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  1. markM

    Chapter 1

    What in the heck happened to Kit and Tom? Or did I miss something?
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    Chapter 7

    I rest my case.
  3. markM

    Chapter 5

    Kit is 18 years old and both dads are treating him like a kid. They expect him to let go of his dreams this summer to pacify his family. It doesn't sound fair or respectful to me, especially sense he's a great kid. Besides, it's wrong to put that type of pressure on an 18-year-old. It's not his Job at his age. Not good parenting.
  4. I'm sorry, but I was a little disappointed at the end of this story. As I'm reading, I have expectations about the characters and what I hope will happen to them. It seemed like it was going along great then all off a sudden they break up the band and the story's over. It was kind of abrupt. I'm a happy ending type person, and even though in the long run, everyone had a happy life in the end, this story did not have a happy ending. I do think that you are a very good writer. It was easy to fall in love with your boys.
  5. markM

    What Goes Up….

    Things are to dang easy for the bad guys. Everything seems to fall in place for them. How convenient.
  6. Dang, don't you think Trever has had enough? The poor kid has been tortured through this whole book. Let him at least catch a breath. Dang! Lol.
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    Allies and Enemies

    I like Loren too, He's one of my favorite characters.
  8. markM

    Political Party

    Again, I'm surprised by CJ's attitude. He is calling republicans hypercritical when ... and I hate to say it, he shows that he's hypercritical himself. He wants everyone to forget about their believes and feelings about his political way of thinking. But he doesn't give the same courtesy to others who dare to think different than he does. Hey, I understand where he's coming from, I think on the same lines as he does ... mostly, but if you want respect, by gosh you better show it in return and that mean to people you don't like. Rubio so far hasn't said anything negative about Cj personally, he only talks about his beliefs. Cj is personally attacking Rubio.
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    Animal Party

    It kind of upsets me that CJ can't show a little patience and compassion for his mother-in-law. Cj demands respect from others, he needs to show the same to others himself. I could understand his behavior if she was a mean old hag, but she has mental issues, and he should act accordingly.
  10. markM

    Hunting Season

    I wondered where this story was hiding. I thought I missed it when it was mentioned on the slide in your previous books. Now it makes sense.
  11. markM

    Happy Anniversary

    Well, going by your statement, I was right to worry about if you would understand my view. What you said had nothing to do with what I was trying to explain to you. That was my fault, and I apologize.
  12. markM

    Happy Anniversary

    Aauuuh! How am I going to word this so you can understand? Okay, so ... Do you remember when I said my favorite part of this story is the "team," and the bond the 5 guys have for each other? Well. I'm not feeling it any longer. I know a lot has happened in their lives that changed that bond, but after two or three years of being back together, I was hoping that bond would start coming back to the "team." It hasn't, and this chapter just proved that. They don't rely on each other, they keep secrets from each other, and their spouses. Alex chose Tyler as his best-man, not one of the "team." It seems like they are drifting further apart. I wish I could see that bond come back. I miss it. Note: I understand why Alex picked Tyler as his best man, and I'm totally fine with it. I used it to prove a point.
  13. markM

    Chapter 33

    My heart is shattered and broken. I am grieving for Alex. Gosh, this was a hard chapter to read. I can't imagine how it was for you to write. I just hope for you that it wasn't written from experience. This was a well written chapter that honors all of our service men and woman fighting for our country.
  14. markM

    Chapter 32

    Dang J, it seem like with every chapter you're making me cry. first with sad tears, and then happy tears, then back to sad. What a wild roller-coaster of emotions you've got me on. could you slow down a bit. Lol.
  15. markM

    Chapter 27

    J, great wedding. You had me crying along with Tyler. Lol. The best part was seeing it through Tyler's eyes. I thought that was appropriate. YES!!! Tyler and Sean are finally together. They both deserves happiness, and I hope they both find the same love that Kyle and Jacob share. I'm looking forward to hearing Sean's story. Why is a good-looking rich kid who seems to have everything working as a carpenter in the middle of nowhere Pa? It sounds like he likes the simpler life of a small town ... and well, Tyler is there too. Lol.
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