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Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: Where Hearts Go to Shatter!
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Dean pushed open the bedroom door with a quiet creak, the faint morning light filtering through the curtains and casting long, soft shadows across the room. He stepped inside, shutting the door behind him, his expression tightening when he saw the small bundle on the bed. Julian lay curled on his side, knees pulled up slightly, blanket twisted around him. His arms were wrapped around a worn, light-brown teddy bear Dean had since he was a child—its fur thinned in places, one eye slightly scr
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Chapter 6: The Fall Beyond the Veil
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Fall Beyond the Veil
Well, he's the Ender 😉 😜 -
Chapter 6: The Fall Beyond the Veil
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: The Fall Beyond the Veil
Scumbag fathers 😆 😂 Well, Xander is set to go find the voice and hopefully come to terms with his past self. That might be when he becomes the dark one or maybe not.... And that reward will come when we see if he kills the entire clan or not lol -
Chapter 6: The Fall Beyond the Veil
vanalas posted new chapter in The Obsidian Order: Prince of Shadows
Xander took another step toward the king. Alaric didn’t move—not because he wouldn’t, but because he couldn’t. His body was rigid, his breath trapped somewhere in his chest, eyes wide and glassy with a fear so deep it felt ancient. Something in Xander’s presence wasn’t just threatening him… it was recognizing him. And Xander felt it. His head tilted slowly, eyes glowing blue as he studied the king with eerie focus. “There’s something in you,” he murmured, voice hollow. “In yo- 4 comments
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Revenge is a dish best served cold
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I don't know.... wanna cowrite 😁😁😁😁 coz this is a masterpiece ✨️ 😍
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Wanna go in the dark arts, are we? 😆
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Wait, what? 😅😅😅😅😅 Thank you so much. I want you to feel every emotion while reading, so thanks for that.
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Oh Gael and Ian, Ian was a psychopath 🥲🥲🥲🥲 But hang in there, we're going somewhere with this.
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😅😅😅😅 Come on, it's storybuilding. Don't give up now, good things will start emerging. Remember, journey 😁😁😁
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Robert Hayes, I'm sure he must be on your wall with a pin on it and x 😅😅😅😅 let's kill him, I'm in And you're right, at this point, Julian must be learning that the family he thought he had was nothing but a mask and now it's coming off. After this experience, I know he's changed for good but the question is, into what?
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All I can say is stay tuned. Julian has just hit lower, what's the worst that could happen 😅😅😅😅😅
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The Grand Hotel had never looked more alive. The ballroom stretched endlessly beneath towering crystal chandeliers that scattered warm gold light across polished marble floors. Every surface gleamed—mirrors, glass, silver trays, champagne flutes. The scent of expensive perfume and aged whiskey floated through the air, mixing with the soft notes of live orchestral music drifting from the stage. The city’s elite had arrived in full force. Men in tailored tuxedos laughed behind raise
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Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
I already feel that riot. Let me call the popo 😆 🤣 😂 -
Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
Well, people do tend to change and Julian feels like the son he never wanted. He feels like any wrong move and they're gonna erase him from the family. -
Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
Come on, don't put the hands up just yet 😅😅😅😅 I promise it gets better -
Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
You know, before I posted this chapter, my mind was telling me I was gonna be read to filth 😆 🤣 😂 and I was right. Don't doubt Julian so much, he's about to start his rebellion phase... I hope -
Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
Oh, you're gonna do daddy like that 😅😅😅😅 I agree he's spineless. But I must say he brought this upon himself, he went seeking something he shouldn't have in the first place -
Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
vanalas commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: Everything goes against Julian.
I agree with you on this one but... guards, I don't think so. And in this case, Julian is scared and feels so powerless. If he can defeat the inner demons, he'll be fine 🙂 🥲🥲🥲 -
Through it All Ch. 03 Comments, critiques and tips are welcome! *** Julian lay on his bed, stiff and silent, staring at the ceiling as though the plaster could swallow him whole. His chest still felt tight, his throat still burned, and every word Sofia had thrown at him buzzed like poisoned wasps in his head. Blood is thicker… know your place… he got tired of you… He swallowed hard, pressing the back of his wrist to his eyes. A knock sounded at the door — sharp, impatien
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Chapter 5: The unravelling
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The palace trembled with the force of King Alaric’s voice. “HE’S NOT THERE?!” His bellow ricocheted off the marble walls of the living room, shaking dust loose from ancient beams. The guards kneeling before him flinched as though struck. The king paced furiously, hands trembling, jaw clenched so hard a vein pulsed violently along his temple. “You searched the jungle—fine. You searched the cliffs—fine. But you’re telling me you searched everywhere and found nothing?” The
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Not long enough, I think 🤔 😊😊😊😊
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It's coming soon. Watch this space
