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mEis

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  1. Sorry for the time I took to vote, but the new GA site doesn't send me forum updates'
  2. Love the new chapter of wild life! The meeting between Ben and William was almost like I would have imagined it Thanks for writing! Andre'
  3. sorry for you laptop. Those tiny things get broken too often. Glad about chapter 3 though
  4. Sorry to nag, but, well, it's been a month... any news about chapter 3?
  5. I am damn glad you're alive. Armenia, Georgia, and some of the others ex USSR countries have become black holes. And the Bush administration is sending huge amounts of money there, supposedly to contain Russia, while letting a whole new level o gangster organizations gain powers. Well, have a nice trip back :-)
  6. so he's the pitcher, uh?
  7. well, in Dirty Basement Ben's sword slices in half a fireball coming out a giant frog's mouth (what could come out of a frog's diet?!) so I just presumed it was our almost-naked hero coming to rescue. Sort of
  8. Finally! I found the new chapter showing more about magic and about William's magic: am I wrong or he has a special way of dealing with it, as someway "Coming home" reveals? And... Ben cut in half a FIRE BALL with his sword? Because it was Ben's who did it, wasn't it? ...another month waiting, uhmpf.
  9. The brevity of the chapter (how could you fit a whole griphon in just 3k? ) is what's most disappointing of it. Though William did not look much like a ass of a stupid prince as one could have thought reading university staff's comment in "Coming Home"...
  10. Thank you for this first chapter! loved this beginning
  11. That was FUN! Just finished reading your new story and firegrass. I do love them and I hope "Wild life" will soon be posted
  12. Uhm... this might sound rude, but as a reader -and a Opera user- when I am reading something online I usually switch to "user mode" that is a Times N Roman black with a light gray background and zoom to 180% the screen It just lets me put my feet on the table and relax on the chair while reading the story...
  13. Chapter 9 is veeeery good Though Richard is someway stereotyped: he acts as we could think a monodimensional perv parents would, no deep in him; well, he's just a perv after all. Great story, as always with you :-)
  14. Ciao Tiffany I was just suggesting your story yesterday as a nice college-themed novel. Nice to see you here
  15. as a reader what catches my eyes is the plot: how deep are the character involved in it, how credible are them and what is happening around them and to them, how I got involved to the point of waiting for a new chapter -or to finish a book-. The characterization is also important: the feelings involved, how the emotions are shown and depicted. Sex, for me, is a big turn off: I usually skip the graphic descriptions and well, it is someway boring reading in each and every chapter the same stuff happening :_)
  16. btw stands for By The Way rotflastc stands for running on the floor laughing and scaring the cat. That is a 20-years-old Fidonet slang, before the 'net came
  17. ROTFLASC! Do you remember the url? Would love to visit. And vote BTW Graeme: liked the last chapter of HOTT, even if it is not so clear why Matt is acting the way he is.
  18. There are a few ongoing stories on nifty that I find interesting, all of them are well written, realistic -as in nobody become all of a sudden a billionaire because his parents graciously decide to die-, and moving. The links are: Turn of events Connections Jumping over my mountain "Connections" is a very good piece of story, the author is posting every three weeks due to his profession but it's well worth the wait.
  19. Uh... eh... WHAT?! where is the next chapter?! Can't wait!
  20. The book has just arrived! Now a looooong day is in front of me :_)
  21. Still waiting for the Post to deliver. The book(s) left Lulu a whole week ago, damn! :_)
  22. Nice chapter but, am I missing out what happened at his dad's house? Who was he talking to on the phone and just what happened to his younger brother and who did it? I feel like I missed out completely a chapter?
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  24. mEis

    WTF!

    Sorry, but you only announced Earth Reborn of e-fiction yesterday and I planned to do some reading today. Promise an email when I'll be finished I'm really looking for some nice SF right now. andrea.
  25. I am a simple lurker down here, and had just started reading Down of Tears. Now I am sorry to be blunt, but if you finished the story with a few lines because of some hugly feedback well, you let those people dictate your creativity and your writing. And that's not quite a smart thing to do.
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