Danilo Syrtis
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Hum, why don’t they hire some nurse or Dev-sitter for a couple of hours each day ? 🤣 I’m sure Luella would do that gladly 🤣 Honestly, it is not only Dev’s arm that the branch fell on, but also on his head : speeding healing, when the doctor was so suspicious ! He wasn’t that dumb in the previous chapters 😆 Suggesting the grandparents to take their wife’s names in the future to avoid suspicions is a really great idea ! Excellent chapter 👍
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May be not a device to erase memories, but a device that can clean Dev’s blood (at least the animal’s things) before it is analysed 😬 During their whole life, Jacob and Isaac should have encountered similar situations, so they must have thought some ways to avoid such suspicions 🤔
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Wow this chapter must have needed some researches from you ! Especially things about the blood 😄 Hope the doctor won’t have more suspicions ! LOL about Ma, Chineses have a saying : « 1 year to give birth to a child, one hundred year of worries » (or something like that 😆) Excellent chapter 👍
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I was also worried about Dev’s abilities to transition. However, it’s good that nothing heavy happened. hmm too bad that transition abilities didn’t include enhanced healing 😬 Great chapter 👍
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I guess they were so into their game that they didn’t see the danger. Beside, since there was nobody around, they lowered their awareness of potential dangers. ☹️
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Same like @drpaladin, I thought the accident would be on the highway and that they are going to be Good Samaritan again 😆 Great chapter 👍
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I think we all have in our family or neighbourhood someone with dementia or Alzheimer ☹️ My neighbour passed a couple months ago and he had Alzheimer. Very difficult to live for his wive and daughters : he sometimes go out and the whole family had to go looking for him 🙈 Hmm I think Annie is the mirror of our @kbois 😆 Funny there was no habanero or other peanut butter drinks for the adults 😂 Btw, when are we getting the story about the Sentinels ?
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LOL, I wanted to say so but you said it before me 😂
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What ? Mac used a bottle or « vinaigrette » instead of doing it himself ? So disappointing ! 😆 Vinaigrette is absolutely a must for salads. Easier to do than slicing cucumbers. For example, the basic for tomatoes slices : you mix 2-4 spoons of olive oil with 1 spoon of balsamic vinegar. 😋 Hmm Mac should put a small side pot of maple syrup for everyone instead of the big bottle if he wanted to do things right 😂 So romantic, Dev’s proposal ! Excellent chapter 👍
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Food, food, food, so many food ! 😄 Foodish (and not foolish 😆) chapter 👍
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Yes that often happens with family or friends gatherings ! 😆 I will give you a tip : when everyone’s arguing about who is going to pay, pretend to go to toilets (or do something else) and then go pay directly 😉. That’s what my sister always do and she often win 🤣
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I love the xmas gifts Mac bought to Dev 😃 Great chapter 👍
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I’m sure Preston will buy a xmas gift to Bailey so she may forget a little bit Bear 😬 Great chapter 👍
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Could skinwalkers add 2 more hands, like Shiva, to carry more bags faster ? 😆 Great chapter 👍
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Hmm one day, Mac will make a mistake with his lies to Preston 😆 Great chapter 👍
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I love eating 😋 Besides, when you live in Paris, you can taste lot of different countries’ cooking 🤗 And don’t forget that France is famous for the cookers 😉
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Well I hope the small dog will give some very smelling 💩 Added to the skunks’ gifts, Cruella will be cursing all animals 😂 Gnocchi you said ? Well, I will tell you Cannelloni, bugatini, fettuccini, tagliatelle, fusilli, tortellini, farfalle, linguini, capellini, penne (my favourite),… 😋😋😋 great chapter 👍
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I was thinking that it wasn’t really wise to point the robbers to Barry. With all what happened previously, Barry would really start having doubts about Dev and Mac abilities 😁 great chapter 👍
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Oh can’t wait for the next chapter ! Robbers vs skinwalkers 😁 And the evil skinwalker vs grandpas ? Will they find him ? Great chapter 👍
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Humm is Barry finally going to find Dev and Mac’s ability ? And what about Ralph ? Is he going to be a issue for our guys ? 🤨 Looking forward the next chapter 😀 Great chapter 👍
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I had the impression when they encountered the tornado, that they are going to rescue someone 😬 Do you give names to tornadoes ? Si yes, then they should name this one Louella 🤪 Great chapter 👍
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I was thinking that Dev was going to transition into some bigger gator 😆 Well, that was simpler 😁 Glad nothing bad happened. Great chapter 👍
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Don’t blame your phone when you are drinking 🤣
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I think that Ben will always associate the room to one of Disney activities 😂 He will rewind this holidays during a couple of weeks, if not more 🤣 Excellent chapter 👍
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Dev (and Mac) can’t really stop helping 😁 Ben seems to be very very unshy 😂 Great chapter 👍
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