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You must have asked then? 😜😉😉😉
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Hell I'm thinkin 3some with Jared and Craig.
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I am so really loving this story.😍😍😍😍😍
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Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
No need to be Humble, you're damn good at writing(at least the stories I've read) own it & be proud. -
Oh, nice story & I'm hooked already.
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Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 10 Home Is Where The Heart Is
Great story on Chet & Arron to go along with Kendall & Michael as well as Nate & Bodie. Now just need a story for poor Jeremy. Thanks again Gary for bringing more joy & pleasure to my day. -
Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 63 A Brilliant Move
Jeez what to read next? Maybe Song & Dance with Chet. Hopefully soon we'll get more on this story. -
Chapter 62 An Ace up his Sleeve
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 62 An Ace up his Sleeve
Ah, this chapter brought back alot of memories for me as well. Most of them great, but the bad ones too. -
Oh, damn only 2 more chapters left. I'm so disappointed now. What will I read now? I'm kinda upset with myself for even starting this story cause it's not complete. I've been trying to read stories that are completed only. I'm not a patient person when it comes to reading a great book or stories. As I was reading other stories I kept getting notifications about this story because everyone was commenting on it because I'm following the author. Actually I wasn't going to read this story for two reasons. 1) It wasn't complete and 2) because the title had me thinking it was about poker or some other card game, but notifications kept coming. Finally I started reading some and found out it was nothing like I thought it was about. Then after reading that 1st chapter I was hooked. In my opinion if I get hooked in the first chapter the its worth reading. Thanks Again, Gary for being good at story writing. I'll be patiently waiting for the rest. No Rush
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Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
Oh, Gary don't get me wrong, I have something about every chapter I Loved. Just this chapter had a little of every emotion to it. The others have the emotions, just not all of like this one did. Overall this is probably one of the best stories on this site if not the best. At least in my opinion. -
Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 54 Respecting the Rules of the Game
Damn why can't I have the Love this family has for each other. There is so much Love in this story, it makes me yearn for the Love. -
Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 53 Two Winning Hands
I completely loved this chapter the best so far I have to admit. It had everything in it. Honesty, caring, trust, Love, and humor most of it. I think I laughed through 90 % of it. Great Job Gary. -
Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
You have done a great with thid story, and a few others I have read of yours. You could be my next great author. You'll be right up there with Stephen King. Let me know if any turn into a movie or TV show. I like to praise people when they do great. So enjoy the praise. -
Chapter 49 The Big Reveal
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 49 The Big Reveal
Another Great Chapter. God where was my Uncle Kendall when I was Nates age. Michael is a great Uncle as well but Kendall relates more to Nate more because he went through the same thing and that is gonna help Nate. -
Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 48 A New Player at the Table
Love this chapter. Although I'm getting a little sad knowing I'm getting closer to chapter 63 and so much to still cover and hoping it all gets covered. Moving into the house, Nate & Bodie at school & will they have a relationship, Kendall's parents moving in, Megan & Mark moving back & will they live near Markam so Nate doesn't have to change schools, will Jeremy ever get to work out with Michael & Kendall @ the gym? Will Jeremy ever find a man? The babies birth. So much to cover & I'm feeling like it's not all gonna be giving enough detail and coverage. I can see this story going on for awhile. It's already feeling like the last few chapters getting shorter. Anyhow enough and keep up with the great story. This is a magnificent story. Thank-You again Headstall. -
You are very right & welcome
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Chapter 44 The Waiting Game
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 44 The Waiting Game
I'm really glad to see Nate pickin up a little, he's got a Love interest, trying to talk his Uncles into a dog. Hell I'm surprised he didn't com out and ask them if he could live there with them after meeting Bodie. I believe Kendall will end up with one of the puppies. Now as far as Megan & Mark goes I hope they both take Colleen's advice & think about the family. Even if it means moving home near family. I think it would be good for them. As far as the business, find someone to manage it or sale it. If I was in that situation I'd do one or the other. Family comes first in my book. We all know gotta work & support our families, but a business or job should not become more important than that of a negleted family or child. Another great chapter. Thank-You -
Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 42 You Can't Turn a Heart into a Diamond
This chapter made me very, very happy Thanks Kendall. Although I was really pissed at first & I'm still not sure about the black eye story, but being I can't see his eye, I have to believe. I just can't see getting a black eye from a door frame. -
Chapter 41 Not Everyone is Dealt a Good Hand
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 41 Not Everyone is Dealt a Good Hand
I Loved the Michael & Kendall sex acts, the trick Kendall played on Chet. Sometimes I really wish we could chose more than one emotion on these chapters. Although 99 percent of this chapter is Happy, the last 1 percent his unhappy & pisses me off. No child deserves to be treated like that. I don't care what color they are, there gender or sexual identity. I know it happens to much. I so wish we I here the abuse, I wish I could help these kids. I wish someone would have been there for me when I was that young (of course that was the late 70's & 80's). It saddens me so much. -
God how I'd Love to have been Kendall in this chapter.
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Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 39 A Peek at the Cards
Great Chapter, I was so waiting for a big surprise twist here as the Ultrasound would say Twins. That would have just been wonderful.😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄 -
Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
James B. commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 37 A Pair of Kings
I Love this Chapter, being Christmas and all. After all it is a magical time of the year & I for one am a believer. Now on to some really series business. When are we gonna find a man for Jeremy the poor guy needs laid.😊😊😊😊 -
I must say as much as I enjoyed the story & Loved it I felt the last few chapters rushed. Now let me say I'm no writer, I couldn't even get a paragraph down to what some authors do here. You did go into so much detail in the beginning, then the last few chapters you didn't. You should maybe do a 2nd part or rewrite from the Panda telling them they could rent the house. Mostly because you went from April to a second Christmas with out much detail. Yes they took a summer vacation, then to Emmett's parents house for Christmas. Then mentioning their trip in the Arctic. As I said I could see so much more going into this story. I will say Thank-You for writing a good story.
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Emmett get your head out of your ass & sleep with Jian. He is in Love You.
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I am truly loving this story. So much good and happiness in it, but I can't help but feel the other foot is gonna drop & tragedy is gonna pop up. Anyone feeling this way?
