Danilo Syrtis
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So it was only the caretaker ! 😆 I think Mac did the right thing to scare the boys or they might come back ! 🫣 LOL anyone would think the student’s idea is a foolish idea, but not Dev. now he is decided to be more careful : good thing 🙂 great chapter 👍
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I agree : Dev must have taken example on Gramp and Pop 😁 But he is less experienced in doing it 😄 LOL another cliff at the end of chapter 🤪 Excellent chapter 👍
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I was thinking : this is an uneventful chapter, until I reached the end 😁 So are they going to rescue that woman ? Who is she and who are the guy ? Who might be killed ? Someone related to the woman ? Did the woman belong to some government department ? Rich people ? So many possibilities 😆 Well looking forward the next chapter ! Excellent chapter 👍
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LOL great prank from Dev. Mac is going to be suspicious about everyone now if he doesn’t see Dev around 😂 great chapter 👍
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Wow, so many things happening in this chapter ! Starts with fun and may be love, ends with dramatic betrayal and may be separation (for the moment, I hope) 🙊 awesome chapter 👍
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Didn’t know that Dev could still grow : I thought he passed the growing age 😄 But I understand him : I was myself bullied because I had better grade by other bigger children. Sweet chapter 👍
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Another strange thing happening in the fox clan vineyard involving fox blood. A very « hot » shower with golden dust 😄 Interesting chapter 👍
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🤣 they should repeat it a few more times excellent chapter 👍
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Hmm Devin’s hulk is getting too much attention 🙈 May be he should try another appearance ? 🤔 Anyway, he need to be very careful next time Gramps seems to love playing Santa 😄 excellent chapter 👍
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Cats lover !! 😂
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He is her loveable dog
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Peaceful Halloween except for Luella 😆 I agreed she must have scared all the children coming for treats during Halloween. Well hope the skunk smell will be there for weeks 😄. Mac and Dev should renew the smell from time to time. 😂 Excellent chapter 👍
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Axel is so naive ! But so cute 😆 we now know more about Jeha’s family 🙂 btw you should have named Rapture « Moon Walk » (like Moon Wook) 😂 awesome chapter ! 👍
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There should be a law to forbid nosy neighbors 😄 Hmm wonder if Preston will find the truth 😝 Dev is taking lots of risks ! Excellent chapter 👍
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Yes helping cleaning after a « party » is not always in everyone’s mind. I’m glad Dev & Mac got good manners 🙂 great chapter 👍
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@weinerdog may be short on legs, but he jumps fast 😆
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@drpaladin : is it your little brother ? 😆
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How did you know Devin didn’t make that « something else » bigger ? 😂 I think he mentioned it in a previous chapter though I’m not sure 😆 I’m sure you would make your legs longer 😄 (including your fifth leg 🤣)
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Poor Bailey ! Anyway, it ends happily with Bailey rescued 🙂 excellent chapter 👍
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Neil Patrick Harris ? Good choice 😄 he is getting more handsome every year ❤️ Mac and Dev need to be very careful with all the friends they make ! Excellent chapter 👍
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Dev and Mac could say to Luella that the dogs are there because they take the dogs with them when they come and not there when they go away 😄 so that’s why she can’t see them when they aren’t there. I wonder why the grandpas didn’t add a dog door, or a very small opening for small animals (like snakes 😆) The boys can also transition into bugs to go out then transition from bugs to dog 😉 Excellent chapter 👍
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I love the idea ! 😂
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I peel grapes LOL … sometimes 😆 Question : if Sazama was twenty-three when his brother died, how can he be thirty-seven thirty years after ? 🤔 Love at the first sight ? 😄 Excellent chapter 👍
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Thx 😃 and happy valentine 💌 for tomorrow 🙂 and btw you was right : « (water) closet » is also an emergency room when you need to empty your bladder 😂
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She would be shocked to discover a « gay » JTT😂
