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  1. kbois

    Chapter 5

    Well, I don't have to work. Might as well watch Asa do his thing.
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    Chapter 5

    So what's it gonna be? #TeamCalsa. #TeamAsleb? #TeamCasaleb? #TeamAsacal?
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    Chapter 5

    I don't think wolves even know what a mental illness is.
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    Chapter 5

    Yup.
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    Chapter 5

    Caleb pissed off his wolf. That by itself is bad, but if Caleb has been affected by the poison, then on some level we have to assume the wolf has been affected too. It may be why he's so recalcitrant.
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    Chapter 5

    Me & Gnomie
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    Chapter 5

    The poisoning doesn't go back that far. Vann is 13 or 14 which means Caleb would've been off his oats as Asa (and @Kitt) would say for that long. No way he could have run a pack of 600 for that long. No. It had to have started shortly before Vann’s kidnapping. Alberts wanted him pliant and willing to cave under pressure. Caleb giving up Vann was him being scared of the responsibility. He honestly didn't feel like he could give both the pack and Vann the attention they each needed.
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    Chapter 5

    So many loose ends. So little time.
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    Chapter 5

    English to Hillbilly is not an option on Google translate. Glad you could join us. We all know about life getting in the way of out GA world. Lol Not sure if @drsawzall is all the waytin the pool, but his feet are definitely wet! Paladin scary? I'll have to see the Halloween costume before I make a final decision.
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    Chapter 5

    You've got a lot to say Kitt. Lol Nothing is ever easy. Especially with my plots. Trust is pivotal at this point. It's a make it or break it issue. Why am I now just realizing I have to figure out who poisoned Caleb? Yinz are bonkers. Asa has no clue what's going to happen. He could draw too much energy and go supernova for all we know. Y'all pay attention too much. 24 hours isn't enough time for Asa to decide to save the world? Did someone say ideas?
  11. kbois

    Chapter 5

    Curveball, splitter, what's your point? All you know how to do is chase them.
  12. kbois

    Chapter 5

    You just had to bring up Marvel...
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    Chapter 5

    Not really.
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    Chapter 5

    Again.. sorry (not) Lyssa is pretty cool. Up there with Cassie.
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    Chapter 5

    Of course it wasn't approved. When has that ever stopped me? 🤭😆 Besides.. her name makes it too easy. There is a lot that needs to happen and all the ducks have to be lined up properly for any of this to work. Asa has his work cut out for him, but so does Caleb. It may or may not work out the way they want. I love writing a character that can one up someone else like Asa can. Lol. Asa still has family but I get the impression that he doesn't see them often. He's looking for his own. I can't (won't) tell you if it's going to be more dangerous or safer to work on Caleb because they're mates. Sorry. (Not really)
  16. kbois

    Chapter 5

    Like this?
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    Chapter 5

    I wasn't gonna be the one to tell him.
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    Chapter 5

    I can always count on you to throw the fast ball right down the middle. So here we go... Your 3 elements are on point. I have my doubts about Caleb returning to the Montana pack, but stranger things have happened in my stories. Vann's future is more flexible. Kids his age are uprooted all the time. But there has to be a good reason. Caleb just saying 'sorry isn't going to cut it. Ah ... elephants. I still haven't decided which circus they're going to be part of. Asa just found out about the pups when Caleb told him his history. Giles wouldn't have any reason to disclose it to the pack farrier. Don't forget.. Asa deliberately keeps himself separate from the supernatural world. Even if he heard about a disappearance (like on the podcast) he wouldn't have any reason to associate it with shifters and pups being hybrids. The extent of his healing ability and the effects on him are still a big unknown. You know I'm gonna leave you hanging. If/when it's time for the pups to be cured, I'm sure they'll figure out some way to decide who goes when.
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    Chapter 5

    We'll take it!
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    Chapter 5

  21. kbois

    Chapter 5

    Fixed it. You know how it asks for a reason? I put "So my beta would stop being a PITA"
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    Chapter 5

    Score one for the Team!!
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    Chapter 5

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    Chapter 5

  25. kbois

    Chapter 5

    Good theories. I like the way you think (plus I won't have to rewrite much... lol)
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