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  1. Dominic C

    Chapter 9

    Thank you! for continuing this story. Kevin is one of my favorite characters ever. So real; I literally feel his pain when I read. This chapter was amazing. I love your writing, it's really exceptional. The phrase that has really stuck with me is "I had Matt and Matt had me". Will Kevin ever see Matt again? Maybe it doesn't matter; but the way that part of the story was told was shattering. it was fascinating to read that Kevin felt like it was over with Becker on that Thanksgiving visit to Colton. Totally couldn't see that from Becker's perspective. I love Kevin. Look forward to more.
  2. Dominic C

    Chapter 8

    Top notch writing. The best on this site. 🙌 I love Kevin Malley. We already know it doesn't end well with Matt, and now, given the end of this chapter, I can imagine the tearing apart of Matt and Kevin is going to be painful. You have an amazing way of making the internal psyche of Malley SO REAL. I find myself thinking about him like he was a real person in my life that I'm concerned about. I'm nervous and excited to see what unfolds for Kevin and to see how he gets folded back into the Becker story. I want him to find someone who loves him back without limit. I will be sad to see this story end. I hope you'll keep writing. If not here, let us know where to find you.
  3. The end??!! 😮 This has been a great story. I would love to see Nathan and Robbie back together; they are good for each other. Any thoughts, Dodger, of another story at some point??? Soon? Not many writers have your skill at telling stories and making us feel what the characters feel. I've truly enjoyed this.
  4. Dominic C

    Chapter 6

    I noticed you've been updating chapters. Any chance there also will be new chapters coming soon? I've been re-reading the updated chapters, and am reminded of how excellent the writing is. Really exceptional.
  5. Dominic C

    Chapter 7

    I’ve always loved Kevin more than. Becker. Outstanding writing. Awesome chapter. Can’t wait for more.
  6. Dominic C

    Falling Slowly

    How have I missed this story on GA until now? I can’t get enough. I’m reading in the middle of the night. Im reading before work in the morning. I FEEL anxious and heartbroken for Corbin, and Mike, and Pete. Incredibly real characters and storyline. It makes my heart hurt. I don’t want it to end. I hope you’re still writing. Thank you for this story.
  7. Dominic C

    Chapter 6

    I love this story and love Kevin even more than the Becker original. Please keep this going. Amazing character. I especially am impressed with how you’ve portrayed intrusive thoughts. Really well done.
  8. Ive been waiting for another chapter. Thank you! This is one of my all time favorite stories on this site. Incredible character development. I feel like I know these people. Please post again soon!
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