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What in the heck happened to Kit and Tom? Or did I miss something?

I rest my case.

Kit is 18 years old and both dads are treating him like a kid. They expect him to let go of his dreams this summer to pacify his family. It doesn't sound fair or respectful to me, especially sense he's a great kid. Besides, it's wrong to put that type of pressure on an 18-year-old. It's not his Job at his age. Not good parenting.

I'm sorry, but I was a little disappointed at the end of this story. As I'm reading, I have expectations about the characters and what I hope will happen to them. It seemed like it was going along great then all off a sudden they break up the band and the story's over. It was kind of abrupt. I'm a happy ending type person, and even though in the long run, everyone had a happy life in the end, this story did not have a happy ending. I do think that you are a very good writer. It was easy to fall in love with your boys.

Things are to dang easy for the bad guys. Everything seems to fall in place for them. How convenient.

Dang, don't you think Trever has had enough? The poor kid has been tortured through this whole book. Let him at least catch a breath. Dang! Lol.

I like Loren too, He's one of my favorite characters.

Again, I'm surprised by CJ's attitude. He is calling republicans hypercritical when ... and I hate to say it, he shows that he's hypercritical himself. He wants everyone to forget about their believes and feelings about his political way of thinking. But he doesn't give the same courtesy to others who dare to think different than he does. Hey, I understand where he's coming from, I think on the same lines as he does ... mostly, but if you want respect, by gosh you better show it in return and that mean to people you don't like. Rubio so far hasn't said anything negative about Cj personally, he only talks about his beliefs. Cj is personally attacking Rubio.

It kind of upsets me that CJ can't show a little patience and compassion for his mother-in-law. Cj demands respect from others, he needs to show the same to others himself. I could understand his behavior if she was a mean old hag, but she has mental issues, and he should act accordingly.

I wondered where this story was hiding. I thought I missed it when it was mentioned on the slide in your previous books. Now it makes sense.

Wow, I found a tear running down my cheek when I finished this chapter knowing that Jamie and Iona are coming to visit with their little wee ones. Is it me, or does it seem like once you start getting right in that groove of reading ... You know when you're getting into the story and it starting to get really good, then you get on that reading high, where it makes so happy you never want it to end, and then BAM! Chapter Over!!! It makes you want to scream, NOooo!! Then you are left feeling heart broken thinking you got ripped off some how? Yea, well this chapter had that written all over it. Thanks for that little nugget of emotion today Andre, I appreciate that. Lol. Your attention to detail still amazes me Andre, because when you describe something be it a character, place or thing, I can visualize it with clarity. But what makes it so effective is that it ties in with my own experiences to where your word comes to life. Beautiful chapter Andre.

It's time to start a new chapter in the Devlin-Major's lives. Just think of all the fun they'll have running after four children. Lol. Oh! If you mentioned it, I missed it. But what are the last names of James and Fiona? Are they going to take the names of the dads? Okay! I know it's none of my business at this point. but it never hurt to ask. Lol.

Well written. I'm amazed by your ability to write in detail with only a few words. Andre, I saw your love for the characters in this chapter. It was evident by the care you bestowed to each and every person. You gave them grace and respect giving special attention to their feelings. Bravo to you.

I'm sitting here with a pile tissue-paper wiping my eyes, blowing snot-bubbles with a broken heart. I'm a mess. Thanks for that by the way. Lol. Damn! that was a hard ... Hard ... HARD! chapter to read. Andre! You killed off the moms? Not the moms! I am so crushed. I cried through this whole chapter. And I'm going to say it, for the first time reading your stories, I'm not looking forward to the next chapter. I know what coming in the next chapter and it will not be pretty here at my end of the computer. It will be more snot-bubbles and another pile of tissue-paper. Again, thanks for that. Lol. The family's support group is getting smaller. First you banished the Mason's to the other side of the world in Canada. And now you offed the moms. I hope nothing will happen to Ryan's mom or should I say mum and dad. Okay Mark, take a deep breath. Breathe in your nose and out of your mouth. Yea, so, great job so far Andre. The family have to deal with life, and sometimes life will make you face the death of a loved one. It's hard, but it happens. It's sad when a child is thrown into those harsh realities at a young age, especially losing a parent or two in this case. Although I'm not looking forward to the hard chapter ahead, I'm excited for the two new addition to the family unit as a whole. I also can't wait to see how you lase them in with the rest of the family, showing us new personalities that will only enhance this book.

"Methinks she cleans up real good", he said in a dreadful American accent." Andre! Andre. Andre ... What you just said. I resemble that remark. Lol. What do you think, that we all talk like the "Beverly Hillbillies?" Opps, scratch that I live in the same hills as the "Beverly Hillbillies." Dang! But I beens to them theres big collages and got meself a eduman-cation. And I's talks much better now. I dos. Lol. No, here in the Ozark Hills, only three-year-olds use "methinks." And as for "real good," well you've got me by the balls there. Lol. But we usually say "real well." I've listened to myself talk for a long time and I have yet heard an accent slip from my mouth. Not once. And that theres a fact. It is.