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Gael let out a low, amused chuckle, the kind that stirred tension like a spoon through hot tea. He leaned back in his chair and looked at Ian with calm satisfaction. “I’m part of the business now, Mr. Sandoval,” he said smoothly, the words rolling off his tongue like silk. “Better get used to seeing my face around here.” Ian stared at him, eyes wide, mouth slightly open. “This… this is a joke, right?” he said, almost laughing, though there was nothing amused about the look in his
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Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
Wow, really? 😊😊😊😊😊 Glad to hear that -
Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
The plan was for Alex to use Gael as his play thing while parading it as a marriage. I hope that's clear 😁 😉 -
Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
You're loving the daddy, huh? -
Chapter 4: Gael's world gets rocked. Is it in a good way?
vanalas posted new chapter in Where Love Lies: Book 2
Gael jerked upright, his heart pounding so fiercely he could barely hear his own ragged breaths. The gorgeous woman—Ophelia Van de Velde, as if her name were meant to command attention and instill fear—stood before him. Her eyes, dark and imposing beneath thick lashes, locked onto his with such intensity that he felt as though she could peel away every layer of his soul. His mouth opened, desperate to form words, to protest, but nothing emerged. The silence that followed was as damning as any sc- 7 comments
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Miguel folded his arms, his fingers brushing along the edge of his temple as a slow, almost wicked grin curved on his lips. His eyes—sharp, and glittering with amusement—ran over Christian like he was a piece of meat that had foolishly wandered into a lion’s den. The air between them seemed to still, the low hum of the mansion’s ambiance a dull echo compared to the tension that had taken root. “So,” Miguel said, his voice low and velvet-smooth, laced with mockery, “tell me something, Mr. Pa
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This is so funny 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Natalie stood there, staring at Alex as if she didn’t recognize him anymore. The disbelief in her eyes deepened, turning into something else—something raw and wounded. Her lips parted, but at first, no words came out. Then, barely above a whisper, she asked, “How could you?” Her voice trembled, thick with emotion, her eyes shining with unshed tears. “Alex, how could you?” She took a step forward, her chest rising and falling in heavy breaths. “You went ahead and married
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Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
Again... 😅😅😅😅😅 We should Collab 😆😆😆 -
Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
vanalas posted new chapter in Where Love Lies: Book 2
The grand ballroom of the Sandoval estate was nothing short of breathtaking. A masterpiece of elegance and wealth, the towering crystal chandeliers cast a warm, golden glow over the polished marble floors, their delicate lights reflecting off the mirrored walls. Tall, ivory columns lined the room, wrapped in silk drapery, while soft music from a string quartet filled the air with an air of sophistication. Guests in designer gowns and tailored suits moved through the space, their laughter an- 8 comments
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Gael’s life takes an unexpected turn when he’s forced into a situation beyond his control. But things take a darker twist as an obsessed lover and haunting memories from his past resurface, threatening to destroy everything. Faced with a future he never imagined, Gael must decide: is he ready to let go of the past and embrace his new life, or will it continue to hold him captive?
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The darkness of the cell was impenetrable, thick and suffocating, as if it had taken on a life of its own. The only sounds were the distant drip of water, echoing off the cold, damp walls, a slow, agonizing rhythm that only served to deepen the silence, the loneliness. Each drop felt like a reminder—time passing, moments slipping away, and him trapped here, fading. The stench of sweat, old blood, and mildew clung to the air, heavy and suffocating, a constant reminder that he was here. In th
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Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
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Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
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Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
I'm right on the chopping block with this one 😂 😂 😂 😂 😂 I need to be very careful -
The city never slept. Cars honked, engines revved, and distant sirens wailed, yet amidst the cacophony, there was silence—not of absence, but of voices unheard. Screams lost within towering walls, buried beneath the hum of industry, drowned by the relentless push of a world too busy to listen. A skeletal structure of steel and concrete loomed high in the sky, a testament to power and progress. At its precipice stood a man, his silhouette sharp against the dull glow of the skyline. He r
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Miguel Powers, a powerful businessman with a dark past, is driven by one goal: revenge. But when he crosses paths with Christian, a passionate lawyer fighting for justice, a dangerous attraction sparks between them. As Miguel plots his twisted revenge, he finds himself torn between ambition and love, seduction and betrayal. In this high-stakes game, the price of vengeance might be more than he’s willing to pay—especially when it could cost him his heart. Will love or revenge define his fate?
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Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
Wow @philippe 😂😂😂😂😂😂 you really impress me. Are you sure we're not cowriters? 😅😅😅😅😅😅 -
Chapter 8: The final chapter. Will Gael get his fairytale life?
vanalas posted new chapter in Where Love Lies: Book 1
Gael felt like the air had been sucked out of the room. His chest heaved, but no matter how hard he tried, he couldn’t breathe. His vision blurred, his head spun, and all he could hear was Natalie’s sobs echoing in his skull. “Carlos… please… save our baby…” she whimpered, clutching onto him desperately. Carlos looked like he was in a nightmare. His hands trembled as they hovered over her, unsure of what to do. His lips parted, his voice caught in his throat as he asked, “Natalie, what- 13 comments
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Gael walked through the hallway, his presence commanding attention without even trying. His long, dark hair was pulled back into a sleek ponytail, emphasizing the sharp angles of his face, his high cheekbones, his defined jawline. The fitted black dress shirt he wore hugged his lean frame, the top two buttons left undone, teasing the bronzed skin beneath. He looked effortlessly sexy, confident—untouchable. But inside, he was tired. Another long, exhausting day awaited him, and he just
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Carlos sat on the edge of an elegant cream-colored chaise lounge, his elbow resting on his knee as he held the phone to his ear. The suit shop was eerily quiet, save for the soft murmuring of the stylists moving around and the distant hum of conversation from another room. He could hear the warmth in Natalie’s voice, the affection that laced her words, but his responses came almost mechanically. “I really want to be with you right now,” Natalie murmured, her voice dripping with longing.
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Chapter 5: Amanda lets Gael have a taste of her venom
vanalas posted new chapter in Where Love Lies: Book 1
Gael stood at a distance, arms loosely crossed over his chest, his throat tightening as he watched the scene unfold before him. The long dining table was set elegantly, a variety of carefully plated dishes arranged for the food tasting. Soft golden lights illuminated the table, casting a warm glow over Carlos and Natalie, who sat close together, their fingers brushing, their laughter filling the air. Natalie leaned into Carlos, her perfectly manicured hand picking up a forkful of food.- 4 comments
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Chapter 4: It's all piling up for Gael. Will he take it all?
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 4: It's all piling up for Gael. Will he take it all?
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Chapter 4: It's all piling up for Gael. Will he take it all?
vanalas posted new chapter in Where Love Lies: Book 1
6 days to the wedding… * Gael pushed open the heavy doors of the Sandoval mansion, exhaling a breath he hadn't realized he'd been holding. His shoulders ached, and his legs felt like lead from running around all day—meeting vendors, double-checking the guest list, making sure the venue was up to the Sandoval standard. He hadn’t wanted to do any of this, but at least keeping busy was better than thinking. The cool air inside the mansion was a sharp contrast to the heat outside, but- 5 comments
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Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 3: Things spiral out of control for Gael.
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