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eternity2rock

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  1. This was written for someone special.
  2. Secret Desire My secret desire is to hold you next to me, to touch your senses and kiss your lips. To embrace your love and take in every desire and want you have. How I long to be with you. I dream of the day when we finally are as one. Laying next to each other, our senses running wild while our hearts and souls join as one. I get this erotic feeling whenever I think of you. I feel the burning in my loins, the fire in my heart and the longing to have you in my arms. At n
  3. Branson Blood by eternity2rock Chapter 1 Changes Nyama stepped from the remains of her family’s home. With her eyes raised in desperation, she shook her fists at the sky and screamed, "Why did you take my family from me? What did I do to deserve this? It was ONE spell, one WISH!" Exhausted, Nyama collapsed amid the rubble and faded into a deep slumber. Nyama Branson was 15 years old. The Bransons came from a long blood line. Aunts, uncles
  4. We sat under a tree, letting the warm sun caress our faces. Fall was in full swing and this would be one of the last warm days of the year. I picked up a fallen leaf from the cool green grass and turned to her. "This was the best day of my life" I said, as I brushed the long hair from her face. "Close your eyes and make a wish." I closed my eyes as well, my mind flooding with thoughts; this day, her smile and the happiness we had shared. I opened my eyes just in time to see her blow on th
  5. Hey there knotme...i actaully wassss going to write other parts to this story..but it wont happen any time soon...im working on other things..so in the mean time i will answer your questions.lol and sorry im so late on this posting.. * the narrator is male *the necklace was in the family. there was an unspoken understanding (that i guess wasnt so clear.lol) that all of the kin of jacob had this necklace in the family. the necklace was a cherrished heirloom that the men would give to the "one they loved". *the wall was part of the story that was in a dream like state. it moved the character from reality...then to a dream state and back to another state of reality. *the house is fam. and inviting because THAT house was in the family. The kin of jacob will actaully go through this every ten years untill the finally kin "dies" ending the saga. *he gets dizzy going up the stairs because of all the energy in the house...its a ghost story and their are soon ghosts present in the house. (its just a reaction of all that) *Williams and Donahue are actually kin of Jacob. Another unsaid point that would of been found out in a sequel is that Williams is acatully Jacob Williams. The first of the men..Williams was the one whom acatully was the unfaithful man in the story...Jacob. so the sisters are related to the men...because Williams(jacob williams) was the first guy who was unfaithful to Sarah. the other men are KIN and have to go through this family curse. (if that makes sense. if not..i will try to explain that again) The four places on the plaque are for the four men..Williams, Donahue, Davidson and ? (we find out in a later story). *Im not sure why i chose ten year intervals, i guess because i kinda wanted the story in somewhat of a believeable time line and that would be how long it would take for this "curse" to go through. When you said this "how the kin are discussed collectively, as if they share one sole and suffer their fate as one" you were actaully right...not anal at all Take care and hope that helped!
  6. I'll give it a go...lmao Ummmmm serious question here..does it have to be PG-13?lol
  7. I actaully signed up for the nano site by the insisting of my best friend whom is doing it this year. My writing is immature..at best.lol but I agreed as a moral support for her. For me, it will just be for fun, and the main thing i want to get out of this is the ideas that i have within me, since i have just begun to let people read my ideas. Just my thoughts on this...
  8. Thanks for all the nice comments. This was a fun piece to do. I appreciate all the feedback that i have gotten. Happy Halloween/Samhain all!
  9. yep..actaully i do and i can cook a mean one as well. the person below me want to take a journey soon...
  10. Kevin...i have myspace as well...and was concerned at to leaving my real name on the site. All i did to fix that was use an email account as my first and last name..and yes there is privacy settings on there such as you getting notified before anyone can post things on your site. If you need any help with that, i would be glad to see if i can help..take care
  11. lol If i HAD seen that movie..would it be hilarious??? lol The person below me thinks that time well spent, is time spent well..........
  12. Hi mEis. Welcome..I am a newbie as well... As for my scedule..well..I work night shift 7p-7a for three days and so my scedule while i work is get home in the a.m. sleep till 3p, shower..have coffee!!, make dinner, spend time with my kids..and then off to work. If its my days off...well my body is still on night shift time (been working that shift for 15 yrs) and so my routine is about the same excpet instead of work..i spend my time reading writing and as of late..spending most of that time on this site..which i love by the way!
  13. I have read many types of peotry in the last few years. I love reading about anything and everything..I have read a few authors here on the site..and was truely amazed (and still am! lol) at the talent here. I truely enjoy reading it all.I write poetry as well..but im still very immautre with my writing of poetry..i hope someday that i will be as great as some of the authors that i have read.
  14. Wouldnt that be nice to not WANT to do anything for a day? But all this packing wont do itself.lol The person below me...needs a vacation!
  15. Hello. I'm very new here and would love any help i can get from this site...(it took me ten mins to figure out how to post.lol :wacko: ) Have an awsome day all!
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