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I'm thinking it may be Wyatt.
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I just Love this story, I just can't get enough.
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I'm really worried about the whole Hubbard road standing issue. Which leads me to worry this isn't over yet. He could follow them to their jobs, cars, who they visit, schools. I'm really worried about poor Ian & family as well. Maybe that's where Abernathy was.
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Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
James B. commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 118 A Long Walk on a Short Pier
This was a hard chapter for me to get through especially the end. I lost my only child (son) to suicide in 2015 he was 24. Therefore anyone and I stress to anyone get some help & think of the ones you leave behind. I never had a clue from him that he would have come to this. Get Help NATIONAL SUICIDE PREVENTION LIFELINE 1-800-273-TALK (8255) -
Ignoring the Broom in the Corner
James B. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Ignoring the Broom in the Corner
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I've got to admit it this story ended surprisingly not how I thought it. Great story & nice job. Thank-You
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As I said in the last chapter this story isn't gonna have a happy ending to it. Bad news for Hailey & no Happy Ending for Paul & Corbin. I wanna quit reading this story but I gotta see how it ends even if it is tragic.
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I'm getting a feeling this story is not gonna have a happy ending for the town of Hailey or a Happily Ever After for Corbin & Paul. 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
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(After I fed him and closed the lower door, he stuck his over the top and snorted at me.) I think you missed putting head in this sentence. Otherwise I absolutely Love this story. Thank-You
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Yeeeeeeessssssssss. I have to agree with Wesley I have been waiting for this. Looking forward to the next chapter as well & I'm sure this will be another great story.
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First off let me start by saying how much I have loved and enjoyed all 3 stories. I must say after reading this chapter it was a great way to end the trilogy. I will admit though that it still upsets me Jaime died in Velocity I don't believe it could have ended any other way. Thank-You for sharing your very enjoyable stories. Now for the mistake I found reading this chapter. Is the word I have hyphenated suppose to be run away? I would’ve (ruhyA Qn) away to join 2) FYI: I'm loving the Golden City as well.
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I'm beginning to wonder if maybe Luca isn't looking out for Corbin for some reason. Could it be he knows Stefano is looking to kill Corbin, is that why he wants Paul & Corbin at the resort. (to protect them) Could Luca be expecting trouble that weekend. This curious mind is waiting to know.
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I'm so glad no one got hurt or died during this chapter. I was worried with Sam & David's ghosts running rapid. I was also a little worried about Patrick a few times, thinking he might drop over with the boys giving them a workout. Anyway hoping everyone stays healthy & alive the Medium can get rid of those evil, evil ghosts.
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The only thing I disagree with in this chapter was the fact they kept what happened to Megan at the watermark from her parents. I'm a firm believer that honesty is the best policy. I think it would have shown all 3 sets of parents how responsible Mike & Adam are with there children, not to mention very safe.
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Photographs and Chocolate Cake
James B. commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Photographs and Chocolate Cake
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Photographs and Chocolate Cake
James B. commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Photographs and Chocolate Cake
I am so into this story & was disappointed this chapter ended so soon. I was hoping to see how dinner went. Oh well it will just keep me interested in getting to the next chapter. -
Strange Things Are Happening
James B. commented on Bill W's story chapter in Strange Things Are Happening
I kind of figured evil spirits were behind all this but not till the scratches appeared on Danny's back. Honestly I thought it was one or both of Tristan's parents because nothing happened till after he was living with the Curries. I thought they didn't like Tristan living there because they were homophobic. It was a complete surprise to find out it's Hubbard & Abernathy. Guess they figured if they could get rid of the Curries were alive they'd try when they were dead. I hope Cody, Brent and the other family spirits can help. Thank-You Graham for showing up. -
Thank-You Bill for another great chapter to a wonderful story. However I wouldn't be opposed to maybe Nicky, Jordan, Nick & Shannon show up for a Holiday. We really haven't heard from them at a Holiday Celebration at Castaway since the end of Josh's story.
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Bill Thanks for another great book on the Curries & The Castaway Hotel. I see you've already started on a third book for the Next Generation. I know I'm probably hoping to much here, but I wouldn't be to upset if The Next Generation with Danny & Brandon turned a few more books like Josh's story & then maybe see a book or two seeing Elliott & Ian take over. Again these are the best books I've ever read that weren't Stephen Kings. Thanks again
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Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
James B. commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 117 The Happy Clappers
First off: I hope the Dr.'s get there head out of there and & figure out what's wrong with Robbie. Second: I hope for Luke's sake Alex doesn't run away with him. I also hope Robbie keeps his wits about him and doesn't run away with Alex. Third: I really hope She get smart & decides see needs to accept Robbie's being gay & kicks Son's ads to the road. Great Chapter -
I wished Frankie was living closer, hell I wish all the Carrie boys (adopted) lived closer. I really miss them all. Anyhow back to the chapter. I am now worried being that a gun is involved, I'm also worried now one of those boys in that group that were harassing Ryan might be a little brother to either Sam or Grant. I hope they catch them before book 3. I'm not ready for another Carrie death. I know there's chance of this especially will Josh being up there in age. I'd rather see an accidental or natural death but not one due to murder. Keep up the great work with this story & books.
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Okay we know Grandpa Josh is in Georgia with Shannon & Nick. We also know Papa Jake had to come back for work. Where is he then? We haven't heard about him since his first night back. Doesn't he like spending time with his family at home. He has a new grandson he been around since he came back.
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What's going on at the Farms? We haven't heard about them for awhile.
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This chapter was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing between Josie & Benny. The way those two were talking about the pee-nus, nakedness, and Noah's hairy pens kept me entertained for sure. Nice job for sure with this chapter.
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I'm so glad that you decided to keep this story going. Of course I was hoping it started out happy, but life isn't always like that. I'm excited to keep going.
