.... but it's up there.
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Honestly, I was a little blasé about the twins too, but only because I didn't have the opportunity to fully develop them the way I wanted to in the last story. I felt I needed to make up for it in this one. I'm glad you noticed.
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Are you in cahoots with @84Mags? Your observations are Mags-level stratospheric. I write this stuff and don't even think of the interpretations until you guys point it out and I realize you're smarter thsn I am when it comes to my own characters. Lol. Food porn tease? 🤭 it was a long chapter. Something had to give. Christ on a cracker. We are one. my first job was at Carvel. There is nothing like the crunchies!!! There is NO shame in licking the plate, even in public. Ice cream cakes (especially Carvel) are the BEST. I think the fact that they were more human did make things easier for Asa. Hope things are good in your neck of the woods!
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As an author, moving a reader to such emotion is a great compliment. I don't set out to make anyone cry, but I don't regret it when it happens.
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They'll figure something out. They have to.
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But the real question is how many will make sense in his drunken state?
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We don't know yet. Plus, it's not thar high at this point. Some are in Europe and others are still unaccounted for.
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There might be some trial and error at first, but I'm sure they'll figure out something. Each hybrid has different issues so....🤷♀️
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I don't think it's odd. As far as we know they are the only twin pair of hybrids. They've always had a deep connection so it makes more sense, if anything, that their healing needs to be done together.
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I said NO! Where the hell did you come from anyway? They're letting anyone into the Korner, I swear... @weinerdog!!!! Some damn guard dog you are. Just because he's a Boxer with a crooked underbite doesn't mean you should be afraid of him.
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Then why are you commenting so much?
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I'm kinda scared of the next chapter. It's still pretty rough. I'll be working on polishing it up today.
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Maybe you should open your eyes when you read.
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Next one? There will be no next saga. Several next chapters, but definitely no saga. Vann and Caleb's relationship... I'm gonna get there. Just not saying when.
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Is there another way?
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.......That you've been refreshing every 15 seconds all morning. (Or afternoon... or is it evening already?)
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