Graeme
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I wonder what happened to him that resulted in him becoming a prostitute. He clearly wants to get out of the trade, but he also needs the money.
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Marc is stalkerish, but Will understands that. He's a grown man; he can make his own decisions.
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Ah ha! Now the light dawns. Bruce has surreptitiously bought stock in the company Avery-Woods is planning on buying, and now he's going to drive up the purchase price so he makes more money. Flagrant insider-trading, and highly illegal. Will he get caught, though, that's the question...
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Corporate intrigue... I wonder what Bruce needs those files for?
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Hmm...Tyrone is forgiving, but only to a degree. Is hurting Libbet the reason why Marc thought Tyrone would beat him up, or is there more to it?
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I love that last line Classic Will.
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And Will once again shows his loyalty to his friends, and Brody, with his humiliation of Jared with Colleen, shows why he's not deserving of that loyalty. Brody can be a good friend, but he's also callous with his friends.
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That opening scene is worrying. It looks there's going to be an attempted board takeover ar Avery-Wood.
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More questions than answers. For some reason, Marc reminds me of Brody. Maybe it's the ease with which he talks to strangers. Oh, and Will still can't say no to his friends.
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Marc needs help, and I'm glad Daniel recognised that. Now to find out what happened to him...
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An intriguing start. I wonder where it'll go from here.
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Remember, he was exhausted at the time. He probably said things he didn't really mean when he found himself unexpectedly under pressure. Will had spoken to Lisa about looking for a new job with her company, but Will wasn't in a fit state at the time he spoke to Mr. Avery. As for Brody, I wouldn't trust him to find Will a job, especially after the way he drugged Will on Jeff's bachelor night out.
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Well, now we know what happened. Scott made a bad call and threw Will under the bus when he was called on it. Will told senior management his story, but it's his word against Scott's unless Brad backs him up. I don't see that happening...
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I found that to be beautiful. Brody is a maestro of manipulation, setting things up for Will. Will in turn, has finally said enough is enough. It's his turn to be put first, and now Andrew has to decide what to do.
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I enjoyed the best man's speech, but it read a bid dry without the audience reactions. I'm assuming there was a lot of laughter at the appropriate points, along with glares from Lisa... But then we had the ending. Will has been up with no sleep for over 36 hours, probably, so I don't blame him for giving up on Andrew without giving him a chance to explain. It's sad, but understandable...
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The calm before the storm, but I have to love Will in this chapter. He did everything just right.. It's sad that everyone seems to take advantage of him without adequate acknowledgement of what he does.
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The opening scene on the plane indicates nothing happened, but he knows it looked bad.
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Will is really showing his stoic personality while hiding the pain inside. It's not going to be pretty when the pain erupts. I once had a boss who would call people in on their days off. My solution was to leave the country when I went on vacation so I wouldn't be contactable.
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Everything goes wrong at the same time. Do Brody and Andrew really not understand why Will got on that plane?
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I'm sorry, but what they did to Will was sexual assault. Drugging him was over the line. This was way past that line. The funny thing is the reason Will gave for leaving the country wasn't what had been done to him, but because work reassigned him. He broke, but it was at work, and the reassignment was the price. The traditional stoic Englishman remained, though, and he continued on, as instructed.
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I laughed at the start, as that was classic Brody, but drugging Will crossed a line. What they're doing to Jeff is juvenile, but barely acceptable...maybe
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Okay, this may not be as bad as I feared...
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While the thought is good, Will is not in the right mindset to plan a party and Brody is never in the right mindset to plan a party that won't destroy Jeff's relationship with Lisa. This isn't going to end well...
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Life is conspiring to make Will's life hell. When that happens, it's not unusual for the victim to start seeing things that aren't there, interpreting things in the worst possible light, and generally fueling the whirlpool of depression even more...
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Andrew needs a good sit down conversation with Will. Somewhere where they're forced to talk to each other, such as on a plane over the Atlantic...
