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Chapter 6: Will the past remain in the past?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: Will the past remain in the past?
It's going down "basement" 🤣🤣🤣🤣 -
Matteo swallowed the pain swelling in his throat and forced a smile as he looked at Jace. He said his name softly, almost like tasting it after years of bitterness and longing. “Jace,” he said, voice light but strained. “It’s... nice to meet you.” Then, with quiet steps, Matteo walked forward and extended a hand. Jace hesitated—his fingers twitching as if caught between instinct and discomfort. His eyes flicked to the hand, then to Noah, then back. Finally, summoning his courage, he cl
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Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
You're not gonna be frustrated. You're Gonna be smiling in your chair while reading -
Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Twists and turns!
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Jace sat across from the man, a sleek ceramic cup of coffee untouched before him. The quiet hum of the café around them seemed distant, drowned by the pounding in his chest. His fingers circled the spoon slowly, stirring the coffee as though hypnotized by the dark whirlpool forming at the center. He hadn’t taken a sip. He hadn’t even looked up. He could feel the weight of the gaze on him—sharp, attentive, unrelenting. It made his skin buzz. The man sitting across from him was devastati
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Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
If you had been there... if you had seen it... I bet you you'd have done the same. 😆 🤣 😂 😹 -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
I need therapy 😆 🤣 😂 why me? -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
No bets. I already have a lawsuit on my hands -
Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: What changes will time bring?
What did I do? Jace hadn't even done anything. He's innocent You're way in over your head -
The tension in the air was thick, nearly suffocating. Noah’s breath hitched as he recognized his father. He stepped away from Jace instinctively, his heart hammering. “Dad?” he called out, his voice half-worried, half-exasperated. “What are you doing here?” Elijah didn’t speak at first. His sharp eyes zeroed in on Jace, who now held Rain protectively, as if shielding him from something. Noah rushed forward, placing himself directly in Elijah’s path. “I made my decision,
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Chapter: What lies ahead for Noah and Jace?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter: What lies ahead for Noah and Jace?
Well, Elijah might not even be the villain you think of him 😉 He's just being an overprotective dad -
The nursery was something out of a luxury catalog. Soft ivory walls. Creamy drapes. A gold-trimmed baby cot placed under a crystal chandelier. Everything smelled like fresh linen and faint vanilla. Elijah leaned over the custom-made bassinet with faint gold accents, gently adjusting the soft blue blanket wrapped around his grandson. Rain. The baby wriggled slightly, then settled back down with a tiny sigh. Elijah smiled to himself, brushing a finger against the baby’s delicat
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Imma have to say, stay tuned 🙃🙃🙃🙃
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At least, he's not like Ian, right? 😅😅😅😅
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😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 I'm learning my characters do make you guys feel like strangling them and the author at thr same time
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😅😅😅😅😅 I have no words, I swear. It's the "my cruelty knows no limits" for me. Totally speechless 😆 🤣
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The hospital corridor smelled like antiseptic and despair. Jace rushed in, nearly knocking over a gurney as he stormed through the automatic doors, his chest rising and falling like he’d been sprinting through fire. His tie hung loosely around his neck, shirt half-untucked, sweat beading on his forehead. Panic twisted his features, his thoughts racing faster than his steps. He rounded the corner, heart in his throat—and there she was. Miriam. His mother stood outside one of the ho
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Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Eeeeeh 🤣🤣🤣😂😂😂😂. I told you they just conjure up in my mind, I mean... what's the purpose of a story if there's not one character you wanna strangle to death -
Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 okay. I'll update him we got more incoming -
Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Chucky, huh? That's a nice direction. Let me get my notebook -
Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Noah's nightmare!
Looks like we're starting off with threats 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 I'll keep my lawyer on a leash so that when that lawsuit comes, he'll be ready 😆 -
They say every parent prays their daughter never brings shame to the family. Girls are raised like porcelain dolls—delicate, revered, protected. From the moment they’re born, they’re told they’re the pride of their parents. The heartbeat of the home. They're taught to cross their legs, lower their voices, smile even when it hurts, and most importantly, wait. Wait for the right man. The kind man. The one who’ll finally show them that they’re worthy of praise, of tenderness,
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After a turbulent beginning, Noah is finally living the fairytale life—married to Jace, and building the perfect family. For a while, everything feels like a fairytale. But fairytales don’t last forever. When the past comes knocking, old wounds are ripped open & secrets begin to unravel. As old flames ignite and buried secrets come to light, Noah finds himself torn between fighting for his place as Jace’s legal husband or walking away from the life he built. Love, betrayal, and painful truths collide in this emotional journey of devotion, identity, and the brutal price of holding on to someone who may no longer be yours.
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Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
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Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
Then you develop a bond with Ian, sympathize with him... fall in love 🤣🤣🤣🤣
